Also, a couple of little things:
1) I write mainly to tell the story and use whatever I can to do that, so I may use a phrase or two that are slightly anachronistic, but not too many and I'll never reference anything not of the time period.
2) I'm planning to revise this very shortly, and I'll make a note on here when I do. Until then, a minor plot point that came up needs to be clarified, Leliana is twenty years old, and not really head over heels for Marjolaine yet.
Thanks for your time and I hope you enjoy. Drop me a review containing CONSTUCTIVE CRITICISM here or on ff.net if you have an account. If you just flame me, I will ignore you and possibly point and laugh at you.
Story found HERE.
Modifié par Sypher_Kyaeon, 15 décembre 2010 - 02:39 .





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