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Eternally Faithful

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Aw, that was really cute, Tashash! Beautifully written! (Eternally approves +15)

Dunedien wrote...

Tashash, I love that little story. Really well done. As for the whole aloof Mysterious Fenris, he could be that "tough love" pillar for Hawke, and then they could add in those awkward moments when he tries to be comforting, or says something really small that shows he has feelings for her, and let that develop into a relationship. Based on the clip from his meeting your character, he seems more the proactive, this is what I'm doing, help me or get out of my way sort then the mysterious sort. We'll just have to wait and see.

And as for playing, I don't usually make a conscious decission to be or not be me when playing, although I do make choices I wouldn't make in real life. I usually just go with the one I feel like at the time. That being said, I don't usually make choices I feel morally against in the game. I had to force myself to be "evil" 1 play-through just to see the differences. While I enjoyed seeing the slight differences in the game, I didn't really enjoy playing that character all that much.


Oo, I like the idea of a 'tough love' Fenris who doesn't really show affection. It'd make all his awkward 'sweet' moments just sweeter.

Unless he's a jerk to her the entire time and then suddenly proclaims love for her. That'd be really unbelievable , and not in the good way.

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Eternally Faithful wrote...

Aw, that was really cute, Tashash! Beautifully written! (Eternally approves +15)

Dunedien wrote...

Tashash, I love that little story. Really well done. As for the whole aloof Mysterious Fenris, he could be that "tough love" pillar for Hawke, and then they could add in those awkward moments when he tries to be comforting, or says something really small that shows he has feelings for her, and let that develop into a relationship. Based on the clip from his meeting your character, he seems more the proactive, this is what I'm doing, help me or get out of my way sort then the mysterious sort. We'll just have to wait and see.

And as for playing, I don't usually make a conscious decission to be or not be me when playing, although I do make choices I wouldn't make in real life. I usually just go with the one I feel like at the time. That being said, I don't usually make choices I feel morally against in the game. I had to force myself to be "evil" 1 play-through just to see the differences. While I enjoyed seeing the slight differences in the game, I didn't really enjoy playing that character all that much.


Oo, I like the idea of a 'tough love' Fenris who doesn't really show affection. It'd make all his awkward 'sweet' moments just sweeter.

Unless he's a jerk to her the entire time and then suddenly proclaims love for her. That'd be really unbelievable , and not in the good way.


Thanks, I was thinking of a way to avoid the jerk then love problem.

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*Brings up an ancient unnecessary topic*

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Okay I'm about done with this joke hahah. If I wake up tomorrow and there is fanart of Fenris in bunny ears I'm going to frown. ;__;


Oh no, but you started it, so deal with it.Image IPB You tainted my mind with mental images of Fenris-bunny and made me doodle this and it´s sequel, so you shall suffer the consequenses. If somebody asks later about those pictures, I have nothing to do with them.

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L O L ! ! !

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Those are some impressive doodles, Nassi.

I'm in agreement with the idea of Fenris being somethng a 'tough lover'. Being strong for the most part, but letting the mask slip slightly every so often. I would love that. In mind of that, I am writing a prompt for Blight, which I will post in a couple of minutes when I'm finished.

But, where I'm at currently, I'm staring at my screen and haing a deja vu moment, thinking  "I haven't written this before... have I?"Image IPB It's creepy when that happens.

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Nassi wrote...

*Brings up an ancient unnecessary topic*

Pseudocognition wrote...

Okay I'm about done with this joke hahah. If I wake up tomorrow and there is fanart of Fenris in bunny ears I'm going to frown. ;__;


Oh no, but you started it, so deal with it.Image IPB You tainted my mind with mental images of Fenris-bunny and made me doodle this and it´s sequel, so you shall suffer the consequenses. If somebody asks later about those pictures, I have nothing to do with them.

Reminds me of something I doodled: FemHawke and her party members were all wearing kitty ears. Male members of the party flushed their minds down the gutter. Was going to color and post it; never got around to it.

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Fenris Cookies anyone?

