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[Golden Saint9872]

 I was wondering... how do you put in a signature/banner?  sorry for asking, I'm sure the answer has been given many times already

[fighterchick]

Sweet Snail wrote...

While waiting for the demo to download, I drew this... quickly (and badly) drawn... thing. Not sure if it is even worth posting but who knows...

BADLY?!  What is that nonsense!  It's beautiful and I love it!  

[TheDarkestSpawn]

stephen1493 wrote...

Prompt: Lothering (continued from page 896)

Sitting down, she saw the drunken men earn there drunken title.  Everywhere Hawke looked there was only revelry and happiness. To her, it was as if they were dancing on someone's grave. "This is a town that doesn't deserve happiness", she thought.  These Damned sods even had the nerve to still call the place Lothering, when all the homes and family's of Lothering died years ago. The long walk back to this false town had only been filled by silence and the most selfish confession she ever heard.

Sitting across from her, Fenris was fiddling with his drink and looking at Hawke. "It's as if I'm the only thing he's looked at for the last three days", she thought emotionlessly. Fenris was there when she had saw what was left of her sister, and Fenris had almost always seemed to be there since.

Hawke: Attentiveness doesn't suit you, you know.

Fenris: Leaving you alone right now, would just be idiotic.

Hawke: *glaring* Now idiocy, that's something you could wear just fine.

Fenris didn't even blink when she said it.  She matched his stare as long as she could before turning away. At times, she truly did detest the elf.  Who else but him could win an arguement without a word?  

Fenris: You are not a coward Hawke. Running away from problems isn't you.

Hawke: Thank you elf, but I've gotten all the "comfort" I wanted out of you.  What's asked of you had been done once we reached that slope and I have no need of anything further from someone who thinks they know me better than I know myself.

Fenris: It's true you didn't ask me to be here.  I came because I...

Hawke: Because you love me? *Hawke was close to exploding* I'm a distressed damsel  and I need some shining elven knight to rescue me? Or maybe you think meeting me at dinner might somhow make me love you back. *she scoffed and looked Fenris right in his eyes* As if any woman could love some lyrium broken, knife ear like you.

Hawke searched for the reaction she wanted and promised herself that this time, he would be the first one to turn away.
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Fenris felt the wound, but pushed it away.  "I see you now, Hawke", he thought. Normally, Hawke could easily keep him guessing, but now she was not herself. It's because now  she is wounded. Fenris heard her words, but could see their true meaning in her body language.

He had seen her when she had broke, and now she was pushing him away so that she could rebuild her wall to others.

"But not this time," Fenris thought. "She could build that wall all she wants, but only if I'm on the same side of it as her."

Perhaps Fenris shouldn't have confessed his new feelings so soon, but he had always been an honest person.  Thankfully, his feelings hadn't faded at all since he held her on that slope.  You could call it smothering, you could say that he was making sure she didn't do anything she would regret after such a dark realization, but the truth was far deeper than that. Fenris knew that being there now, was his only chance for her to  truly and completly trust him.

Fenris looked at her while she glared. So angry, so raw, so damnably beautiful. How was it that he hadn't seen it before?

Their eyes locked  for quite some time. He could see Hawke fuming, and decided that he should take this time to memorize every feature of her face while he had this chance. He heard the drunken sods slowly but surely quiet down. He heard several men enter the Tavern. The armor clinking implied town guard, but Fenris was far too enraptured in his memory game to check to be sure. The group walked inwards and one of them must have fell from the big "oof" Fenris picked up. Chuckling inwardly, he turned his attention back to Hawke while he heard the man quietly swear in Tevinter..... IN TEVINTER!!

Fenris quickly made his body phase to blue as the first sword went for his head. Hawke jumped from her chair and cast Mind Blast to blow everyone away.  The armored men where slammed into the wooden walls, while the drunks sadly went right through them. Fenris decided that he would be upset about that later.

Phasing back to normal he quickly kicked a man square in his temple right before he deflected  a thrown dagger by slapping it's blunt edge. Hawke had left his line of sight, but he could smell the ozone in the air that told him of lightning. Good to know she at least has something to do.

