This page needs a Fenris:

by mistiqarts
Modifié par elenilote, 29 mars 2011 - 08:51 .

Modifié par elenilote, 29 mars 2011 - 08:51 .
elenilote wrote...
I am debating whether I can keep up my self-imposed abstinence.. I want to start a new game sooooo badly
This page needs a Fenris:
by mistiqarts
Modifié par Gremnock, 29 mars 2011 - 09:04 .
Gremnock wrote...
I wrote this for all you Fenris fangirls and fanboys or there. Its about Hawke's love for Fenris. Hope you enjoy!
Fenris
Part 1
I killed those who would harm you,
then met you on that darkened street.
As I looked into your troubled eyes,
my body resonated awareness and heat.
The pain and turmoil I sensed inside
I knew would never completely heal
I longed to hold you in my arms
and give you something new to feel
You told me a piece of your story,
his unrelenting and cruel demands
Sincerely you asked my aid once more,
to help rid you of his poisoning hands.
Then I watched the sadness return,
when you realized he was not there.
I knew you tried to hide your remorse,
the hate your heart has had to bear.
When selflessly you pledged to aid me,
I knew I needed to have you near.
That somehow I would show you
that no more will you have to fear.
The first year you were by my side,
I desperately tried to make you see.
That you were not just a friend,
but an unknown power over me.
When the new year finally came,
I decided to confess my hidden love.
When you told me I was beautiful ,
I saw the Maker smile from above.
Soon after you came to see me,
on a cold and darkened night.
"Command me to go and I shall"
I felt the flames of passion ignite.
Then you kissed my trembling lips,
My body answered with burning fire
Your touch branded my heart,
and filled my weary soul with desire.
My heart wept as we made love,
the pleasure was ecstasy defined.
Your touch was was soft and wild,
it rattled my heart,soul, and mind.
I knew deep in my beating heart,
that you were the only one I craved.
For on my my very existence,
your touch will always be engraved.
elenilote wrote...
I am debating whether I can keep up my self-imposed abstinence.. I want to start a new game sooooo badly
This page needs a Fenris:
by mistiqarts
Shail666 wrote...
At first I thought it was a piece of armor just sticking out from under the scarf of the favour but looking at the pictures now I'm thinking it's a feather or a lock of hair(it got dirty? xD; ) or maybe even just a little token to help keep it on.
My question is when did Hawke give Fenris the favour? After the kiss and probably before they went to bed. There didn't appear to be a lot of pillow talk going on, so I'm trying to imagine when they found time to put a favour on.
Even better yet, how did he feel about receiving it? This is still my first playthrough so I've never tried romancing any other character. Do they recieve any tokens of affection from Hawke, or do they just move in(...and kick the dog out of the bed)?(Also, on a personal note: Hi, I'm new here. I was so excited when I found this thread. I've only been lurking for a couple days but I am totally loving everything that is/has been happening in this thread.)
DemonSaya wrote...
My lower lip is swelling up because I keep biting it when I stare @ this...shirtless!Fenris is sexy...well...any Fenris is sexy
Dr. Doctor wrote...
ejoslin wrote...
Actually, I've wondered how/when the favor is replaced. I mean, it can't possibly "last", not through numerous battles, scrubbings, rolls in the dirt, demonic attacks, etc. At some point, it would be ruined or soiled. So what? Does he clean it? Ask Hawke for another one? What?
Edit: Since Isabela also wears a red scarf if romanced... is it possible to have both of them wearing Hawke's favor? How about when they get together if you end up with neither one?
How the Favor can go through hell and still look brand new:
Fenris: I need your help.
Sandal: Can I have some pie?
Fenris: (rolls eyes) Yes, if you can help me with this I'll get you some pie. (holds up favor) This. This is very important to me, and I need to keep it safe from harm.
Sandal: Enchantment?
Fenris: Yes. Enchantment.
Sandal: Enchantment!
How it would work with a Fenris/Isabela (Fenabela?) relationship:
Aveline: (noticing something around Fenris' wrist) Whats that?
Fenris: It is a gauntlet, people wear them to protect themselves in battle.
Aveline: No the cloth around your wrist, it looks like one of Isabela's bandanas.
Fenris; I have no idea what you are talking about.
Aveline: She's sweet on you isn't she? (chuckles) I will get a lot of mileage out of this.
Fenris: As favors go its a damn sight better than copper marigolds.
Aveline: (stops laughing)
DemonSaya wrote...
Yeah...still heavily a work in progress...but it's starting to look like Fenris...
zee Anjan wrote...
DemonSaya wrote...
My lower lip is swelling up because I keep biting it when I stare @ this...shirtless!Fenris is sexy...well...any Fenris is sexy
Naughty Demon XD
Then again when are you not naughty?
I am |---| this far from actually attempting shirtless Fenris myself -.-
I do not do Half or fully nude people... because I do not do anatomy well -.-
Wich I am already showing of by the very bad proportions -.-
And that's without the bodyelenilote wrote...
DemonSaya wrote...
Yeah...still heavily a work in progress...but it's starting to look like Fenris...
ooooh that is nice
Did so ^__^elenilote wrote...
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DemonSaya wrote...
As much as this is going to sound like cheap advice, I advise lots of practice.
*cough* Seriously, tho. Also, if you find some good nude/half-nude shots (tasteful ones, not porn), tracing them periodically will give you an idea of the shapes and lines and stuff needed. I did several tracings and paintovers while learning to draw anatomy. It does wonders for training your eyes.
zee Anjan wrote...
DemonSaya wrote...
As much as this is going to sound like cheap advice, I advise lots of practice.
*cough* Seriously, tho. Also, if you find some good nude/half-nude shots (tasteful ones, not porn), tracing them periodically will give you an idea of the shapes and lines and stuff needed. I did several tracings and paintovers while learning to draw anatomy. It does wonders for training your eyes.
-sighes- I know, but it is the way one learns...
I usually hav a pretty low patience threshold when it comes to art, either tings work or they dont - which is why I have often avoided trying to draw humans. I just normally don't have the patience to put in the time doing the drawing just to get the feeling for something. Its not a good trait when you enjoy doing art... But it does seem like I might hve found something to motivate me well enough to try at least...
DemonSaya wrote...
zee Anjan wrote...
DemonSaya wrote...
As much as this is going to sound like cheap advice, I advise lots of practice.
*cough* Seriously, tho. Also, if you find some good nude/half-nude shots (tasteful ones, not porn), tracing them periodically will give you an idea of the shapes and lines and stuff needed. I did several tracings and paintovers while learning to draw anatomy. It does wonders for training your eyes.
-sighes- I know, but it is the way one learns...
I usually hav a pretty low patience threshold when it comes to art, either tings work or they dont - which is why I have often avoided trying to draw humans. I just normally don't have the patience to put in the time doing the drawing just to get the feeling for something. Its not a good trait when you enjoy doing art... But it does seem like I might hve found something to motivate me well enough to try at least...
Eyes on the prize, Zee, eyes on the prizeThe sexy heart-framed prize (had to reference the above picture
)