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As you can see, I have truly lost my mind waiting for Mar. 8th Image IPB

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I read through his forum and found the information to be pretty neat. And Gaider's witty comments made me smile. I'll say how nice it is to see that the Bioware staff interacts with the players. I think I shall make a "I <3 Bioware" shirt and run through the streets! (Pants are optional because my Mabari ate them.)

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This thread is pretty long, can't read every post :D but this is the first time where male protagonist has a voice over, which includes you making choices, that can involve himself in homosexual relationship :D Male Shepard couldn't :P This ought to be interesting ^_____^

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AstraDrakkar wrote...

Fenris Cookies anyone?

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As you can see, I have truly lost my mind waiting for Mar. 8th Image IPB



Yes,thank you very much ,can I drink a cup of Anders too?

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...dun wanna move... *hides in Fenthread*
Don'tmindme...

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Continuation after Rose

Dirt


The man's grip was hard and strong, Hawke attempted every trick in the book but alas he countered all. She attempted to knock him out by swinging her head into his, but it only caused her mroe discomfort. As his fellow accomplice came closer, she swung her legs towards his groin, when her foot struck the pang of metal plating shook her foot.

"Quite feisty too aren't you love? But sadly we are not amatuers such as yourself!"

As the rain came to a stop, Hawke saw his diseased ridden smile, his skin was rough and putrid, hair greays and full og blood from where she had struck him. Her stomach turned in disgust, she attempted tolook at the other attackers face, all she could see was blone hair and felt the stubble of his beard at the back of her neck, he was shorter than her.

Hawke decided to calm down and see whether she could relax them in some way. She loosened her body and felt the holders grip loosen as well. The man in front walked up to her face, his breath was just as disgusting as his looks. She let him come closer, breathing through her mouth. His lips were next to her cheek.

"Come now love, we'll be gentle"

As his ear came towards her mouth, she clencher her teeth upon and ripped. The taste of his blood filled her mouth just as his scream filled her ear. He clung his hand to his ear, his eyes full of rage and struck her with such force with his other. All she could see was black, and the pain from the punch. She struggled as she did before, but faintness came as she struggled to gain focus. Another strike from the side side, harder, the end of a sword.
Hawke felt the wet mud against the side of her face, the short man had dropped her.

Come on Hawke, get up, don't give up like this...

As she attempted to get on her feet, the world spun and she feel again. She had only been training fully as a rogue for a year, Isabela still had much to teach her. The sudden pressure on the back of her head felt like the world. Mud filled her mouth. Hawke struggled to breathe as the ground consumed her.

"Hector, stop"

"Stop, why?! We have her"

"I still want some fun"

Hector by the sound of the voice was the one who she had torn the ear off.

Fun?

She could tell by his tone what he meant, this gave her even more reason to attempt to run, she rose and the pain from her leg shot to her mind. She had no idea when that injury had occured, stuggling to get up felt like hours. The men's laughter filled her thoughts.
The man called Hector grab her arm and swung her onto her back against the floor, ripping of her outer armour to reveal her inner clothing. Hawke swung her arms as hard as she could, striking him numerous times. This didn't stop him, only made him seem more eager.

"Don't be like that, the calmer you are, the easier it will be"

How could I let someone as pathetic as this take me down, death would be more an embrace than his humilation.

As he lay on top of her, she did not see his unnamed friend, his face with such amusement shone upon him. Then suddenly his eyes doubled in size, his mouth parted.

Blood seeped from his mouth.

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Fenris had run as fast as he could, he knew not who wrote the letter but knew that Hawke would think it's writer was him. Who knew about them the night before? How long has she been there? Was she armed?
All these thoughts powered his every move, he ran faster than he'd ever done, even from the magister. His lungs seemed not to need the air. His surroundings became all but a blur apart from the path he took. He only looked ahead, praying that she was fine.
The rain had dissappeared by the time the lake came into view and what he saw.

Pure Rage.

Even though his actions took less than 3 seconds, the image he saw felt like a life time. Two men, both not near his height, he could smell them, rotting. Their armour was expensive. Known mercernaries perhaps? One was further back whilst the other lay upon her.
Fenris grabbed his sword and by the time the first man saw him, he was already dead. His swing silent and swift, the head rolled towards the lake. When he turned to the other all he could see was blood and stuck his sword through his chest.

