@Margaret. Wedge-Tailed Eagle.
@DD Sexy/Dark!Fenris *Drools*
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The Official Fenris Discussion thread
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#10876
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 03:44
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@Dr. Squee! So cute - one problem though, ''your'' vs ''you're''. Sorry for the grammar snob (pushes back in box)
@Margaret. Wedge-Tailed Eagle.
@DD Sexy/Dark!Fenris *Drools*
@Margaret. Wedge-Tailed Eagle.
@DD Sexy/Dark!Fenris *Drools*
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#10877
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 03:49
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PROMENT : Cages before i start writing part of this will go along with the idea Fenris has a little sister that some of you may i have see. i came up with a crazy idea sou me.(don't i was being sarcasct) My Hawke is named Night she is a rouge.
Fenris knew he was dreaming why else would he be in that dreaded cage he lift. It took a moment for him to reliave he heard voice , then another moment for him to reliave this was not a dream,but a mermarl of his ecape from the cage. So he poistioned himself by the door like he did once before. When the graud came in too get him to bring him before the magister. Fenris knocked him out cold once again, then dashed for his sister's cage next to his. He kicked in the door.
'Brother," said Kat,'what are you doing"
Fenris looked at his little sister. Her long white moss green eyes, she looked like a younger, more femane varion of him. "Come we have to leave the graud is out cold."
She looked at him like he was insane"What?!" her voice shotting up two octives "We get ourselves killed"
"i am sick of cages sister and i can't just leave you behind."
They arged for a few mintues. Then she said "Go be your self i will stay. You wish to be free I do not. So go please brother leave me."
"But-"
"GO!"
"Very well little sister," Fenris said defeatedly " but iwill be back." Amd before she could do anything to protest he was gone.
Fenris woke shaking from the dreaming. He felt Night stare beside him. He looked at her .Her long night black hair was down out of its uslal ponytail. Her midnight blue eyes looked at hom in concer.
"Fenris, whats wrong?" she asked
He looked at her "I hate cages"
She pulled him in to a hug. He breathed in her scent the odd mixture of rosamary ,mint, and lily.
Um... i hope you like it.. not my best work oh wall.
Fenris knew he was dreaming why else would he be in that dreaded cage he lift. It took a moment for him to reliave he heard voice , then another moment for him to reliave this was not a dream,but a mermarl of his ecape from the cage. So he poistioned himself by the door like he did once before. When the graud came in too get him to bring him before the magister. Fenris knocked him out cold once again, then dashed for his sister's cage next to his. He kicked in the door.
'Brother," said Kat,'what are you doing"
Fenris looked at his little sister. Her long white moss green eyes, she looked like a younger, more femane varion of him. "Come we have to leave the graud is out cold."
She looked at him like he was insane"What?!" her voice shotting up two octives "We get ourselves killed"
"i am sick of cages sister and i can't just leave you behind."
They arged for a few mintues. Then she said "Go be your self i will stay. You wish to be free I do not. So go please brother leave me."
"But-"
"GO!"
"Very well little sister," Fenris said defeatedly " but iwill be back." Amd before she could do anything to protest he was gone.
Fenris woke shaking from the dreaming. He felt Night stare beside him. He looked at her .Her long night black hair was down out of its uslal ponytail. Her midnight blue eyes looked at hom in concer.
"Fenris, whats wrong?" she asked
He looked at her "I hate cages"
She pulled him in to a hug. He breathed in her scent the odd mixture of rosamary ,mint, and lily.
Um... i hope you like it.. not my best work oh wall.
#10878
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 03:53
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Such creative writers tonight! Great work everyone!
#10879
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 03:54
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Prompt: Scars (Just not in the literal sense)
Angsty with a hint of sweet cuz that's how I roll. xD
I know not where my feet carry me, only that I can not remain still any longer. Night has fallen, the streets silent except for the distant laughter wafting from the tavern. I walk beneath a shimmering curtain of stars, my body moving freely without the weight of my armor.
How much time had passed since our escape from Lothering? How much sadness had my mind sifted through since fleeing from the only home I had ever known? So many things have changed. So many decisions that needed to be made, their importance bearing down on my shoulders where there had been none before. I had accepted the responsibility of my family without having time to think, wanting only for them to survive, and not knowing that they would still look to me long after the threat had passed. It was not regret; simply a woman bearing a burden who had become weary. Day in and day out, I forced myself to be strong for their sake, never allowing my shoulders to slump, never letting them see my smile falter.
