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UrsulaCousland

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Zenosazie wrote...

Fenris was so used to being alone that spending hours at a time in the mansion didn’t faze him all that much. What he wasn’t used to was having all of these people, some he liked, some he didn’t, surrounding him. A random collection of misfits that Hawke collected on his adventures.
 
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He stood there like that for a long while, half in the shadows and half out, wondering what the next step would be.

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.....Well that got away from me, didn't it? XD


That's quite all right - we've all done that at some point. Thanks for doing this prompt! :)

Edit: ToP. Well, speaking of Tankgirly... :wizard:

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#48077
Zenosazie

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PRETTY! <33333 Love it!

Man, I wish I had talent. XD

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@UrsulaCousland, who? Me? Oh...thank you! It's been a while since I saw this one myself :D

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UrsulaCousland

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 You're welcome, Tank. :) *bow*

I don't know if it's rude to answer your own prompt, but I want to. :) The timing of this is just around the time Fenris arrives in Kirkwall, which, to me, is about the same time as Hawke finishes her stint with the mercs.

*editFORMATTINGgrrrrrgrumble...*

Prompt: Shadows
Lowtown District
Kirkwall, 9:31 Dragon

 I will need to find food and possibly steal some more coin soon, not necessarily in that order.

A pair of emerald green eyes peered out from the shadowsof an alley in Lowtown. For all he knew, one alley was
as good as another, but this one appeared to come out near a tavern. The courtyard in front of it looked promising as well. It looked like it opened into the darkened Market Square. Even the most circumspect merchant sometimes left something of value behind. The tavern, which had a sign of a hanged man over its door, might provide easy marks once the drunks who could still walk started leaving. Value was, of course, relative; food and goods were both potentially useful. He couldn’t afford to be picky, and his need for coin was nearly as pressing as his need for food.

It will only be a matter of time before the hunters follow me here. After our last confrontation, I expect they may send more than I can handle alone. Considering how poorly their last trap worked, I would be foolish to assume otherwise.

 A smirk curled the elf’s lip. The last attempt that his former master’s hirelings had made to trap him had been a disaster – for them. Still, that had been the end of his time in that village, and he’d been forced to leave earlier than he expected.His expression sobered.

 As he considered his circumstances, a confrontation outside the tavern drew his eye. A woman had stepped out of the door, followed by at least three men that were visible from his angle. It became clear their attentions weren’t welcome when the woman turned to face them. Her stance was a casual challenge. He couldn’t see her face, but he could see the hilts of two blades poking up past her shoulders, and her hair was bound into a simple twist. 

 “I said to pike off,” she said casually. “Apparently you three weren’t there when I broke Big Tom’s nose last week.”

 “Oy. Thatsh why there are three of ush, Ferelden ****,” one of her followers slurred slightly. “Tom got his nose ‘ealed, but we want to bring him a little treat…once we finish with you.” 

A dark eyebrow climbed. Fenris couldn’t afford to get involved in every street brawl (or worse) that he witnessed; he’d have been recaptured long before this if he had. He was unwilling to risk his freedom thus. The scene was now taking place too close to his hiding place for him to easily move, however, so he eased his weight and watched cautiously. The woman seemed confident enough, but her soon-to-be attackers were also armed with daggers or or, in one case, a shortsword.  

“Oh, so you’re thoughtful drunken lechers. How original. That will present a challenge. I hope you three didn’t have too much to drink, because you’re going to have to keep up.”  

At the last words, the woman whipped something from her belt and dashed it on the ground. There was a faint tinkle of breaking glass, and a small plume of smoke rose into the flickering shadows cast by the torchlight.  

The drunks’ voices all rose in cries of confusion. One of them shouted at the others to spread out, and they did. Each one took one of the exits from the courtyard.  One of them stumbled closer to Fenris’s hiding place, and he quietly tensed, hand on the hilt of his blade. 

“She can’t hide forever, boys – “the nearby man started to shout. He was cut off abruptly when the shadow he stood in suddenly reached around his neck. There was a gurgle and a sudden, wet crunch, and the man feel to the ground with his head at an impossible angle. The ‘shadow’ sneered – it was the woman who had vanished just a moment before.

Fenris got a good, close look at the woman, then, before she turned to face the other two.  He made out dark eyes, rusty red hair that probably would have been brighter in better light, and sweeping lines of ink on her face. When she turned to face her attackers, he saw her ease a throwing knife from a bandolier of three across her back. She held it there, ready to throw it. He could hear the dripping sarcasm in her voice as she challenged her remaining attackers.  