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Hawke looked lower than she could, saw the tip of the sword protruding from his chest. She knew that sword.

Fenris.

Darkness consumed her.

#24288
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Okay, here's my prompt for Blight. WARNING: This is an angst fic and contains Hawke!Death.

He couldn’t understand what was taking them so long to come to a decision. They discussed a topic, move onto another, and would then drag up the previous topic again. It was pointless, and Hawke was dying.

After all that they had been through together, it seemed like such a foolish thing to die of. She had faced so many enemies and evils, the thought of her dying to a sickness seemed ridiculous, humorous even, but he did not laugh.

Blight was not something to laugh about.

“Anders,” Carver called, bring Fenris’ attention back to the discussion. “Isn’t there anyway the Grey Wardens could help? You said that you were one, didn’t you?”

“That’s true, but as I’ve said: I never learnt about the Joining,” the man explained, for the umpteenth time. “And the nearest Grey Warden outpost is weeks away. We would never get there in time.”

A pained cry echoed from upstairs, along with the sounds of thrashing. Moments later, Merrill’s frightened voice could be heard, trying vainly to calm Hawke down as she went through another seizure.

Leandra, Hawke’s mother, had come down a couple of hours ago, unable to bear watching her daughter endure such pain. Carver had gone up in her stead, but had quickly come back down. Everyone had gone up to try and keep their leader company while they sorted out a plan, but all but Merrill had returned downstairs within a matter of minutes.

And as for him… he hadn’t gone up to see her yet. He knew it had nothing to do with not wanting to see the woman he had come to care for in pain, not wanting to see her in such a weak and vulnerable state. No… the truth of the matter was, if he went up there, he would make her end quick and as painless as possible.

For all that she had done, for him and for others, it was the only thing he felt he could do. He wouldn’t sit beside her and comfort her with empty words. He would say what he needed to say and then he would end her suffering.

“Everyone has spoken to her, have they not?” he asked loudly, calling everyone’s attention to him. “Everyone has, in their own way, said farewell?”

The room fell silent. Typical. They were happy to talk about ways to prolong her life, but no one had thought to mention ending it. Of course, he had learnt that proposing death was not something most people did, even if they did think along the same lines.

“You plan to make it quick?” Avaline asked finally.

He was not surprised that it had been Avaline to pose the question. The woman had lost her husband to the very same sickness. She knew when things needed to be done.

He dipped his head in response to her question.

No one spoke. No one protested when he stood up and climbed the stairs. When he looked back, they all looked slightly relieved that he was taking charge.

Cowards.

They wanted her to live. They wanted her to survive and be with them for many more years. However, they all knew this was not to be so. They knew it would be kinder if they cut her suffering short. But none of them wanted that blood on their hands.

Truth be told, he didn’t want to kill her. She had been the best thing that had waltzed into his life, and the last thing he really wanted was to lose her. But, he knew that he would rather lose her than see her in pain.

He opened the door that led to her room. He didn’t speak when Merrill looked at him, surprised, but hopeful. Instead, he gestured his head to the corridor. He didn’t comfort her when her face dropped in understanding and she walked past him in a resigned manner. He didn’t look as she turned back to look at him with tear-filled eyes.

He would be strong. He had to be strong.

He quietly closed the door behind him and sat down on the chair that Merrill had recently vacated. He gave himself a moment to see what had become of Hawke.

While pale anyway, her face had turned ashen. He could see the blood vessels beneath her skin, darkened by the corruption and swollen by the sickness. Her lips had turned grey, tinged with blue, and her eyes had become sunken in their sockets.

It was almost amazing to see how much she had changed in just shy of half a day. It was amazing… and sickening.

He reached out and ran a hand through her limp hair, damp from sweat. He watched her stir at the contact, and her eyelids fluttered open. She turned towards him and regarded him tiredly, her eyes covered with a milky film. She recognised him through the obstruction and she smiled.

“Hey Fenris,” she greeted, her voice surprisingly strong. “You took your time.”

“I apologise for making you wait,” he replied, smiling slightly at her.

“Everyone’s said goodbye,” she stated, not wasting any time with small talk.

It was so like her. Even near death, she was straight to the point. It made him smile a bit more.

