The Official Fenris Discussion thread
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#10926
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 06:59
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Tank; not just yet. Hopefully I'll get it when I play tomorrow.
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#10927
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 07:02
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For some reason I just can't stop writing today! Here's a little sequel.
Hawke “You know, it’s strange....”
Fenris “What is strange?”
Hawke “It just seems like Anders is avoiding me, if he had sat any further from me at dinner he’d be back in Fereldan.”
Fenris shrugged.
Fenris “Perhaps he has realised that he has no chance to claim your heart, and has decided to stop annoying you with his ridiculous flattery.”
Hawke paused and turned to the elf at her side.
Hawke “Eh? Fenris, what did you do?”
The white-haired elf smiled the grim smile he usually wore after beheading a Darkspawn.
Fenris “We simply had a...talk, Anders and I.”
The rogue stared at her companion for a moment.
Hawke “You didn’t....”
Fenris “Oh, but I did.”
Hawke continued to stare and Fenris began to wonder if he had done something wrong........Then Hawke grinned, and leaned in to brush her lips lightly over his.
Hawke “I do love it when you get possessive, my deadly wolf.”
Hawke “You know, it’s strange....”
Fenris “What is strange?”
Hawke “It just seems like Anders is avoiding me, if he had sat any further from me at dinner he’d be back in Fereldan.”
Fenris shrugged.
Fenris “Perhaps he has realised that he has no chance to claim your heart, and has decided to stop annoying you with his ridiculous flattery.”
Hawke paused and turned to the elf at her side.
Hawke “Eh? Fenris, what did you do?”
The white-haired elf smiled the grim smile he usually wore after beheading a Darkspawn.
Fenris “We simply had a...talk, Anders and I.”
The rogue stared at her companion for a moment.
Hawke “You didn’t....”
Fenris “Oh, but I did.”
Hawke continued to stare and Fenris began to wonder if he had done something wrong........Then Hawke grinned, and leaned in to brush her lips lightly over his.
Hawke “I do love it when you get possessive, my deadly wolf.”
#10928
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 07:05
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@Calla
*Is excited*
*Envy. Goes back to reading FanFic.*
*Is excited*
tankgirly wrote...
@ Deliciously-Demonic, have you seen Valen's confession? It will make your heart melt.
I hope Fenris will be similar.
*Envy. Goes back to reading FanFic.*
#10929
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 07:12
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Just a thought...
Fenris Fanfic = FenFic ? Eh? Maybe? Ahh...it's late and I'm being silly...
hee hee...FenFic
@Tashash: very cute follow up
Fenris Fanfic = FenFic ? Eh? Maybe? Ahh...it's late and I'm being silly...
hee hee...FenFic
@Tashash: very cute follow up
#10930
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 07:14
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Jeez, this ended up getting kind of long, but hey. It has references to my future Lady Hawke, Emaline (mage, Carver alive, etc), in it. Sorry for not using the default; I just have a very specific personality latched onto Ema.
"Tokens."
"Tokens."
#10931
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 07:16
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Fenfic. Fenfix. Fenflicks. Fen-tastic.
I could go on.
@Tashash; I WILL DRAW THIS AS WELL. >:|
-turns on Good Charlotte and pulls out tablet-
I could go on.
@Tashash; I WILL DRAW THIS AS WELL. >:|
-turns on Good Charlotte and pulls out tablet-
#10932
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 07:17
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@DD I'm glad I'm not the only one, lol
Excited for more Fenfics and Fenart <3
Excited for more Fenfics and Fenart <3
Modifié par ceruleancrescent, 22 janvier 2011 - 07:18 .
#10933
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 07:19
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Calla S wrote...
Jeez, this ended up getting kind of long, but hey. It has references to my future Lady Hawke, Emaline (mage, Carver alive, etc), in it. Sorry for not using the default; I just have a very specific personality latched onto Ema.
"Tokens."
