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My attempt to write angst when I'm tired. xD I know it's not very dark...it's actually pretty light-hearted compared to some things I've written...but it tugs your heartstrings, no?

Waist-length blonde hair hid her face as she bent over the grave. Intelligent hazel eyes read the worn words of the marker stone, though she had long since memorized them. The copper-skinned wood elf slowly went to her knees, setting the marigold flowers on the grassy bump of earth with care. Nienna (for that was the elf's name) gently reached out and brushed aside a vine that was crawling up the stone, so it was against the back of it. As she withdrew her hand, she paused, brushing her long, thin fingers over the name.

She sighed heavily. Life was so cruel.
He had been dead for how many years now? She had lost track. She had stopped counting after a while.
She had been 300 when they met. He died 150 years after that. So...roughly 500 years ago?
But she remembered his face like she had seen it only yesterday.

He wouldn't be waiting for her.
He had been an Unbeliever, therefor confined to the Wall, if his demonic blood did not send him to the Abyss.
Nienna was a druid of much faith in her diety, therefor she would go to the Higher Planes upon her death.

She would gladly follow him to the Wall of the Faithless or the Pits of Hell, just to touch him once more, hear his voice, smell him, caress him...
The wood elf gripped the stone tightly as her shoulders started shaking. Sobs began to escape her, a nearly entirely unfamiliar feeling, and tears ran freely down her cheeks.

“What have you done to me, Valen Shadowbreath?” she muttered in a husky voice. “I...do not cry.”
Even still, the tears streaked her dirty copper cheeks, and she couldn't stop them, not while knowing she would never see him again, her one true love.

He wasn't the only one, either.
Her poor kobold companion was gone, dust and bones beneath the ground, and many of the drow from Lith My'arthar whom she'd cared for were dead as well. Nathyrra, Imloth, the Seer...all of them.
She was the last one left.

Nienna always knew this day would come, but she could never have imagined how much her chest ached just thinking of her loved ones.

But...something she hadn't foreseen.
Though she had banished him with his True Name, Mephistopheles returned one hundred years later, and she was forced to banish him again, unwilling to put Valen at risk.
But another hundred years later, and the devil returned again. This time, Valen was gone. They all were. She had to fight him alone.
She failed. And fled.
Coward.

Now, Mephistopheles had taken over Toril, and she was to blame. She had been too weak on her own. She understood the power of friendship, now that she had lost it.
The druid sighed again, and stood up in this fiery world of hers. Maybe her cowardice would allow her to return to Valen's side when she finally died. It wasn't as if she was doing much with her life anyways.

“Aunt Nienna?”

The wood elf turned sharply, expression return to it's default 'dreamy' look once more. A pretty young drow girl was standing there, watching the druid with curiosity.
“Yes, Evaria?” the elder asked.
“Who is the man buried here? You never speak of him. I am curious.” Evaria added bashfully.
“He is...someone I love.” Nienna said, brushing the dirt off her padded leather armor.
“How did he die?”
“Old age.”
“Oh. He was much older then you, then?”
“...no. He wasn't an elf.”
“You can do that?” Nienna stopped and shot her ward an incredulous look. “Mate with a non-elf?”
“Don't be so xenophobic, Evaria.” the druid said with brief amusement.

“I...I didn't mean-”
“I know you didn't.” Nienna sighed yet again. “Would I be a horrible person if I said I wish I were with him?”
“Of course not. You loved him, didn't you?” the surface-raised drow smiled at her foster mother kindly.
“I love him even still.” she murmured. “Though death part us physically, we will always be together.”

“That is a nice sentiment.”
“...”
Nienna grabbed Evaria by the upper arm, carefully and motherly, and began to lead her back to the cave they used as a home in this hell, not wanting to think about it any more then she already did.


Nienna is my druid wood elf who was part of a society who detached themselves from emotion entirely, but as a young girl she ran off to live in the human world. Valen easily got to her and she found herself displaying a lot of emotion towards him. And then they fell in luuuuuv.

