what do you think of my idea for a short cutscene that will show ash\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\kaidan are ready to finally tie up the loose ends of their relationship from the first 2 games. I know lots of fans feel that they have been shortchanged because both ash and kaidan have the same dialogue options so i've prepared two versions to support the scene.
ASH (scene will take place in ash's Barracks or room on a military base if in a room then shared with another female marine The female marine will also be of the same age as Ash)
(Ash will be seen looking down at a picture with shepard, she is seen holding a letter which we presume is something she wants to give to shepard. telling him her true feelings and explaining why she acted the way she did on horizon)
Ash: Its hard you know? thinking the one you love is dead, then finding they're alive and working for an old enemy.
female marine: That him Maam? (points towards the picture of shepard) is it shepard?.
Ash: how did you know
Female marine: hell girl, you only spend half your free time staring into the picture, thats when your not playing round with our weapons of-course. (laughing)
Ash: yeah, thats him. my man. we went through hell together, he saved me on illos, it started from there, he was the man to die by marine. i really love him. (tears rolling out of her eyes) but dont tell anyone i said that, thats an order , you get me?
female marine: sure Maam, why dont you go get him then? before you know, hes gone for good ?
Ash: its not so simple, i mean he's an officer......
Female marine: Listen hun, if you like him go get him. i've been there once, never knew what i wanted and then a week later he gets his legs blown off and dies from blood loss. only for me, he's gone for good.
Ash: hmm i guess so corporal. c'mon lets get something to eat
Female marine: (looks at the picture of shepard one last time) Damn, hes cute, you better hurry up before i make him mine.
Ash: (laughing) Oh you can try corporal, you can try
(scene ends and the pair exit. screen then fades to black.)
KAIDAN (Kaidan's scene will like ash's take place in his room on a military base) (once again kaidan is looking at a picture of shepard like ash was before, he is clearly distraught and emotionally stressed)
Male marine: Hey LT whats up
Kaidan: Decius, i told you not to call me that off duty.
Male marine (Decius): yo im sorry, whats up man you seem like you got a bug up in your jar, whats going on ?
Kaidan: you know shepard right ? What am i saying everyone does.
MM Decius: yeah man she's only famous for savin all our asses.
Kaidan: well she's back and i dont know what i should do. We were together for a long time. some higher power gifted her new life, i hope its for me.
MM Decius: dude women are all the same, even the special ones, if it was true love, she'll come n' find you. send her a letter or something.
Kaidan: yeah i guess so
MM Decius: (laughing) Yeah, thats my boy
(a group of female marines walk by the mens room laughing, as they pass one girl winks at decius before turning back and continuing up the corridor)
MM Decius: [b](smiling) What you need right now is to get some,i aint talkin bout a fight if you know what i mean.lucky for you i know just the place for it.
so anyway guys let me know what you think. does anyone like my idea for a short cutscene ? or do you hate it ? tell me what you think should change or stay the same.
Modifié par jamie94, 30 décembre 2010 - 01:16 .
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