Rushing a thick man who was still keeling from Hawke's Mind blast, Fenris wrapped his hands around his neck. Glancing at the mans arms Fenris was slightly impressed. Probably trained 60 hours weekly, Fenris thought as he wrenched the merc's head at an impossible angle.

Looking up he saw two men slowly approach him with weapons drawn, while Hawke was busy picking up a dagger from off the ground. The merc who had flown the farthest rushed her and she seemed to watch him with only an intresting look on her face.

Time slowed as Fenris realized what she planned to do. The man brought his sword around to impale her and Hawke had decided to watch him do so. With a snik the blade went right through her, right under her heart.  Fenris didn't hear her cry out, but he did see her bring the dagger around and into the man's head, as he held the impaled sword right above her stomach.

Fenris didn't remember how the fight ended, all he could see was Hawke bleeding to death in his arms. All he could hear was his own screams for her to heal herself.

All he could feel, was the world lose meaning.

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Hawke stared at the wall while Fenris finsihed wrapping around her change of bandages. In the end, Fenris had practically force fed  Health poultices down her failing throat.  She had been bedridden due to her injuries, but appearently Fenris chose to ignore the Healer's request not to bother her.

She glanced at Fenris and found that it was he who was glaring now.

Fenris: I was under the impression *he said with what could be venom* that mages normally use magic in fights.

Hawke: I must have forgot.

Fenris: ... And you call me the idiot.  *he muttered just loud enough for her to hear*

He finsihed tying her bandages and walked over to sit by the window. She stared as the anger seemed to just leave his body.  His eyes seemed to... she could be wrong, but they seemed to glisten.

Fenris: Are you trying to kill yourself?

Hawke: Nothing so morbid. I guess I figured I'd look more  like Bethany with a sword sticking out of me.

The comment would have unnerved everyone else, but Fenris  almost seemed saddened.

Fenris: That is not funny.

Hawke: And here I was looking for laughs.

After she said it, she found it impossible to look at him. The wall next to her was all she could see. The wall that seperated her room from the bar that had been destroyed, and the world that had allowed her sister's body to be cruelly made into a darkspawn's plaything.

Fenris: I'm not going to let it happen again. I would sooner die.

That was the few words she saw coming, but meant more than she thought they would. They were simple words, but there intent was clear. Fenris wanted to be a shield that protected her from the world. He wanted to be that damn elven knight she taunted him for earlier, but not because she needed him to be there for her. Fenris wanted to be that knight, because the way he felt demanded for her demanded it so.

Hawke felt her defenses crumble. Breathing was becoming harder, and she could hear him walking closer. She could hear him sit on the foot of her bed, and she could hear heart beat faster as he did so. She had to do something, anything.

Hawke: *Trying to control herself* I do not love you, Fenris.

Fenris: Liar.

It was then that she turned away from the wall and looked at him. In an instant, his moss green eyes had captured her. She couldn't look away, Fenris seemed to peer right into her soul.

Fenris: "You are scared that I would ever hurt you, like circumstance did all those years ago on that slope." He leaned his body closer to hers until Hawke almost seemed to be laying down. His eyes held hers the entire time he did so. "That fear strikes you like nothing else, and was struck again when you saw what was left of Bethany." Hawke's body wanted to cry at the mention of her sister, but Fenris's eyes stopped it. His moss green globes seemed to freeze them together in time, away from the cruel world they knew too well. She almost didn't notice that she was completly lying down now, Fenris hovering right above her from the bed, his face almost inches from hers.

"Hawke, you love me with all your heart, but you never dared listen to it." Impossibly he leaned even closer to her, Their faces almost touching, eye's never straying. "I will make you listen to your heart Hawke, if it's the last thing I do." Fenris dipped his head downwards and  brushed past her lips. His face nestled her neck and ever so slowly, he brought his head slowly upwards until his mouth was next to her ear.

"I will... that is, once you get better."

The Selfish Basterd.