Nights like this, when my companions were asleep and the world was winding down, I could give myself a few moments to be nothing more than a normal woman who felt sadness and fear just as any other.
Tired legs move me to a bench near the city gates, the shops lining the plaza dark and shuttered till the sunrise brought life to them once more. There is nothing but the glow of torchlight along the pathways, the shadows from their flame dancing as a warm breeze stirs the air.
Was it selfish of me to wish that things had turned out simpler? To wish that the fighting was done and the wounds long forgotten? My body aches along with my heart, the burn of tears forcing my eyes to close. Hiding them has become nothing more than instinct, the warm path they leave upon my cheeks an unfamiliar feeling.
The wood of the bench creaks beneath the weight of another but there is no need to open my eyes to know who has joined me. Odd that I would learn to feel his presence from fighting at his side, knowing where he was while in my company without having to turn and look.
Fenris says nothing nor do I expect him to. How I envied him for being so calm. I had yet to find the words needed in order to thank him for all he has done for me; things he did without knowing and others without even trying. His presence gave me comfort, the determination in his eyes giving fire to my own. What a pitiful creature I am for wallowing in my own self pity when he has suffered more than I ever will.
Strange how he always seemed to find me when the sadness felt as if it might break me.
Angsty with a hint of sweet cuz that's how I roll. xD
I know not where my feet carry me, only that I can not remain still any longer. Night has fallen, the streets silent except for the distant laughter wafting from the tavern. I walk beneath a shimmering curtain of stars, my body moving freely without the weight of my armor.
How much time had passed since our escape from Lothering? How much sadness had my mind sifted through since fleeing from the only home I had ever known? So many things have changed. So many decisions that needed to be made, their importance bearing down on my shoulders where there had been none before. I had accepted the responsibility of my family without having time to think, wanting only for them to survive, and not knowing that they would still look to me long after the threat had passed. It was not regret; simply a woman bearing a burden who had become weary. Day in and day out, I forced myself to be strong for their sake, never allowing my shoulders to slump, never letting them see my smile falter.
Nights like this, when my companions were asleep and the world was winding down, I could give myself a few moments to be nothing more than a normal woman who felt sadness and fear just as any other.
Tired legs move me to a bench near the city gates, the shops lining the plaza dark and shuttered till the sunrise brought life to them once more. There is nothing but the glow of torchlight along the pathways, the shadows from their flame dancing as a warm breeze stirs the air.
Was it selfish of me to wish that things had turned out simpler? To wish that the fighting was done and the wounds long forgotten? My body aches along with my heart, the burn of tears forcing my eyes to close. Hiding them has become nothing more than instinct, the warm path they leave upon my cheeks an unfamiliar feeling.
The wood of the bench creaks beneath the weight of another but there is no need to open my eyes to know who has joined me. Odd that I would learn to feel his presence from fighting at his side, knowing where he was while in my company without having to turn and look.
Fenris says nothing nor do I expect him to. How I envied him for being so calm. I had yet to find the words needed in order to thank him for all he has done for me; things he did without knowing and others without even trying. His presence gave me comfort, the determination in his eyes giving fire to my own. What a pitiful creature I am for wallowing in my own self pity when he has suffered more than I ever will.
Strange how he always seemed to find me when the sadness felt as if it might break me.
#10880
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 03:56
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Deliciously-Demonic wrote...
Prompt: Push
A slightly darker take on a Fen/Lady!Hawke romance.Regardless, I hope you enjoy it.
She feared. Not for him. Or herself. She wasn't afraid of him. Or was she? She bit back the impulse to gasp as her back slammed against the wall. And Fenris knew it. He leaned across, a small smirk playing on his lips, and into Hawke's ear he breathed, "Are you afraid of me?"
"No." She answered quickly.
"Then what are you afraid of?"
"Why would I tell you that?" Hawke replied slowly. "One who allows their enemy knows their fears is a fool."
"And am I the enemy?" she paused. Was he? Did she consider him an enemy, a rival? Not really. She slightly enjoyed this little game of possession and dominance they played. And he enjoyed it far more, she could tell.
"You are not my enemy," Hawke answered. "My feelings for you are the enemy." she smirked as his body siezed at the unexpected answer.