Evaria is my drow OC who's the daughter of the Seer and Imloth. Yes, I ship them. xD After the Seer and Immy passed on, Nienna took Evaria under her care as her ward (them wood elves like to do that, methinks)

Originally Nienna was just depressed after Valen died, but took care of Evaria until her dying day.
Thank you, A.C, for...informing me of certain elements. -cue D-D's wicked laugh-

(and no, Nienna didn't remove Valen's taint. She's a druid, after all; she would see it as removing a part of his being and therefor an affront to nature.)

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As I am busy with half a dozen or so of my OC's ... more Valen goodness, anyone else? Two days without him are definitely too long a time ...

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I have uploaded some more screenies for Shadows of the Past, if anyone's interested. .-.

First convo with Valen, where you learn you have to leave Westland.
http://i56.tinypic.com/21e26w2.jpg

Learning where the merchants are from the innkeeper. Unfortunately for you, he's not very good with directions...or remembering things. :lol:
http://i56.tinypic.com/2qdpx5t.jpg

Outside the Temple of Istishia...
http://i55.tinypic.com/ziuhis.jpg

...and inside
http://i51.tinypic.com/2d91stg.jpg

The only merchant in the entire town who will buy stolen goods.
http://i52.tinypic.com/21b41oh.jpg

Outside the Wizard Tower.
http://i56.tinypic.com/2cnd3bc.jpg

And speaking to the haughty High Wizard. ;)
http://i56.tinypic.com/14s1sn.jpg

Place for armor and weapons.
http://i51.tinypic.com/28t9jmh.jpg

The bridge out of town.
http://i54.tinypic.com/4tt3e8.jpg

Now I'll get back to building. -waves magic wand and disappears again- :wizard:

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#1004
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A Valen thread? Why am I not suprised by this? Seeing as I've just noticed this thought I'd pop my head in and mnetion I have a Valen fic over at the pit or fanfiction.net :happy: whichever you prefer to call it.

Linky: http://www.fanfictio..._Star_Dark_Past  I've not long posted chapter 11.

Working on two stories pretty much at the same time, things get a little crazy. No prizes for guessing what my other fic is though!  

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Oh, *that* little gem. ;)
-pokes Officer with a long, pointy stick-
More updates, the fangirl demands! MOAR! >8d

#1006
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Well I'll try and be a bit faster this time, but no promsies! ;) Neeshka is very demanding as it is.

More seriously though I hope it won't be so long betwen updates. More earthquakes Christchurch can well do without.

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Darn them red-headed tieflings ;P

...or is Neeshka's hair brown? I can never remember.

I suppose I have no right to demand updates when I have yet to update any of my fics. xD

You're getting earthquakes? Aw crap. D8 I'm getting tornados where I live. And lots of rain. Makes getting online a right pain. P:<

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I discride Neeshka's hair as reddish brown ;) Depending on the lighting.

Yeah we've had two major quakes, one back in Spetember last year and the other Febuary this year. Feb's quake was nasty. It's going to be years beofre Christchurch recovers. Though its nothing compired to what's going on in Japan. We don't have nuclear reactors to worry about.

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I never realized that one of your stories actually was about HotU and Valen, OfficerDonNZ. Sorry for that. What does your nickname mean, by the way? Are you are soldier? Even an officer at the army? Don't worry, I don't hate brave warriors. I only hate war. (I'd wish I still had my fic about about a young warrior joining the Vietnam War ...)

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It dosen't really mean anything. If you remember the sitcom 3rd Rock from the Sun, there was a portly policeman named Officer Don.... :) A friend of mind said I looked a little like him and the name kind of stuck :D

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I've found something that you all might like to look at. This was written by David Gaider, many years ago on the now defunt Ladies of Neverwinter board. He worte it in respose to a disscution on what would have Valen's reaction been to a female PC having their armour nicked by the mimic. I saved it at the time because I thought it might come in handy for my Valen fic :)


Valen: "Err... my lady?" The tiefling seems a bit flustered, his eyes directed skyward. "Is it not a bit dangerous to... be so bare. Of armor, I mean."

----- PC: "I'm in no danger, Valen."

Valen: "I am certain that you are well able to protect yourself, of course." He gulps and looks in another direction. "That is not what I meant..."