@ Thread. Inspiration came from a song my friend Austin used to love to listen to. I figured a sequel to a short story everyone seemed to like would go better than a whole new one. Sorry if it's too long. I'll edit it as I find grammar mistakes, so please don't point them out. Please let me know what you think.

Why you don't do this for a living, I could never guess.

[Addai]

Golden Saint9872 wrote...

 I was wondering... how do you put in a signature/banner?  sorry for asking, I'm sure the answer has been given many times already

Look up in the RH corner- Forum Settings.

[Sweet Snail]

fighterchicks wrote...

Sweet Snail wrote...

While waiting for the demo to download, I drew this... quickly (and badly) drawn... thing. Not sure if it is even worth posting but who knows...

BADLY?!  What is that nonsense!  It's beautiful and I love it!  

I'm glad you like it. I say 'badly' because I know I can do better than that. Cleaner, at least. ^^
(And... Well, because there are so many amazing artists who post awesome art on those forums that I feel clumsy compared to them.)

[Maera Imrov]

Sweet Snail wrote...

fighterchicks wrote...

Sweet Snail wrote...

While waiting for the demo to download, I drew this... quickly (and badly) drawn... thing. Not sure if it is even worth posting but who knows...

BADLY?!  What is that nonsense!  It's beautiful and I love it!  

I'm glad you like it. I say 'badly' because I know I can do better than that. Cleaner, at least. ^^
(And... Well, because there are so many amazing artists who post awesome art on those forums that I feel clumsy compared to them.)

If I were to draw Fenris, he would come out as a stickman with little circle hands, feet, and face. Yours is amazing. I cannot draw. I envy those who can. Greatly.

[Golden Saint9872]

 @Addai67
Thanks much! 

[Blessed Silence]

Sweet Snail wrote...

While waiting for the demo to download, I drew this... quickly (and badly) drawn... thing. Not sure if it is even worth posting but who knows...

Badly drawn my arse!  This is very nicely done!

[Phoenix_Valkyre]

tankgirly wrote...

Phoenix_Valkyre wrote...

Ok, stupid question.. but how do you guys get those banners under your comments? I'm a forum virgin so I'm learning as I go.....

Two simple steps:

1. Find the banner you desire (if you can get the creator's premission it will be even better), right click the banner and select 'copy image location'.

2. On the top right hand side of your screen, there is a 'Forum Settings' option, click in and paste your image down like so:


 [ img ] (past image location here) [ /img ] <--space will need to be removed

Done.

 

@ Golden Saint9872 .. I had the same question awhile back.. Hope this helps!!

[Golden Saint9872]

@Phoenix_Valkyre

Thank you!

[Jaarlitar]

Okies, here we go. This is as finished as it will ever be,

[Blessed Silence]

Jaarlitar wrote...

Okies, here we go. This is as finished as it will ever be,

Very nice!  Would you think of colouring the tattoos he has slightly different so they stand out?  Either way I like it!

[stephen1493]

Blessed Silence wrote...

Jaarlitar wrote...

Okies, here we go. This is as finished as it will ever be,

Very nice!  Would you think of colouring the tattoos he has slightly different so they stand out?  Either way I like it!

I'm no artist, but wouldn't coloring them in clash with his outline?

[Phoenix_Valkyre]

stephen1493 wrote...

Blessed Silence wrote...

Jaarlitar wrote...

Okies, here we go. This is as finished as it will ever be,

Very nice!  Would you think of colouring the tattoos he has slightly different so they stand out?  Either way I like it!

I'm no artist, but wouldn't coloring them in clash with his outline?

It's lovely the way it is, but if you wanted to bring out more contrast a white charcoal pencil would do nicely...its one of my personal favorite artist mediums. Great job on this!!

[Golden Saint9872]

@Jaarlitar

That is so nice

[Tashash]

OMG! Sooo much new art and ficcies! (Why must I sleep, WHYYYY???)



@Stephen! *glomphs* That was lovely dear! Please keep writing? I will give you...errr....a Merrill plushie!



@Tanky - I read it, I read it about five times! LOL, I Alistair's "The Motherr only counts as one!" LOTR ref for the WIN.



