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[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

kumquats wrote...

I'm not worried about Vasir. She took a hostage and wanted to kill Mariana, if that's not bad I don't know what is. And of course the attempted Murder of Liara. It should be more then possible to compare the bullets from the crimescene to Vasirs weapon. It's your duty as a Spectre to kill her.

Killing 300000 Batarians for no reason, because everybody is denieing the existence of Reapers. That's a whole different story. For one, It's the perfect excuse for the Batarians to go to war against humans.

The council is corrupt, I think one of the cerberus daily news mentioned Vasir being sendt out on a mission to kill several Volus who leaked some rather inconvient information regarding Citadel economy. Who is to say they don't withhold some information or outright change it to paint Shepard in a bad way.

[Robhuzz]

Lizardviking wrote...

centauri2002 wrote...

Lizardviking wrote...

Does anyone else wonder if Vasir's death will be brought up in the (possible) trial in ME3? Perhaps as another crime to be added against Shepard along with the death of 300000 Batarians.

Hopefully Shepard can do a decent job at keeping Liara out as much as possible for whatever explaination he have.

Interesting thought. I'm not sure if one Spectre's death will be significant against all those lives lost though. That said, does anyone aside from Shepard and Liara know what happened at Azure? I'm sure it won't end up being common knowledge. Lets hope not anyway. >.>

I'm sure they will add it. Killing a spectre is perhaps not as big as 300000 batarians, but it is still something.

The fact that a spectre was there means that they will undoubtely check sooner or later.

They'll most likely mention it, but perhaps Liara can use her new power (as shadow broker) to conveniently make any evidence 'dissapear'? That or just produce strong evidence in favour of shepard (if the shadow broker doesn't have it, it doesn't exist after all) In the end, Liara might pull us through 

[Centauri2002]

Chapter One of my FemShep/Liara fan fiction is finally written. That chapter did not want to stop being written. Anyway, it'll take me a while to read over it (which I don't usually do but first impressions and all that!) and then I'll post up a link for it. :3

[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

centauri2002 wrote...

Chapter One of my FemShep/Liara fan fiction is finally written. That chapter did not want to stop being written. Anyway, it'll take me a while to read over it (which I don't usually do but first impressions and all that!) and then I'll post up a link for it. :3

Got a link? Might be interested in reading it.

[Centauri2002]

Lizardviking wrote...

Got a link? Might be interested in reading it.

I'm just having it proof read for now, I'll share the link as soon as it's up. ^^

[kumquats]

Lizardviking wrote...

kumquats wrote...

I'm not worried about Vasir. She took a hostage and wanted to kill Mariana, if that's not bad I don't know what is. And of course the attempted Murder of Liara. It should be more then possible to compare the bullets from the crimescene to Vasirs weapon. It's your duty as a Spectre to kill her.

Killing 300000 Batarians for no reason, because everybody is denieing the existence of Reapers. That's a whole different story. For one, It's the perfect excuse for the Batarians to go to war against humans.

The council is corrupt, I think one of the cerberus daily news mentioned Vasir being sendt out on a mission to kill several Volus who leaked some rather inconvient information regarding Citadel economy. Who is to say they don't withhold some information or outright change it to paint Shepard in a bad way.

She was send to investigate and she killed them. Everything else is speculation.

Still I'm not worried, unless;
The council kills all the witnesses, including Liara and your optional teammate.
The council gets rid of all the evidence on Azure, Liaras apartment and maybe the office.

So much work and they only have to revoke Shepards status (if he/she has been reinstated) and send some Spectre after her/him.
Or just sit back and look what's going to happen on Earth.

On Arrival Shep was alone and blew everything up that could proof that Shepard had no choice. And they don't have to lift a finger for this one.

It's sad because Vasir was a very good character, but I think she will never be mentioned again, unless you didn't buy LOTSB.

[TheMarshal]

Lizardviking wrote...