*Sniffle*
That was wonderful Calla, thanks for sharing.
#10934
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 07:24
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Calla S wrote...
Jeez, this ended up getting kind of long, but hey. It has references to my future Lady Hawke, Emaline (mage, Carver alive, etc), in it. Sorry for not using the default; I just have a very specific personality latched onto Ema.
"Tokens."
D'awww! I really like it.... *Re-reads*
Thank you so much for sharing!
Modifié par Madame Rose Crimsynn, 22 janvier 2011 - 07:25 .
#10935
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 07:28
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I'm glad you both enjoyed it. 
I'll be more than happy to supply the subtle, non-smut/non-jealous/okay-so-not-really-that-interesting-anymore Fenris to the masses.
I'll be more than happy to supply the subtle, non-smut/non-jealous/okay-so-not-really-that-interesting-anymore Fenris to the masses.
Modifié par Calla S, 22 janvier 2011 - 07:28 .
#10936
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 07:28
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@Calla; that was so adorable! I love it!
#10937
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 07:33
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Calla S wrote...
I'm glad you both enjoyed it.
What is this? Don't be so hard on yourself - that was a fantastic piece of writing, not only engaging and emotionally stimulating but well written, correctly spelt, and grammatically correct.
Modifié par Tashash, 22 janvier 2011 - 07:33 .
#10938
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 07:34
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Calla S wrote...
Jeez, this ended up getting kind of long, but hey. It has references to my future Lady Hawke, Emaline (mage, Carver alive, etc), in it. Sorry for not using the default; I just have a very specific personality latched onto Ema.
"Tokens."
Awe...
Would this be your Prompt entry? If so, what theme would you like me to put it under?
#10939
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 07:40
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Oh, no, I wasn't being very hard on myself. Everyone else's version of Fenris is... very different from mine, I suppose, so I figured he'd come off as "boring" to most. Otherwise, I'm quite proud of the piece, and I'm glad everyone enjoyed it.Tashash wrote...
What is this? Don't be so hard on yourself - that was a fantastic piece of writing, not only engaging and emotionally stimulating but well written, correctly spelt, and grammatically correct.Calla S wrote...
I'm glad you both enjoyed it.
@Tank - It's not my prompt entry. I had another idea for that.
#10940
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 07:44
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Calla S wrote...
Oh, no, I wasn't being very hard on myself. Everyone else's version of Fenris is... very different from mine, I suppose, so I figured he'd come off as "boring" to most. Otherwise, I'm quite proud of the piece, and I'm glad everyone enjoyed it.Tashash wrote...
What is this? Don't be so hard on yourself - that was a fantastic piece of writing, not only engaging and emotionally stimulating but well written, correctly spelt, and grammatically correct.Calla S wrote...
I'm glad you both enjoyed it.
@Tank - It's not my prompt entry. I had another idea for that.
Ah, ok - Sorry, I have a tendancy to misinterpret (if the word 'Aspergers' means anything to you, you'll know why)
But thats the point of this forum, ain't it? We know very little about the character, so we all gather 'round to kick about ideas with eachother. And fangirl, just a little.
#10942
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 08:01
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Deliciously-Demonic wrote...
...a little?
Mmmmm'Kay, mabe a Lot.
#10943
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 08:28
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I saw that someone has been posting my Fen artwork ^^ Just to let you guys know Im coolloser15 :3 Thanks for posting it here~
#10944
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 08:30
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Fangirl17 wrote...
I saw that someone has been posting my Fen artwork ^^ Just to let you guys know Im coolloser15 :3 Thanks for posting it here~
No problem. We like it a lot.!
#10945
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 08:32
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tankgirly wrote...
Fangirl17 wrote...
I saw that someone has been posting my Fen artwork ^^ Just to let you guys know Im coolloser15 :3 Thanks for posting it here~
No problem. We like it a lot.!
Yay
#10946
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 08:45
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Calla S wrote...
