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[Centauri2002]

JiGsAw2453 wrote...

Sounds good They're not up yet, Because I haven't really done much, I started like an hour ago :L...

I'll put the first chapter up soon... It will be posted to www.trulyinfamouspro.co.uk (My website)... but I'll just post a link to the direct page on here
 
Yeah my English teacher is awesome, she just said I could write a story for my Original Writing... Apparently that includes Fan-Fiction :L

Righto, I'll keep an eye out for the link here then.

You have a very generous teacher indeed!

[JiGsAw2453]

centauri2002 wrote...

JiGsAw2453 wrote...

Sounds good They're not up yet, Because I haven't really done much, I started like an hour ago :L...

I'll put the first chapter up soon... It will be posted to www.trulyinfamouspro.co.uk (My website)... but I'll just post a link to the direct page on here
 
Yeah my English teacher is awesome, she just said I could write a story for my Original Writing... Apparently that includes Fan-Fiction :L

Righto, I'll keep an eye out for the link here then.

You have a very generous teacher indeed!

It's awesome becuase I basically get marked on a story which I was going to make anyway :L

Modifié par JiGsAw2453, 27 mars 2011 - 03:38 .

[JiGsAw2453]

Just finished the Liara Tribute video, I will upload it to my YouTube Channel sometime tomorrow

[jlb524]

That's cool!

Speaking of vids, here's an incredibly awesome one featuring Liara.

Or just check out the thread.

[thebrute7]

 Here's a link to my M!Shep/Liara fanfic.  Haven't gotten to Liara yet but I will actually be introducing her in teh next chapter.

Darkness Rising

I would love feedback, especially once I get to more Liara bits.

[IndigoWolfe]

@thebrute7

Sure, I'll give it a read!

[Mithran88]

JiGsAw2453 wrote...

Just finished the Liara Tribute video, I will upload it to my YouTube Channel sometime tomorrow

Sounds good, I look forward to it!

[Cypher0020]

Hallo Liara fans! Getting ready to replay my ME2 file in preparation for whenever I can play Arrival when it drops

Also.... does anyone thing that Lenny Kravitz's I'll Be Waiting is a pretty good Liara/Shep song?

[Robhuzz]

Cypher0020 wrote...

Hallo Liara fans! Getting ready to replay my ME2 file in preparation for whenever I can play Arrival when it drops

Also.... does anyone thing that Lenny Kravitz's I'll Be Waiting is a pretty good Liara/Shep song?

It pretty much depends on the moment. I've always thought the chorus part of 'anna' by Toto is a great song when watching certain parts where Liara won't allow herself to reaffirm her romance with Shepard. Eg after the kiss when she and Shepard meet on Illium, as well as right after the fight with Vasir and more or less after the fight with the Shadow broker (but before the paragon interrupt)

Check it out sometime, the part I'm talking about starts with "Even if you turn and walk away..."

Modifié par Robhuzz, 28 mars 2011 - 07:23 .

[JiGsAw2453]

The Liara Tribute video is uploading now...

Keep an eye on my YouTube Channel

If there are things you don't like, or things you want me to add or change, please let me know... And I will do it, I could of added more, but the video is already 5 mins long :L... Please Enjoy! (and Subscribe ).

The Tribute video should be uploaded in a couple of hours (It is taking a strangely long time), in the meanwhile, you could check out my other videos

Modifié par JiGsAw2453, 28 mars 2011 - 09:21 .

[Centauri2002]

Anyone else think that writing detailed FemShep/Liara interaction scenes is a bit tricky? The particular one I'm doing is giving me a headache. The sentence structure is being a pain since I can't use the normal terms I would use writing female/female interaction. Damn alien ladies. >.>

[jlb524]

Fiddles_stix wrote...

And just a question in general. Is there an Ali Hillis fan club on these forums considering there's a Jen Hale one?

Not that I'm aware of....you could make one, if you want

[jlb524]

centauri2002 wrote...

Anyone else think that writing detailed FemShep/Liara interaction scenes is a bit tricky? The particular one I'm doing is giving me a headache. The sentence structure is being a pain since I can't use the normal terms I would use writing female/female interaction. Damn alien ladies. >.>

Hmmm...not really.

Though, I'm not sure what specific type of interaction you are referring to.

[Centauri2002]

jlb524 wrote...

Hmmm...not really.

Though, I'm not sure what specific type of interaction you are referring to.

It's different from what I usually write so I'm outside my comfort zone. No oft-used terms for me. The scene I'm referring to in particular is focusing on their bonding. I'm always hyper aware of how often I use phrases like "the other woman" (which I can't even use here) and their names in context to object and subject in a sentence. Use them too much and it stands out, don't use them enough and the sentence can become confusing.

[jlb524]

centauri2002 wrote...

It's different from what I usually write so I'm outside my comfort zone. No oft-used terms for me. The scene I'm referring to in particular is focusing on their bonding. I'm always hyper aware of how often I use phrases like "the other woman" (which I can't even use here) and their names in context to object and subject in a sentence. Use them too much and it stands out, don't use them enough and the sentence can become confusing.

I often use phrases like, "the asari" or "the human woman" to differentiate between the two.  Make use of the fact they are from different species.