 “I could, actually, but I won’t have to.”

With that, her hand whipped out and sideways. He saw the small throwing dagger flash orange in the torchlight, and heard the sound of another body dropping and more moans of pain. The third attacker turned and fled with a high-pitched shriek of fear. 

The woman eased her stance after glancing around cautiously. Her eyes lingered on his hiding place, and for a moment, he thought she had seen him. She shook her head, though, and started to walk away. As she left, he heard her disdainful mutter drift back over her shoulder. 

 “Idiots…”

Fenris nodded, impressed, and slipped from his patch of shadows toward the mens’ bodies. He wasn’t about to miss this opportunity. 

Indeed.

Modifié par UrsulaCousland, 04 janvier 2012 - 09:36 .


#48080
ladyshamen

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There's some good stuff here today! I can't write a story for nothing. But, I found one that tales place on a rooftop.

http://www.fanfictio...ht_Rendezvouses

Now I need to find some yummy pics!

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Zenosazie wrote...

Maybe a cameo, al la Zevran or Alistair? That's all I really think we'll get. He's popular but I feel they'd want to move on and show us new characters.


I wouldn't want a cameo UNLESS

1. His romance with Hawke is acknowledged.  And they are still together.  Even more than my Warden and Zevran, I feel Hawke and Fenris are a couple forever.  They are going to get through this.  So if Fenris encounters the DA3 PC, he'd better have a damned good excuse for why Hawke isn't with him (temporarily).

2. That acknowledgement isn't bugged the way Zevran's is.  Fenris acting like he and Hawke were never together will make me hurl my 360 out the damned window.

EDIT: Took out the grouchy part of my post -- my team had just lost :crying:

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Erode_The_Soul

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*de-lurk*

I have nothing to add for the prompt, I'm afraid, but since everyone seems to be in a fanfiction-y mood, I figured I'd pimp this particular little story:
archiveofourown.org/works/291323/chapters/466056

I'm sure it's been posted before, but throwing it up here again couldn't hurt. It's a pretty fun read, so far!

*re-lurk*

#48083
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@Ursula and @Zeno- Great stuff, you guys! Maybe I'll try my hand at the prompt too, if my stupid brain ever decides to get rid of this awful writer's block that's been plaguing me for days.

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Lordy I miss a day and a half watching my nephew only to find his...well if it means explusion from the group I pass on writing a short story with those prompts...already feeding my addict monkey with my first story on fanfiction. (not an advertisement. Just doing it to help me along with my skills at writing papers....I say that with misery since I panick just writing a damned 2 page paper.)
Also whoever set up those videolinks of dancing fenris...its worse than Nyan cat...I cant get it oug of my brain!

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motomotogirl wrote...

Zenosazie wrote...

Maybe a cameo, al la Zevran or Alistair? That's all I really think we'll get. He's popular but I feel they'd want to move on and show us new characters.


I wouldn't want a cameo UNLESS

1. His romance with Hawke is acknowledged.  And they are still together.  Even more than my Warden and Zevran, I feel Hawke and Fenris are a couple forever.  They are going to get through this.  So if Fenris encounters the DA3 PC, he'd better have a damned good excuse for why Hawke isn't with him (temporarily).

2. That acknowledgement isn't bugged the way Zevran's is.  Fenris acting like he and Hawke were never together will make me hurl my 360 out the damned window.

EDIT: Took out the grouchy part of my post -- my team had just lost :crying:


Agreed. I just finished Act 3 today, and part of me died when Zevran offered to sleep with Hawke. Allegheny Cousland is gonna have a few choice words for him when she comes back from Denerim. <_< 

Considering all of my playthroughs thusfar are with a Fenris romance, I will be an unhappy girl if it were to be bugged in DA3.

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UrsulaCousland

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Ghost_Nappa wrote...

Lordy I miss a day and a half watching my nephew only to find his...well if it means explusion from the group I pass on writing a short story with those prompts...already feeding my addict monkey with my first story on fanfiction. (not an advertisement. Just doing it to help me along with my skills at writing papers....I say that with misery since I panick just writing a damned 2 page paper.)
Also whoever set up those videolinks of dancing fenris...its worse than Nyan cat...I cant get it oug of my brain!


Not at all. Prompts are just for fun. :) The only requirement here (as far as I know) is that we stay reasonably on-topic.

^_^

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Thank you Ursula! I love the prompts so far! Good job :). At work so can't really contribute but I'm glad we aren't on Fenders at least, bleh.

Sorry I startled you Ursula, it was not intended to be such a robust entrance, lol.