Jeez, this ended up getting kind of long, but hey. It has references to my future Lady Hawke, Emaline (mage, Carver alive, etc), in it. Sorry for not using the default; I just have a very specific personality latched onto Ema.
"Tokens."
Calla, this is awesome. I really hope he's something like this.
#10947
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 08:45
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Fangirl17 wrote...
I saw that someone has been posting my Fen artwork ^^ Just to let you guys know Im coolloser15 :3 Thanks for posting it here~
*Checks Back*
OMG - You did the crying Fenris! I love that one
#10948
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 08:52
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It probably sounds incredibly self-serving to say this, but I really hope he's like this, as well. I'm really glad everyone liked it.mynameisdanza wrote...
Calla, this is awesome. I really hope he's something like this.Calla S wrote...
Jeez, this ended up getting kind of long, but hey. It has references to my future Lady Hawke, Emaline (mage, Carver alive, etc), in it. Sorry for not using the default; I just have a very specific personality latched onto Ema.
"Tokens."
I wasn't expecting this much approval, tbh!
#10949
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 08:58
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Prompt: Push
Fenris’s eyes roved around the small tavern, searching for a certain face. He didn’t catch the familiar eyes he was hunting for but he did find Merill’s. She caught his gaze and then her eyes flickered out the side door somehow knowing who he was searching for.
He slipped through the crowd, avoiding the bawdy people and walked into the night air. The silence and cold bite was a welcome relief to the overheated and loudness of the bar. A woman stood in the courtyard some ways away from the door, her back to him. Wild and tangled hair spilled to her lower back and when he moved closer, she did not turn.
Fenris was used to Logan’s completive state, having seen her fall into this several times. More often than not these days, he found himself wondering what was on her mind. He stepped closer and she glanced over her shoulder warily, ever on guard. When she saw it was him, her lips pulled up ever so slightly and her visible eye glimmered in welcome. A warm feeling settled in his stomach as it always did – she seemed ever so eager to welcome him around her and it was something he had begun to look forward to.
“What brings you here Fenris?” She inquired, crossing her arms over her chest. She had traded her armor for something more casual – a simple lawn shirt and breeches. She was also barefoot, like him. Her eye caught his gaze and she chuckled low in her chest. It was a dark rich sound he’d also grown accustomed to.
“I took a lesson from you. It is very pleasant to feel the grass again.” Logan said and smiled. “Even if my toes might get stepped on.”
He wasn’t too sure what to make of the statement so he took it with caution as always but he felt the beginnings of a smile on his face. She looked happy about seeing the expression and it enticed a little more of a smile.
“I came to talk.” He replied to her earlier question and she tilted her head slightly in question, the black hair falling over her blue eye.
“What of?”
Isabela’s words came back to him and he found himself confused what to do. Logan waited, seemingly endlessly patient. As she had always been. Isabela’s suggestion had seemed so easy before but now standing before the object of his confusion, he found himself reaching for broken strings. He stepped closer and met her eyes. She didn’t attempt to move away but instead searched his face, her confusion reflecting his own.
Isabela had lied when she said it would be simple. He was now just a footstep away from her and could feel the warmth of her skin. Fenris tried to stifle the instinctive sensation of fleeing and Logan slowly uncrossed her arms. It suddenly became very hard to meet her eyes.
He saw the hand she reached out and then hesitantly pulled back, unsure of what to do. It surprised him, she was never unsure. Then she took a deep breath and raised a hand to his cheek. He immediately flinched, expecting maybe that she would hit him although deep down he knew she would never do it. Or maybe it was just a failing hope.
Ever so hesitant, she rested her hand on his cheek. He tensed reactively. She simply left it there, waiting for him to grow used to the sensation before gently making him look at her, an unspoken question in her eye.
