Ryzaki wrote...
Maria Caliban wrote...
Yes, Jack was messed in a bad way because she was experimented on as a child by the very organization that the Commander is now working with.
I don't recall anyone the Commander knew being impaled. Nor was their death the Commander's fault. In ME 2, crew members are kidnapped, and if they die it's because the Commander decided to complete more missions before going through the relay.
I'm not sure why you brought up shown vs told as that doesn't have anything to do with darkness.
Shown not tell has a *lot* to do with darkness. Jack's backstory is told not shown. You see the conditions but frankly that had no impact on me. The bloodstains I guess it was because of Jack's complete alieness to me. I wasn't attached to her and felt nothing on that mission but a "...is this going to be over soon?"
Eh, Jack wasn't all that "dark" imo. She was like what that 15 year old sheltered emo kid smoking ciggs on the corner, who thinks their life is sooo harsh and unfair, would consider to be dark. In other words, she was weak and annoying, (or at least I found her to be so). Then again, I'm looking at her from a males perspective, (and also a warriors ) I tend to have little patience for irrationally emotional people. You had a ****ed up child hood? Boo Hoo, you are young, alive, and the Universe (or at least the galaxy I guess) is your playground, reach down, grab your balls (figuratively) and get over it.
I guess personal strength isn't really a necessity for a dark character, but she was just too obviously contrived for me to really attach any deeper themes to her. I mean I guess I could, but if the subtlety and nonhackiness of the writing isn't there, it's like working up the motivation to bother to disect a Sponge Bob character. (I'll spare you my rant on ME2's writing)
Modifié par relhart, 17 décembre 2010 - 02:42 .