@Jaarlitar - Oh wow! *drool*



@New Girl - The formatting is mean, but your fic was really good!



@Pseudo - You are So Mean!

[hannels]

kayemdi wrote...

hannels wrote...

A bit of art for you here~ My friend tells me I have a tendency to draw creepy smirks on men. You be the judge.

That's really good! I love all of the detail, particularly in the face. You managed to get the ears right! A lot of people seem to have issues with the new ear designs, so you should be really happy about that-I am, because I love the new designs and I always am a little that they seem so difficult to draw. Your ears feel like they have real weight to them, like there's actual cartilage there, not merely for ornamentation.

I love the smirk, I don't know what your friend is talking about. It's charming. Overall, I really like it. Excellent work.<3

Thank you! I'm glad you think I got the ears right, I did take my time with them

Well, my friend and I disagree when it comes to what makes drawn men attractive. She seems to think that a smirk + slightly lowered eyebrows = a sleaze. It happens to be quite the opposite for me

[Phoenix_Valkyre]

Oooh Tashash is back!! Thank you for leaving the wonderful ficcie surprise!! Loved it!

@ Hannels - Very sexilicious pic!!

Modifié par Phoenix_Valkyre, 26 février 2011 - 02:34 .

[Tashash]

Hannels - Dammit! How did I miss this!? *Stares, happy sigh*

Edit: No problem Phoenix!

The closer the release date get the more I seem to be writing...

Modifié par Tashash, 26 février 2011 - 02:28 .

[Madame Rose Crimsynn]

*Begins to chant* One week, five days, twenty hours, and twenty-five minutes...

[Jaarlitar]

Thank you for the kind comments, all. I tried doing the tattoos with white charcoal but it doesn't really show anywhere =/

[Erani]

Phoenix_Valkyre wrote...

LukaCrosszeria wrote...

Golden Saint9872 wrote...

Hi everyone. I've been a lurker since page 200 and I thought I should finally say something. All of your guys' fan art and prompts look awesome, everyone does a great job. *sigh* I'm also quite jealous of anyone living on Gutter St. I hear it's very nice... ;-)

You'll end up moving there fast enough if you stick around this thread. 

@ Golden Saint9872 If you want real estate there talk to Erani, she's the commissioner of housing..I have a feeling vacancies are going like hot cakes!! lol or should I say... HOT TOAST! bahaha

There's available space if you want, you can move in right now! 



Hey everyone! Loving the new art and fic. <3

[stephen1493]

Tashash wrote...

OMG! Sooo much new art and ficcies! (Why must I sleep, WHYYYY???)

@Stephen! *glomphs* That was lovely dear! Please keep writing? I will give you...errr....a Merrill plushie!

I'm done writing for now, but if anyone feels like picking up from where my story left off, feel free to do so.

[Tashash]

Madame Rose Crimsynn wrote...

*Begins to chant* One week, five days, twenty hours, and twenty-five minutes...

*Joins in* One week, five days, twenty hours, and twenty mniutes...

And you little minx, teasing with your 1000 fic! Bad MCR!  

Modifié par Tashash, 26 février 2011 - 02:39 .

[Kitterkat100]

Erani wrote...

Phoenix_Valkyre wrote...

LukaCrosszeria wrote...

Golden Saint9872 wrote...

Hi everyone. I've been a lurker since page 200 and I thought I should finally say something. All of your guys' fan art and prompts look awesome, everyone does a great job. *sigh* I'm also quite jealous of anyone living on Gutter St. I hear it's very nice... ;-)

You'll end up moving there fast enough if you stick around this thread. 

@ Golden Saint9872 If you want real estate there talk to Erani, she's the commissioner of housing..I have a feeling vacancies are going like hot cakes!! lol or should I say... HOT TOAST! bahaha

There's available space if you want, you can move in right now! 



Hey everyone! Loving the new art and fic. <3

 enough room for one more? I will be good(mostly):innocent:

Modifié par kitterkat, 26 février 2011 - 02:47 .