He answered it by leaning over and softly pressing his lip against hers. Fenris didn’t even think of the action but the moment he did it, he realized that this was the right answer. This time Logan tensed and he pulled back. Instead of anger, like he had expected, there was surprise bright in her face, her mouth was slightly open and her cheeks were red. He couldn’t help the ghost of a smile on his face. Fenris had caught her completely off guard.
Logan blinked and then blinked again. Once she opened her mouth to say something but then shut it again. It struck him as… silly.
Instead he leaned over and pressed his lips against hers again and felt her lips turn up in a smile. This time, she kissed him back.
Fenris’s eyes roved around the small tavern, searching for a certain face. He didn’t catch the familiar eyes he was hunting for but he did find Merill’s. She caught his gaze and then her eyes flickered out the side door somehow knowing who he was searching for.
He slipped through the crowd, avoiding the bawdy people and walked into the night air. The silence and cold bite was a welcome relief to the overheated and loudness of the bar. A woman stood in the courtyard some ways away from the door, her back to him. Wild and tangled hair spilled to her lower back and when he moved closer, she did not turn.
Fenris was used to Logan’s completive state, having seen her fall into this several times. More often than not these days, he found himself wondering what was on her mind. He stepped closer and she glanced over her shoulder warily, ever on guard. When she saw it was him, her lips pulled up ever so slightly and her visible eye glimmered in welcome. A warm feeling settled in his stomach as it always did – she seemed ever so eager to welcome him around her and it was something he had begun to look forward to.
“What brings you here Fenris?” She inquired, crossing her arms over her chest. She had traded her armor for something more casual – a simple lawn shirt and breeches. She was also barefoot, like him. Her eye caught his gaze and she chuckled low in her chest. It was a dark rich sound he’d also grown accustomed to.
“I took a lesson from you. It is very pleasant to feel the grass again.” Logan said and smiled. “Even if my toes might get stepped on.”
He wasn’t too sure what to make of the statement so he took it with caution as always but he felt the beginnings of a smile on his face. She looked happy about seeing the expression and it enticed a little more of a smile.
“I came to talk.” He replied to her earlier question and she tilted her head slightly in question, the black hair falling over her blue eye.
“What of?”
Isabela’s words came back to him and he found himself confused what to do. Logan waited, seemingly endlessly patient. As she had always been. Isabela’s suggestion had seemed so easy before but now standing before the object of his confusion, he found himself reaching for broken strings. He stepped closer and met her eyes. She didn’t attempt to move away but instead searched his face, her confusion reflecting his own.
Isabela had lied when she said it would be simple. He was now just a footstep away from her and could feel the warmth of her skin. Fenris tried to stifle the instinctive sensation of fleeing and Logan slowly uncrossed her arms. It suddenly became very hard to meet her eyes.
He saw the hand she reached out and then hesitantly pulled back, unsure of what to do. It surprised him, she was never unsure. Then she took a deep breath and raised a hand to his cheek. He immediately flinched, expecting maybe that she would hit him although deep down he knew she would never do it. Or maybe it was just a failing hope.
Ever so hesitant, she rested her hand on his cheek. He tensed reactively. She simply left it there, waiting for him to grow used to the sensation before gently making him look at her, an unspoken question in her eye.
He answered it by leaning over and softly pressing his lip against hers. Fenris didn’t even think of the action but the moment he did it, he realized that this was the right answer. This time Logan tensed and he pulled back. Instead of anger, like he had expected, there was surprise bright in her face, her mouth was slightly open and her cheeks were red. He couldn’t help the ghost of a smile on his face. Fenris had caught her completely off guard.
Logan blinked and then blinked again. Once she opened her mouth to say something but then shut it again. It struck him as… silly.
Instead he leaned over and pressed his lips against hers again and felt her lips turn up in a smile. This time, she kissed him back.
Modifié par Experimentel, 22 janvier 2011 - 09:23 .
#10950
Posté 22 janvier 2011 - 09:05
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Mmmmm, sweet and fluffy. Love it Experimentel.