The council is corrupt, I think one of the cerberus daily news mentioned Vasir being sendt out on a mission to kill several Volus who leaked some rather inconvient information regarding Citadel economy. Who is to say they don't withhold some information or outright change it to paint Shepard in a bad way.

Was it the actual CDN or the fan-made stuff that they've been posting since late January?

[TheMarshal]

centauri2002 wrote...

Chapter One of my FemShep/Liara fan fiction is finally written. That chapter did not want to stop being written. Anyway, it'll take me a while to read over it (which I don't usually do but first impressions and all that!) and then I'll post up a link for it. :3

Huzzah!  I know the feeling about chapters that don't want to be finished.  I'm barely halfway through revisions for my second chapter, and it's like pulling teeth...  Of course, maybe if I didn't try to update it while at work...  >.>

[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

TheMarshal wrote...

Lizardviking wrote...

The council is corrupt, I think one of the cerberus daily news mentioned Vasir being sendt out on a mission to kill several Volus who leaked some rather inconvient information regarding Citadel economy. Who is to say they don't withhold some information or outright change it to paint Shepard in a bad way.

Was it the actual CDN or the fan-made stuff that they've been posting since late January?

It was made before LOTSB was released.

[Centauri2002]

TheMarshal wrote...

Huzzah!  I know the feeling about chapters that don't want to be finished.  I'm barely halfway through revisions for my second chapter, and it's like pulling teeth...  Of course, maybe if I didn't try to update it while at work...  >.>

Hehe, it's quite the opposite for me this time. It's like the teeth won't stop falling out (okay, horrible imagery). More and more scenes seem to want to slip into this chapter. This ended up being almost 5k words longer than I intended it to be. D:

[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

centauri2002 wrote...

TheMarshal wrote...

Huzzah!  I know the feeling about chapters that don't want to be finished.  I'm barely halfway through revisions for my second chapter, and it's like pulling teeth...  Of course, maybe if I didn't try to update it while at work...  >.>

Hehe, it's quite the opposite for me this time. It's like the teeth won't stop falling out (okay, horrible imagery). More and more scenes seem to want to slip into this chapter. This ended up being almost 5k words longer than I intended it to be. D:

I would imagine that constantly re-writing or adding to a story is either good or a bad thing depending on why you do it. I was constantly rewriting the ending to my fanfic that I made a few days ago, because I was constantly coming up with something better or a better way to word the ending! In retro-perspective it was also a good thing because my original ending was not as good as the current one (in my opinion).

[Centauri2002]

Lizardviking wrote...

I would imagine that constantly re-writing or adding to a story is either good or a bad thing depending on why you do it. I was constantly rewriting the ending to my fanfic that I made a few days ago, because I was constantly coming up with something better or a better way to word the ending! In retro-perspective it was also a good thing because my original ending was not as good as the current one (in my opinion).

Oh I never rewrite my stories. The only editing I might do is to correct typos, but even then, I tend to skip that for fan fictions. Bad habit of mine. >.>

[Centauri2002]

 Here's Chapter One of my new FemShep/Liara fan fiction, Eternity's Last Embrace. 

I'll just offer people a warning here, it is rated M for a reason. If you don't like f/f smut then I suggest you don't read. 

[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

centauri2002 wrote...

Lizardviking wrote...

I would imagine that constantly re-writing or adding to a story is either good or a bad thing depending on why you do it. I was constantly rewriting the ending to my fanfic that I made a few days ago, because I was constantly coming up with something better or a better way to word the ending! In retro-perspective it was also a good thing because my original ending was not as good as the current one (in my opinion).

Oh I never rewrite my stories. The only editing I might do is to correct typos, but even then, I tend to skip that for fan fictions. Bad habit of mine. >.>

Really? Don't you sometimes when reading your own fanfic feel like you could do something better (re-word or replace), or perhaps simply replace an already good idea with an even greater one?

Modifié par Lizardviking, 02 avril 2011 - 05:24 .

[Centauri2002]

Lizardviking wrote...

