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[Maera Imrov]

Beautiful prompt, stephen.



I got chills at the end.

[fighterchick]

xKardelx wrote...

Elf with two swords and slave at one point?
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm where did i see this before?

He uses one sword.  

Modifié par fighterchicks, 25 février 2011 - 02:22 .

[stephen1493]

Maera Imrov wrote...

Beautiful prompt, stephen.

I got chills at the end.

Modifié par stephen1493, 25 février 2011 - 02:33 .

[archangelheart21]

@stephen1493: its amazing

[stephen1493]

archangelheart21 wrote...

@stephen1493: its amazing

Flatterer.

[Plootion]

Hello, everyone. ^^ Wowza, almost a thousand pages!
You guys must have been having a lot of fun in here.

[stephen1493]

Plootion wrote...

Hello, everyone. ^^ Wowza, almost a thousand pages!
You guys must have been having a lot of fun in here.

now I am.

[archangelheart21]

lol sooo much fun

[Erani]

stephen1493 wrote...

Plootion wrote...

Hello, everyone. ^^ Wowza, almost a thousand pages!
You guys must have been having a lot of fun in here.

now I am.

Yey we are really close! *dances*

[Plootion]

stephen1493 wrote...

Plootion wrote...

Hello, everyone. ^^ Wowza, almost a thousand pages!
You guys must have been having a lot of fun in here.

now I am.

*scans the last few pages*
Oh, goodness, all the fanart.
I can hear the squeals of joy.

And I enjoyed your story! That last line got to me.

[Fenn_]

*cuts the rope to the gutter* Anyone else want to slaughter the magister?

[stephen1493]

Plootion wrote...

stephen1493 wrote...

Plootion wrote...

Hello, everyone. ^^ Wowza, almost a thousand pages!
You guys must have been having a lot of fun in here.

now I am.

*scans the last few pages*
Oh, goodness, all the fanart.
I can hear the squeals of joy.

And I enjoyed your story! That last line got to me.

It got to me when I wrote it too.

[archangelheart21]

[archangelheart21]

can u please write another stephen the last one was amazing... you should write a book

[TheDarkestSpawn]

stephen1493 wrote...

Prompt: Lothering

Fenris knew that this was what she needed, but he couldn't shake the feeling of unease he felt.  She had listened to his every grievance, she had fought beside him when no one else would, she was the one who could make him smile at even the bleakest parts of his life. He knew that he owed her this and was happy that for once that maybe he could support her.

Hawke: *Eyes downcast.* The land, it's still blackened...

Fenris: The Blight scars the land like nothing else, but with time... *He places an arm on her shoulder* It will recover.

Hawke gave him that little smile that always drove him crazy.  Is it one of someone who's been comforted or one thankful for me at least trying to comfort her? At times I've seen her ruthless, but at times I've seen her caring. Is she my leader or is she a companion? Is she my friend or have we finally grown to something more?   Fenris shook his head. He could spend all day attempting to understand her. They walked on.

Hawke: This was where we met Aveline--

Fenris: And where Wesly had become corrupted.

Hawke: You remember? I must have told you that 4 years ago...

Fenris: I have a very good memory for... some things.

There it was again. Damn that smile. Damn that smile straight to hell.

They moved onwards. All the while Fenris watched Hawke carefully.  In all these years,  she's always held up some form of guard up. She met challenges headfirst and forgot the consequenses, but now... now was different.  Her pace slowed, and her eyes shifted more than usual.  Small changes, but Fenris caught them. He could always catch them.

Soon they stood on a plain, looking over a slope.  Hawke walked up to it and just stared outwards.

Hawke: It was from here he came.  He charged from this slope and took us.

Fenris remained silent. There were times for talking and times for comfort. This was a time for listening.

Hawke: He ran up and swatted us away like we were nothing. Bethany and Mother were in between us and the ogre.   Aveline was too sidewinded to get it's attention.  The ogre started roaring like a challenged alpha male, when in hindsight *Hawke touched her belt* it probably wasn't more than a few years old. She wanted to protect Mother, but I was always the better mage. 

Hawke almost seemed bitter about that, Fenris surmised. He knew that he should say something, but for once found his words not forthcoming. They just stood there for a while looking past the slope. Fenris thinking of something to say, and Hawke being the mystery she is. Eventually, Fenris was able to open his mouth.

Fenris: You are stronger now Hawke. Your actions are things of legend now. Bethany would have been proud of you, and I... I am proud to have been given this chance to know you.

Hawke turned around, smiling a new smile. A smile so dazzling that Fenris almost became weak kneed. And just like that it was gone. Replaced by a look of horror while her entire face paled.  Fenris turned until he saw it. A staff next to a shell of a body. The body wasn't resting as one in peace. Bits of it were bitten off and the chest had a sword sticking out of it. The Damned souless basterds hadn't left her with dignity.

Fenris turned back to Hawke and felt his heart split in two. Her eyes were of one who had lost all hope in the world. Her mouth agape as if she was in midsentece. What Fenris saw from her he wish couldn't be seen. Her mind had been broken and her world had been torn asunder.