----- PC: "Well, what do you mean, then?"

Valen: "I, ah... I simply mean you may attract unwanted attention. This is a land of devils, after all."

A---- PC: "Oh? Who says a little attention is unwanted?"
B---- PC: "You think devils are interested in my underwear?"
C---- PC: "As opposed to unwanted attention from fiends?"

A -- Valen: Valen suddenly loses his composure, staring at you with open shock. "My lady!" he says scandalously. Then, realizing he is looking at you, suddenly stammers and turns away.

B -- Valen: Valen squirms openly, trying to formulate a response to your question. Still not looking at you he mutters, "You are a beautiful woman, my lady, without doubt. You... would garner notice wherever you went."

C -- Valen: Valen's eyes go wide and he stares at you openly. "I... I did not mean... that is... my lady, how could you think...!" Suddenly realizing he is looking at you, his eyes go wider as he turns away.

Valen: He clears his throat, looking abashed. "I simply... I would not want any attentions directed your way to be... inappropriate."

----- PC: "Valen... are you defending my honor?"

----- (Interjection) Nathyrra: Raising an eyebrow, the drow chuckles with amusement. "Actually, I think he is defending your cleavage."

----- (Interjection) Deekin: "Wait! Wait!" The kobold writes furiously in a small notebook, a tongue idly sticking out of one side of his mouth. "You slows down! Deekin not writes so fast!"

----- (Interjection) Evil Aribeth: The ghost groans audibly and turns around, sticking her finger in her pale throat and making slight gagging noises.

----- (Interjection) Good Aribeth: The ghost grins at Valen affably and arches an eyebrow at him. "Yes, that's a good question, Valen. Are you defending her honor?"

Valen: His pale eyes suddenly turn and fixate on you, his bashfulness melting away to be replaced by a sudden intensity and earnestness. "Always, my lady," he says in a breathless tone, his eyes unmoving, "if you'll allow me."

Valen: His gaze lingering only a moment longer, a blush slowly crawls up his cheeks. Finally he turns away once more, his stance resolute, leaving you to return to the business of the odd mimic.

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-pokes the thread-
More teasing from D-D. ;)

"Va...len?" Elizabeth breathed, clutching the wound in her stomach.
"I'm right here," he said with gritted teeth, pulling her closer as he made his way back to the camp.
"Va...len...I'm...afraid to...die." she murmured, mossy green eyes watching his face intently.
"I won't let that happen!" the tiefling told her defiantly, but there was no denying the severity of her wounds. "You'll be safe, my lady, I swear it."
"I...know...Valen." she inhaled loudly, a small smile playing across her soft features. "I'm...with you...aren't I?" she reached up with a bloody hand and touched his cheek fondly, before sighing and closing her eyes. "So...tired..."
"My lady, you must stay awake!"
"So very...very tired," Elizabeth yawned.
"Stay awake!" Valen demanded. "Open your eyes!"
"...just resting, Va...Valen." she murmured, nearly incoherent. "So...sleepy..."
The hand touching his cheek seized for a moment, then fell limp and slid down, catching itself on the collar of his armor.
"My...my lady?" Valen skidded to a halt, watching slack features with worry. "My lady? ...Elizabeth?" He shook her slightly, but it did nothing but make her hand fall back to her chest. "No...no, Elizabeth, wake up!"
She didn't move a muscle; she was beyond sleep now, and unable to hear his pleas.
It was all his fault...

>:D

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You're an evil, evil woman D-D. But you knew that already, right? ;)

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But of course! I'm 'a very wicked woman.' But, 'in a good way!' >8D

My name is 'Deliciously Demonic' for a reason!

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Here's the opening for the next chappy of my Valen fic

Serena sat near the bow of the boat staring out over the dark river deep in thought it was only Valen's heavy footsteps that made her look up. "How do the drow feel about your leadership?" she asked suddenly.

The weapon master looked mildly surprised. "I am not sure. Those who follow the Seer accepted me readily enough for her sake, but the others... they despise any creature who is not drow, themselves. I am no exception."

The priestess nodded "That's true enough. I'm surprised they would agree to listen to you."