Really? Don't you sometimes when reading feel like you could do something better (re-word or replace) or perhaps simply replace an already good idea with an even greater one?

I purposely don't do that with my fan fiction. I find that the initial, raw idea is usually the best anyway. I tend to do that more often with my original fiction but I'm very picky with that, it has to be perfect. Fan fiction consumes too much of my time as it is. >.>

[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

centauri2002 wrote...

Lizardviking wrote...

Really? Don't you sometimes when reading feel like you could do something better (re-word or replace) or perhaps simply replace an already good idea with an even greater one?

I purposely don't do that with my fan fiction. I find that the initial, raw idea is usually the best anyway. I tend to do that more often with my original fiction but I'm very picky with that, it has to be perfect. Fan fiction consumes too much of my time as it is. >.>

Hmm, interesting. Guess we have a diffrent approach to things.

[Centauri2002]

Lizardviking wrote...

Hmm, interesting. Guess we have a diffrent approach to things.

Most writers have their own quirks, that's what makes the writing so varied and interesting. :3

[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

centauri2002 wrote...

 Here's Chapter One of my new FemShep/Liara fan fiction, Eternity's Last Embrace. 

I'll just offer people a warning here, it is rated M for a reason. If you don't like f/f smut then I suggest you don't read. 

Read the fanfic. Just one question. Are you going to focus more on the flashbacks with Sheåard or the relationship between Liara and her daughter?

[Centauri2002]

Lizardviking wrote...

centauri2002 wrote...

 Here's Chapter One of my new FemShep/Liara fan fiction, Eternity's Last Embrace. 

I'll just offer people a warning here, it is rated M for a reason. If you don't like f/f smut then I suggest you don't read. 

Read the fanfic. Just one question. Are you going to focus more on the flashbacks with Sheåard or the relationship between Liara and her daughter?

I'd like to keep it as a mixture, a balance between the future and past if you will. Although I have a feeling I might focus more on the flashbacks in the next chapter.

[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

centauri2002 wrote...

Lizardviking wrote...

centauri2002 wrote...

 Here's Chapter One of my new FemShep/Liara fan fiction, Eternity's Last Embrace. 

I'll just offer people a warning here, it is rated M for a reason. If you don't like f/f smut then I suggest you don't read. 

Read the fanfic. Just one question. Are you going to focus more on the flashbacks with Sheåard or the relationship between Liara and her daughter?

I'd like to keep it as a mixture, a balance between the future and past if you will. Although I have a feeling I might focus more on the flashbacks in the next chapter.

Fair enough. The first chapter itself is decent althrough I wouldn't mind seeing you focus more on the relationship between Liara and her daughter.

[Centauri2002]

Lizardviking wrote...

Fair enough. The first chapter itself is decent althrough I wouldn't mind seeing you focus more on the relationship between Liara and her daughter.

Ah well that wasn't my intention. It is FemShep/Liara after all. And I find writing romance more enjoyable than family drama. That tends to bore me.

[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

centauri2002 wrote...

Lizardviking wrote...

Fair enough. The first chapter itself is decent althrough I wouldn't mind seeing you focus more on the relationship between Liara and her daughter.

Ah well that wasn't my intention. It is FemShep/Liara after all. And I find writing romance more enjoyable than family drama. That tends to bore me.

Ah okay! That's cool enough. Good luck with writing the next chapters.

[Centauri2002]

Lizardviking wrote...

Ah okay! That's cool enough. Good luck with writing the next chapters.

Hehe thanks. :3

I'll only be able to write one in between now and ME3. I'm sure that'll make some people happy. 

[Centauri2002]

100 individual readers since I posted the fanfic and not a single review, now I remember why I stopped using fanfiction.net. >.>

[Barquiel]

centauri2002 wrote...

100 individual readers since I posted the fanfic and not a single review, now I remember why I stopped using fanfiction.net. >.>

I have no fanfiction.net account...but I really like your first chapter