He rushed her and hugged her fiercly as she soon followed suit. He heard her cry Bethany's name a few times and then he only heard her cry. The contact made him feel pain, but he knew his pain was nothing compared to hers.

It was then that he knew.  If ever asked, his arm was hers. Anything she needed ,he knew he would grant. Her pain would always be his, and her joy would always be his joy.

It was then, that Fenris knew he loved her.



@ Thread: This was my first try at an actual story. Kind of long, but let me know if you like it. Inspiration came from an earlier glomping.

Varrik: Are you crying?

Cassandra: SHUT UP!!:crying:

[stephen1493]

archangelheart21 wrote...

can u please write another stephen the last one was amazing... you should write a book

I don't write that often. That story just came from a bolt of inspiration. I wish I could put stories out there like Dr. Doctor or Stephen King, but I fear they wouldn't have as much quality as my Lothering one.

But I am very, very happy you liked it so much.  

[Fangirl17]

stephen1493 wrote...

archangelheart21 wrote...

can u please write another stephen the last one was amazing... you should write a book

I don't write that often. That story just came from a bolt of inspiration. I wish I could put stories out there like Dr. Doctor or Stephen King, but I fear they wouldn't have as much quality as my Lothering one.

But I am very, very happy you liked it so much.  

I agree with everyone else I thought it was awesome as well

[stephen1493]

Fangirl17 wrote...

stephen1493 wrote...

archangelheart21 wrote...

can u please write another stephen the last one was amazing... you should write a book

I don't write that often. That story just came from a bolt of inspiration. I wish I could put stories out there like Dr. Doctor or Stephen King, but I fear they wouldn't have as much quality as my Lothering one.

But I am very, very happy you liked it so much.  

I agree with everyone else I thought it was awesome as well

*Turns red and starts playing with his hands*

[Plootion]

stephen1493 wrote...

Fangirl17 wrote...

stephen1493 wrote...

archangelheart21 wrote...

can u please write another stephen the last one was amazing... you should write a book

I don't write that often. That story just came from a bolt of inspiration. I wish I could put stories out there like Dr. Doctor or Stephen King, but I fear they wouldn't have as much quality as my Lothering one.

But I am very, very happy you liked it so much.  

I agree with everyone else I thought it was awesome as well

*Turns red and starts playing with his hands*

Aw, shy boy.
*snuggles*

[Phoenix_Valkyre]

Erani wrote...

Tashash wrote...

Maera Imrov wrote...

Well not you you. The OP of it. I'm feeling particularly lazy tonight. Beating my head into my keyboard trying to make my fanfic do what I want it to do while being pissed off at my boyfriend. Leaves me with little energy.

Aww, hun *hugs*.

Try putting some music on - I write to music most of the time, it might help with the writers block.

Edit

Erani, LOL.




LOL, wasn't showing before, lemme try and post it here. 

I love this!! So Awesome! Can I have a house there too????Pretty Please???!?!?

Modifié par Phoenix_Valkyre, 25 février 2011 - 03:23 .

[Phoenix_Valkyre]

Maera Imrov wrote...

Beautiful prompt, stephen.

I got chills at the end.

@ stephen1493 Yes That was a wonderful prompt! Very emotionally stirring. Thank you for sharing it!!

[Fenn_]

stephen1493 wrote...

Fangirl17 wrote...

stephen1493 wrote...

archangelheart21 wrote...

can u please write another stephen the last one was amazing... you should write a book

I don't write that often. That story just came from a bolt of inspiration. I wish I could put stories out there like Dr. Doctor or Stephen King, but I fear they wouldn't have as much quality as my Lothering one.

But I am very, very happy you liked it so much.  

I agree with everyone else I thought it was awesome as well

*Turns red and starts playing with his hands*

My mom once told me shy people will get draged off by Flemeth and eatin. I think she is wrong i've not been draged yet. Good job with the story Stephen.

Modifié par Fenn , 25 février 2011 - 03:18 .

[Phoenix_Valkyre]

I must say there are alot for very talented ppl in this forum whether it be fanart or fanfic...You guys are all so awesome! Makes the days that go by painful waiting for DA2 less unbearable! Thank you all!!!

@ Fenn Yes I want to annihilate the magister too! He'll pay for what he did to Fenris, I assure you!

Modifié par Phoenix_Valkyre, 25 février 2011 - 03:28 .

[Plootion]

Phoenix_Valkyre wrote...

Erani wrote...

Tashash wrote...

Maera Imrov wrote...

Well not you you. The OP of it. I'm feeling particularly lazy tonight. Beating my head into my keyboard trying to make my fanfic do what I want it to do while being pissed off at my boyfriend. Leaves me with little energy.

Aww, hun *hugs*.

Try putting some music on - I write to music most of the time, it might help with the writers block.

Edit

Erani, LOL.




LOL, wasn't showing before, lemme try and post it here. 

I love this!! So Awesome! Can I have a house there too????Pretty Please???!?!?

I'd like to be the ray of pervyness that shines upon you all.

[Coraline989]

This is rather off topic, but today I met someone who's last name was Hawke. I almost had a heart attack.