AbsoluteApril wrote...
Sialater wrote...
But that goes against the character set out in the short story, too. They're both facets. He'd have the shallow connection thinking he needed/deserved no better, maybe.
Thanks for posting the story, great read! However I must be missing the part inferred by the story that would have a bearing on his character if would be okay with a casual hook-up? (that was a strange sentence, I am no writer.) I *can* see how it might happen but just based on the LI dialogue I had posted before makes it appears to me that he would rather be alone than with anyone else unless there was a level of trust or deeper feeling...
what am I missing?
The first pair of open shutters he saw and Fenris dived through. He landed in a kitchen filled with the smell of baking bread, and a human woman screamed as he rolled to his feet. No doubt the sight of an elf in skintight armor, carrying a blade almost as large as himself, wasn’t a welcome sight. He got to his feet and noticed the surprisingly comely woman, dressed in a nightgown that revealed more of her cleavage than she no doubt expected, pressing against the wall.
He grinned at her, and she screamed again.
~dusts off rhetorical analysis skills~
Fenris leaped through the window, "carrying a blade almost as large as himself." Meaning his sword is out and at the ready -- he's fully armed and armored. He's looking rather threatening and menacing to the two women here. One of them is pretty and happens to be wearing very little.
However, he doesn't ogle her, he grins at her. Someone carrying a sword and grinning isn't going to be all that hot, just menacing. But he apparently thinks he's showing his appreciation.
He is not lighthearted here, or flirtatious, but it's written as if he's trying to be since the woman is "wearing a nightgown that revealed more of her cleavage than she no doubt expected, pressing against the wall." She's standing in a traditional bodice ripper heroine position here, one writers of the genre like to stick women in to show their sexual naivete for the hero to educate/take advantage of.
He's stopping in the middle of running for his life to take note of a pretty, scantily clad girl. Show's a rather rakish side to him, IMHO.
Modifié par Sialater, 15 septembre 2011 - 09:16 .