"Foolish human," he chuckled, slipping away from his shock quickly. "Submitting yourself to pathetic emotions."
"You don't fool me, Fenris." Hawke murmured into his ear. "You have emotions, despite that stoic mask you put on for the others."
"You know nothing of my emotions." he spat, pulling away quickly.
"I know you hate. I know you anger. I know you fear." Hawke met his gaze softly. "Do you hate me, Fenris?" He was silent. "I see." she moved to walk past him, but was instantly pushed back against the wall; she winced.
"I don't hate you." he said evenly. "I hate the fact that I can't hate you."
"Then what are your feelings of me?" he was silent again. "Shall I make my own assumptions, then?" Hawke stood on her toes and brushed her lips against his. He flinched back.
"You're pushing your luck, woman."
"Yeah, I do that a lot." she pressed her lips against his once more, and was happily surprised that he didn't pull away again.
Wow, lots of submission this time of the day. Wonderful!
:wub:Filed.
@Alistairschica, filed yours too.
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#10881
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 04:03
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Tashash wrote...
Astoria wrote...
I'd love to see this *ahem* expanded upon on a site with a bit more lax censorship rules.
Fanfiction.net............When the DA2 catergory comes out..........I will be guilty.
Oh, you and me both. He is pure fetish fuel, I cannot wait.
@ Margaret - He'd be a Secretary Bird. Have you seen one of them before? Tall, thin, and flashy.
#10882
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 04:05
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Hmm looks like I didn't miss too much today aside from an awesome amount of prompt submissions (I need to work on mine before I don't get the chance too >_
@Wynne: That's pretty flippin awesome that Wynne is your actual name I have nothing else to say other than you win Wynne for being awesome. ;p
Also it kinda frightened me earlier when I went to the store and saw a jar of nutella on sale and thought immediately of this thread...*sigh* time to take a break from the forums for awhile lol
EDIT: and way OT but what the heck happened to Sebastian's thread? They unstickied it and now it is lost forever:(
@Wynne: That's pretty flippin awesome that Wynne is your actual name I have nothing else to say other than you win Wynne for being awesome. ;p
Also it kinda frightened me earlier when I went to the store and saw a jar of nutella on sale and thought immediately of this thread...*sigh* time to take a break from the forums for awhile lol
EDIT: and way OT but what the heck happened to Sebastian's thread? They unstickied it and now it is lost forever:(
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Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 04:07
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Astoria wrote...
Tashash wrote...
Astoria wrote...
I'd love to see this *ahem* expanded upon on a site with a bit more lax censorship rules.
Fanfiction.net............When the DA2 catergory comes out..........I will be guilty.
Oh, you and me both. He is pure fetish fuel, I cannot wait.
@ Margaret - He'd be a Secretary Bird. Have you seen one of them before? Tall, thin, and flashy.
I was going to go a bit further with my ''Scar" prompt, but I figured it was best if I kept it under 1,000 words. There will be an extended version on FF.
Oh and Secretary Bird? Cool, look awesome and are crazy deadly too....
#10884
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 04:16
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Push:
(Hawke and company are fighting off raiders in the streets of Lowtown)
Varric: Blood and damnation Hawke! The raiders have too much cover here, we'll have to fall back to a better position!
Hawke: There is no better position Varric! If they gain anymore ground they could reach more populated areas.
Varric: Well that's all fine and dandy, but that won't do us any good if were dead! I can't get a shot off on these stairs.
Fenris: How about some death from above then dwarf?
Varric: Don't push your luck elf, the last time we tried that trick Bianca was in the shop for repairs for a month.
Fenris: Dwarf, a broken crossbow will be the least of our worries if these raiders catch up to us. (shields eyes as Hawke fires off a bolt of lightning)
Varric: A valid point my elven friend, alright let's give them a little death from above!
(Varric loads a fresh clip of bolts into Bianca and is picked up by Fenris. The elf then proceeds to throw the dwarf like a javelin, whilst in flight Varric lets loose a hail of crossbow bolts that shreds the advancing rank of raiders, sending them toppling down the stairs of Lowtown. As he falls out of the air Varric curls himself into a ball and rolls upon impact with the ground.)
Varric: That was surprisingly effective. Good call elf.
Fenris: See Varric, I'm full of good ideas, you should listen to me more often.