Fiddles_stix wrote...

Is there a lot of work involved in
starting and maintaining a group? Blatant freeloading aside, just want
to know what I could be in for.

Not really....it all depends on what you want from it and how active it is.  Starting one is really easy..you just need a cool title and a nice group pic. 

Modifié par jlb524, 28 mars 2011 - 09:41 .

[Centauri2002]

jlb524 wrote...

I often use phrases like, "the asari" or "the human woman" to differentiate between the two.  Make use of the fact they are from different species.

Aye, that's what I've been doing but it also seems a little formal for such an intimate scene. Also, they tend to pop up quite often in a 5k word scene. Perhaps I'm overthinking it. Anyway, I appreciate the suggestions. :3

[jlb524]

centauri2002 wrote...

jlb524 wrote...

I often use phrases like, "the asari" or "the human woman" to differentiate between the two.  Make use of the fact they are from different species.

Aye, that's what I've been doing but it also seems a little formal for such an intimate scene. Also, they tend to pop up quite often in a 5k word scene. Perhaps I'm overthinking it. Anyway, I appreciate the suggestions. :3

No problem.  I guess you could get more colorful with the descriptors ("blue-skinned beauty") but I'm not sure if that would fit either

Is your work published yet or is this your first time writing Shep/Liara?

[TheMarshal]

You could try to change perspectives a little. Adopt Shepard's or Liara's perspective, and then it simply becomes 'her/she' vs. 'my/I'. You don't even have to do it from first-person perspective, just assume that the narrator has perfect knowledge of one of them (what they're thinking, feeling, etc.) and 'speaks' for them.

[Centauri2002]

jlb524 wrote...

No problem.  I guess you could get more colorful with the descriptors ("blue-skinned beauty") but I'm not sure if that would fit either

Is your work published yet or is this your first time writing Shep/Liara?

I'm writing solely from Liara's point of view (I think I made a rod for my own back there) and I'm using a close third-person narrative so I probably wouldn't use that descriptor for her in this story. Perhaps if it was from Shepard's point of view.

This will be my first Shep/Liara and probably my only one. I have fiction published in other fandoms but I've not had the time to write in the past year or so. Shep/Liara compelled me though. >.>

TheMarshal wrote...

You could try to change perspectives a little. Adopt Shepard's or Liara's perspective, and then it simply becomes 'her/she' vs. 'my/I'. You don't even have to do it from first-person perspective, just assume that the narrator has perfect knowledge of one of them (what they're thinking, feeling, etc.) and 'speaks' for them.

As I mentioned above, I was silly and decided to limit myself to a Liara-centric fiction. I wish I'd given myself a little more scope now but I shall persevere! If I ever do write another, I think I'll probably use a changing perspective style. Thank you for the advice.

Modifié par centauri2002, 28 mars 2011 - 09:56 .

[Drake_Hound]

Simple wanted both Ashley and Liara , Ashley walked out , Liara stayed , she won ... done deal .
The grin on male Shepard face always make me laugh , when i pick that option .
Best acting ever

[JiGsAw2453]

Fiddles_stix wrote...

Yay! Thanks JiGsAw. Any word on your fanfic?

Still haven't really done a lot (like 2 pages :L)... I have been concentrating on my videos, but I'm gonna take a break from them for a few days and focus on my writing... It's just so tempting, I'm laying in bed and then I think of a new idea for a Mass Effect video :L... I'm gonna do a few more Liara videos (tributes mainly). I'm also going to do a parody.. I have so many Mass Effect quotes and I love syncing it with the Mass Effect music (I have done that with my Liara tribute too)... So hopefully in a few days I can post the first chapter of my Fanfiction !

Modifié par JiGsAw2453, 28 mars 2011 - 11:00 .

[Centauri2002]

JiGsAw2453 wrote...
Still haven't really done a lot (like 2 pages :L)... I have been concentrating on my videos, but I'm gonna take a break from them for a few days and focus on my writing... It's just so tempting, I'm laying in bed and then I think of a new idea for a Mass Effect video :L... I'm gonna do a few more Liara videos (tributes mainly). I'm also going to do a parody.. I have so many Mass Effect quotes and I love syncing it with the Mass Effect music (I have done that with my Liara tribute too)... So hopefully in a few days I can post the first chapter of my Fanfiction !

Why not write your ideas down? That way you can come back to them later when you can put aside time to work on them. I have my li'l black book o' story ideas for my original fiction. Heck, I have a second one now due to the other being filled. I may never use them but they're there. :3

[TheMarshal]

centauri2002 wrote...

Why not write your ideas down? That way you can come back to them later when you can put aside time to work on them. I have my li'l black book o' story ideas for my original fiction. Heck, I have a second one now due to the other being filled. I may never use them but they're there. :3

I wrestle with a lot of ideas while I'm working on one story (A Good Night has been on the backburner for more than a month now 'cause I kept getting sidetracked with the 6+ other stories I've got kicking around), and I've been thinking about doing something like this.  What do you write down when you're trying to get the idea out of your head and onto paper?  A general summary?  Major plot points?  Key scenes?  Character sketches?