"They didn't listen to me at first." A slight smile played across Valen's face. "But I have a way of convincing even drow that my orders bear listening to. Strangely enough, I do not think my leadership would have been possible were it not for my demonic heritage." Valen stopped short and looked at Serena warily. "You... know what a tiefling is?" he asked cautiously.

The human cleric grinned "Someone with a handsome set of horns?" she asked her green eyes sparkling.

The weapon master smiled bashfully as a gauntleted hand rose up to touch one of the goat-like horns on his head in a quick and self-conscious manner. "You jest, of course, my lady..."

Serena shook her head. "Not at all, you're quite handsome."

Valen's cheeks reddened with embarrassment. "Th-thank you, my lady. You are... too kind." He said clearing his throat abruptly. "But... do you know what I am, truly?"

Serena nodded "Yes, I know what a tiefling is. And at least you don't call me Raven." she added with a shudder.

Valen nodded, looking troubled. "And... my demon's blood does not bother you?" he asked perplexed

"No. Should it?" Serena replied seriously "Given what you've learned about my blood I should be the one asking you if you're bothered."

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-does a dance-
Yayz! How...zazzy. ;)

I can't wait till it's posted!

#1017
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-violently kicks the thread-

Wake up dagnabbit!

Maybe shirtless, sleeping Valen will attract the others...
Image IPB

-sits and waits for the fangirls to come-

#1018
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I might have scared them all away, D-D. :innocent: I mean a guy who posts in a fangirl thread is rare enough but a guy who posts in a fangirl thread and is actually writing a fic with a female lead who's paired with the subject of said fangirl thread, now that pretty much unheard of. :D

#1019
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.-.

Would that mean I'm not a real fangirl because I don't care, or that I'm a better fangirl then the others?
SO MANY QUESTIONS.

I don't actually consider this a 'fangirl' thread. Sure, the majority is made a fangirls, but it's just a fanthread to me, and men are as welcome as women.

JUST DON'T LEAVE. I don't wanna be alone. D:

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Don't worry, D-D. I won't leave you lonely. (Gods how corny did that sound?) :D It's the weekend so maybe everyone's away doing whatever they do on the weekend?

#1021
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People do things during the weekend?

Wait...it's the weekend? o_O
-looks at her calendar-
WTF HOW DID I MISS THIS?!

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Okay, I've been having problems triggering Valen's Beholder convo. All the others run fine, and I have every Valen HotU mod known to man installed, but this...frickin...convo!! It won't ever trigger! Typically, I run around in DebugMode so as to not miss any triggers (since I did a lot in my first playthroughs). Is this the cause of my problems? x_x Help a poor girl out?

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(Sorry for not posting lately, I've been playing DA2. Am now a Fully-fledged Fengirl as well as a Valen Fangirl.)

D-D: The beholder convo? You mean the one where he makes that daft joke? Well, I don't always get it to trigger - sometimes Deekin takes it, and other times it won't trigger as the game still thinks that I'm in a fight.

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Damn. That must be it. :P In this playthrough I don't have Deekin in the party (skipped Chapter One) so he can't have taken it over. Maybe I'll load my save from just before the beholders and go through more carefully. :P

(tbh, I edited Valen's dialogue to make the PC responses more like what I could see my characters saying, and I just want to choose the 'ohohoho, so you're a funny tiefling' option. xD)

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My offer still stands: anyone interested will get all my old notes about Valen, his parents and grandfather (crap, of course).

Like:


SCENE# 13.03: The morning after

Valen opened his eyes, still caught in his dream, not willing to wake up. The touch of the
elf’s skin next to his, the scent of her, the warmth of her body
had felt wonderful and almost real, but it had been only a dream, of
course.

"Last night…,”
Aldatariel looked into the tiefling’s eyes shyly and longingly at
the same time, shaking her head when she saw the guilt and shame
there. “I wanted this so much. No. Don’t speak. Do not spoil what
means so much to me.”

Her index finger tracing his lips, she whispered: “Why don’t we try again?”

Modifié par Aldatariel Calentaur, 29 mai 2011 - 10:07 .