“I’ll make it quick,” he promised.

He moved to sit on the bed. Reaching out, he placed one hand on her head, gently stroking her hair, and placed the other on her chest. He never once broke eye contact with her as he used the lyrium in his skin to phase his hand and gently hole her heart. And then, he partly solidified and clenched his hand, crushing the tiny organ.

She cried out in shock, jerking at the sensation. But she quickly stilled. As her life bled away, she never once stopped staring at him, her expression grateful and at peace. Until finally, her eyes glazed over with death.

He gently closed her eyelids, making it seem as if she were sleeping. He bent forward and brushed his lips against hers. Her body was still warm.

He then stood up and went downstairs. They had a funeral to prepare.


Yeah, I know it's a sad one, and my apologises if anyone was having a good day. I have some cookies to make up for it.

*offers cookies*

Edit: ZombieGeisha: your fics are amazing. I'm looking forward to the next part.

Modifié par lnicol1900, 28 février 2011 - 06:24 .


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lnicol1900 wrote...


He gently closed her eyelids, making it seem as if she were sleeping. He bent forward and brushed his lips against hers. Her body was still warm.

He then stood up and went downstairs. They had a funeral to prepare.

Yeah, I know it's a sad one, and my apologises if anyone was having a good day. I have some cookies to make up for it.

*offers cookies*

Edit: ZombieGeisha: your fics are amazing. I'm looking forward to the next part.



That was lovely, had a tear shed readin that!

Thank you! Had uni all day today couldnt wait to write this bit, I'll finish it later hopefully!! :wizard:

Modifié par ZombieGeisha, 28 février 2011 - 06:29 .


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@ lnicol1900 : This... was so sad... :crying: Beautifully written nevertheles... But... :crying:

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@ Falandra: Don't cry. Have some of the cookies I offered! *offers cookies*

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I found this link on another thread. You can hear the first bit of Fenris's Theme.

http://www.amazon.co...98876837&sr=8-2

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OMG! Thank you BPearl12! That music is beautiful!

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Wynne wrote...

Oh, it's not necessarily so crass as that.

*snips*


Oh, I know, and I'm sorry if my explanation came across as crass (that was not the intention.)  I was just trying to say what you did, but in not so many words xD and I suppose it came across wrong.

EDIT:

That being said, I understand the 'this is me in a fantasy world' style of role-playing, it's just not something I have much interest in personally.  I've said it before, but I play forums- basedRPG's, and the very first character I  ever created was based off of myself.  Ultimately I found it too exposing.  I began to take things personally that weren't intended to be taken as anything more than elements of the RPG, and this almost ruined my love of forum-based RPG's until I changed the way I role-played.

Ultimately I returned to them with a character that had NOTHING to do with myself, and I found it a lot more enjoyable, and it's something I've preferred to do since.

:)

I really don't find it difficult to get into the mindset of 'the character', but that may just be because that's the style of role-playing I'm most accustomed to, whereas other people are more accustomed to identifying the PC as an alternate version of who they are in RL.

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Yay, for the Fenris theme!

OMG, t h e  w a i t  i s  k i l l i n g  m e.  AAAaaggh, i won't make it till Mar. 8th!  *bangs head on desk repeatedly*

Modifié par AstraDrakkar, 28 février 2011 - 06:56 .


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BPearl12 wrote...

I found this link on another thread. You can hear the first bit of Fenris's Theme.

http://www.amazon.co...98876837&sr=8-2

Ooh, that's really nice! I sorta like the Love Scene music too... It sounds like it could be a bit cheesy in-game like DAO, but at least there's no singing. :happy:

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@ lnicol1900 : Thank you, om nom...

@ BPearl12 : Those samples are great... I can't wait for the soundtrack, it sounds like it'll be better than Origin's... :wub:

Modifié par Falandra, 28 février 2011 - 06:57 .


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AstraDrakkar

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7 days and 10 hours left to go....*sigh*

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Hmm....I've got a very short fanfic snippet....but mebbe I should post it later...the thread's a bit quiet :blink:

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AstraDrakkar wrote...

7 days and 10 hours left to go....*sigh*


Get back to us asap about the bi LI! *bites nails* I can't wait 11 days.