Varric: Don't push it buddy.
(Hawke and company are fighting off raiders in the streets of Lowtown)
Varric: Blood and damnation Hawke! The raiders have too much cover here, we'll have to fall back to a better position!
Hawke: There is no better position Varric! If they gain anymore ground they could reach more populated areas.
Varric: Well that's all fine and dandy, but that won't do us any good if were dead! I can't get a shot off on these stairs.
Fenris: How about some death from above then dwarf?
Varric: Don't push your luck elf, the last time we tried that trick Bianca was in the shop for repairs for a month.
Fenris: Dwarf, a broken crossbow will be the least of our worries if these raiders catch up to us. (shields eyes as Hawke fires off a bolt of lightning)
Varric: A valid point my elven friend, alright let's give them a little death from above!
(Varric loads a fresh clip of bolts into Bianca and is picked up by Fenris. The elf then proceeds to throw the dwarf like a javelin, whilst in flight Varric lets loose a hail of crossbow bolts that shreds the advancing rank of raiders, sending them toppling down the stairs of Lowtown. As he falls out of the air Varric curls himself into a ball and rolls upon impact with the ground.)
Varric: That was surprisingly effective. Good call elf.
Fenris: See Varric, I'm full of good ideas, you should listen to me more often.
Varric: Don't push it buddy.
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#10885
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 04:17
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Tashash wrote...
littlenikki wrote...
Heya guys! Not to go off topic but man is it COLD! Any other Chicago dwellers in da house that can sympathize???
@Margaret Ohh, that was just...lovely. I think I'm gonna have to go back and read it over...a few times...
Oh! And if anyone's interested in Fenris themed music, Scar Tissue by the Red Hot Chili Peppers, and Knights of Cydonia by Muse are both really good ones that I found!
I'll trade you for 33 deg. celcius!
Good choices! Go RHCP
I keep thinking All For Believeing by Missy Higgins
Give me -30 C to 30 C any day of the week and twice on sundays!
#10886
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 04:21
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@Dr Doctor: "Nobody tosses a dwarf!" XD
p.s. How do you come up with this stuff?
p.s. How do you come up with this stuff?
#10887
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 04:28
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@Minxie
The Mario & Luigi series of RPGs by Nintendo allowed the brothers to perform combo attacks like this. Ever since I played that game I always wanted combo attacks like that in another game.
Well, that and the whole "nobody tosses a dwarf" thing had to come up eventually.
The Mario & Luigi series of RPGs by Nintendo allowed the brothers to perform combo attacks like this. Ever since I played that game I always wanted combo attacks like that in another game.
Well, that and the whole "nobody tosses a dwarf" thing had to come up eventually.
#10888
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 04:30
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Tashash wrote...
I was going to go a bit further with my ''Scar" prompt, but I figured it was best if I kept it under 1,000 words. There will be an extended version on FF.
Link it when you post it up there, I'd love to read it.
#10889
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 04:32
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Well, obviously Fenris just did!Minxie18 wrote...
@Dr Doctor: "Nobody tosses a dwarf!" XD
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Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 04:32
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-ahem- Just joining in, I've been on livestream all day asking for requests.... 
First off, WHAT THE HELL??! Oh no! you're awesome!!!!
NNOOOOOOO!!!! NOT the deeproads!!!! T___T that took me FOREVER to playthrough my nine times!! aarrggh!! first time was fun, but other then that.. KILL THE DEEP ROADS!!
-raises hand- Here! But I didn't got out at all today, becuase the news said the air was going to frostbite your fingers off~!!
MorningBird wrote...
And, just to remind myself that I shouldn't ever color things ever:
Oh well! Practice makes perfect, and all that. xD I hate how colors seem to change from my tablet to my monitor, but there's not a whole lot I can do about that, as I think it's a problem with the backlight. =/
At least this is out of my system now. >>
First off, WHAT THE HELL??! Oh no! you're awesome!!!!
ankuu wrote...
Uhm...tall elves tall emissaries? I guess they scaled the darkspawn-elf family accordingly...
NNOOOOOOO!!!! NOT the deeproads!!!! T___T that took me FOREVER to playthrough my nine times!! aarrggh!! first time was fun, but other then that.. KILL THE DEEP ROADS!!
littlenikki wrote...