I have some prompt ideas plus i am going to edit plus i want to finish my freakin Christmas story I haven't been able to because of Work and life and crap. Meh.

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UrsulaCousland wrote...

Ghost_Nappa wrote...

Lordy I miss a day and a half watching my nephew only to find his...well if it means explusion from the group I pass on writing a short story with those prompts...already feeding my addict monkey with my first story on fanfiction. (not an advertisement. Just doing it to help me along with my skills at writing papers....I say that with misery since I panick just writing a damned 2 page paper.)
Also whoever set up those videolinks of dancing fenris...its worse than Nyan cat...I cant get it oug of my brain!


Not at all. Prompts are just for fun. :) The only requirement here (as far as I know) is that we stay reasonably on-topic.

^_^


Ohhhhhh. Well I feel silly....hows this for on topic. Wolf imprint has an updated chapter...also I spotted that line from MOTA. Pretty sneaky sis. That and I almost imagined a solid fenris sneaking into prison. Yay for no sleep! *sees sheep fenris's brood bahing*

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Thought it was about time I popped over here from the ME threads and introduced myself so, hi i guess. I'm myth. So far this looks like a fun thread. Those prompts are an excellent idea and I'm surprised they aren't everywhere. I'd love to write one myself but since this is my first post here I think I better pass. It's also 4 in the morning here in Aus, so night, everyone. I hope I see you again.:)

Yes, Fenris is wonderful. I think he is adorable. How's that for on topic, considering I'm so tired I can't figure out what the current topic is, lol? :P

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I'd write prompts, but I'm nervous about writing Fenris, and want to write more about my original characters anyway.

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Meeszy Alexy wrote...

I'd write prompts, but I'm nervous about writing Fenris, and want to write more about my original characters anyway.


Heh, if it helps, I've only seen more written from Hawke's POV than Fenris's by a good chunk... :) 

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Heeeeeey guys. :D How's everyone doing?

#48093
tankgirly

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I am confused. What prompts are we talking about here? I haven't post any new one for at least two months

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UrsulaCousland

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tankgirly wrote...

I am confused. What prompts are we talking about here? I haven't post any new one for at least two months


I PM'd you, Tank - when you get a chance. :)

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Just popping in! Great prompts and kudos to all those with talent!!

I'm with Ursula - Fenders = NOT. EVER.

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Hey guys ... I asked this in the tech help forum but haven't gotten any responses. And I figure it's an easy question for knowledgeable people (unlike me).

I tried to make a new Hawke (new game), and it told me I needed to erase some saved games before starting a new one. I'm on the 360 ... does anyone know how to do this? I definitely have a couple lame-o Hawke's I wouldn't mind getting rid of.

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I'm not an expert, but on a 360 you need to erase off of the hard drive, not from the game. You should have a choice from the 360 menu to look at your saved files and delete some of them. Hey! My son agrees with me. ( marking today on calender )

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motomotogirl wrote...

Hey guys ... I asked this in the tech help forum but haven't gotten any responses. And I figure it's an easy question for knowledgeable people (unlike me).

I tried to make a new Hawke (new game), and it told me I needed to erase some saved games before starting a new one. I'm on the 360 ... does anyone know how to do this? I definitely have a couple lame-o Hawke's I wouldn't mind getting rid of.


Go to 'Settings', System -> Storage -> Hard Drive -> Games and apps -> Dragon Age II. THere, you will see save files and you can select/delete them individually. I don't know of a way to block-delete them, but there you go.

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UrsulaCousland wrote...

motomotogirl wrote...

Hey guys ... I asked this in the tech help forum but haven't gotten any responses. And I figure it's an easy question for knowledgeable people (unlike me).

I tried to make a new Hawke (new game), and it told me I needed to erase some saved games before starting a new one. I'm on the 360 ... does anyone know how to do this? I definitely have a couple lame-o Hawke's I wouldn't mind getting rid of.


Go to 'Settings', System -> Storage -> Hard Drive -> Games and apps -> Dragon Age II. THere, you will see save files and you can select/delete them individually. I don't know of a way to block-delete them, but there you go.


Ninja answered...HA!  (Saw this on my phone; got on my computer to answer it.)  Sooooo, do what Ursula said.

BTW great prompts Ursula, and great responses so far.  Posted Image

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Thanks, dears! Esp. Ursula; as soon as I'm home I'll give it a go :D

The horror of realizing I couldn't make anymore Hawke's when I had a perfectly good pair of romances planned and ready to explore. One Fenris, one Anders, of course xD