Heya guys! Not to go off topic but man is it COLD! Any other Chicago dwellers in da house that can sympathize???
@Margaret Ohh, that was just...lovely. I think I'm gonna have to go back and read it over...a few times...
Oh!
And if anyone's interested in Fenris themed music, Scar Tissue by the
Red Hot Chili Peppers, and Knights of Cydonia by Muse are both really
good ones that I found!
-raises hand- Here! But I didn't got out at all today, becuase the news said the air was going to frostbite your fingers off~!!
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Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 04:37
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Astoria wrote...
Tashash wrote...
I was going to go a bit further with my ''Scar" prompt, but I figured it was best if I kept it under 1,000 words. There will be an extended version on FF.
Link it when you post it up there, I'd love to read it.
Sure thing!
#10892
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 04:51
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Ok, The middle one is fenris, I was there first to snag picture for the group ;D
This is where I was at all day.. heh..
Pictures done by drathe
This is where I was at all day.. heh..
Pictures done by drathe
#10893
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 04:57
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As much as I adore Fenris here (the eyes!) Anders just makes me smile.
If Anders really is a companion in DA2 I will squee.
If Anders really is a companion in DA2 I will squee.
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Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 05:02
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@MD Wait...which one is Fen? I can't see him! (Just kiddin 
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@Tashash Ugh...I have no idea what I'm gonna do if Anders is the male mage companion.
My Hawkette will be so romantically confused!
)@Tashash Ugh...I have no idea what I'm gonna do if Anders is the male mage companion.
My Hawkette will be so romantically confused!
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Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 05:05
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@nikki
Well, mine will be TRIPLY confused! Sebastain, Anders.. Fenris..? Sebastain, Anders.. Fenris..? Sebastain, Anders.. Fenris..? Sebastain, Anders.. Fenris..? Sebastain, Anders.. Fenris.. ?AARRHHH ITS TEARING ME APART!! (even if seb isn't a LI It would still tear my poor human noble crossover to Hawke's poor little heart apart!)
Well, mine will be TRIPLY confused! Sebastain, Anders.. Fenris..? Sebastain, Anders.. Fenris..? Sebastain, Anders.. Fenris..? Sebastain, Anders.. Fenris..? Sebastain, Anders.. Fenris.. ?AARRHHH ITS TEARING ME APART!! (even if seb isn't a LI It would still tear my poor human noble crossover to Hawke's poor little heart apart!)
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Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 05:11
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Anders. You magnificent bastard. If you're a party member/LI you are going to be stuck in my usual party for good buddy.
Also Guy Sensei Anders is awesome
Also Guy Sensei Anders is awesome
#10897
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 05:12
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MagneticDawn wrote...
@nikki
Well, mine will be TRIPLY confused! Sebastain, Anders.. Fenris..? Sebastain, Anders.. Fenris..? Sebastain, Anders.. Fenris..? Sebastain, Anders.. Fenris..? Sebastain, Anders.. Fenris.. ?AARRHHH ITS TEARING ME APART!! (even if seb isn't a LI It would still tear my poor human noble crossover to Hawke's poor little heart apart!)
Oh Boy!
Confusion.Love triangles are soooo Origins, DA2 has love SQUARES!
#10898
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 05:14
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Tashash wrote...
Oh Boy!
Love triangles are soooo Origins, DA2 has love SQUARES!
Well imagine if there was a girl who liked every one of them?! Oh man.. that's a love pentagon!
#10899
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 05:19
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MagneticDawn wrote...
Tashash wrote...
Oh Boy!
Love triangles are soooo Origins, DA2 has love SQUARES!
Well imagine if there was a girl who liked every one of them?! Oh man.. that's a love pentagon!
And now imagine that your Hawke/Hawkette swings both ways.........
Anyone interseted in an orgy?
#10900
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 05:20
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What about the chimps? CHIMPS NEED LOVE TOOOOO.
*ignore me, die-hard Sims 2 Castaways fan*
in my third playthrough (first will be spent doing everything and constantly loading and reloadin, second will be straight playthrough) my M!Hawke will romance everything he can until no one loves him but Isabela.
*ignore me, die-hard Sims 2 Castaways fan*
in my third playthrough (first will be spent doing everything and constantly loading and reloadin, second will be straight playthrough) my M!Hawke will romance everything he can until no one loves him but Isabela.
