As apologies to Chignon (and to help cheer her up) I wrote the terrible comic dialogue into an attempted sexy fiction! Grrrrr!! (original text in italics of course)
Sialater said it was awesome. Thanks! Im not so sure, but my theory was I could in no way make it worse! But just in case I included a picture of topless Kaiden!!

"The air became charged as Kaiden embraced me. His arms clung and held me firm, a grip which I hadn't felt since that perfect night before Ilos. The memories of those moments filled me and I instantly lost control.
I hit the ground with my Lieutenant, Kaidan Alenko! A good kid. Loyal, by the book, with a talent for biotics. He sure knew how to use them!! My heart raced he lifted back to my feet and flung me onto the waiting bed! He was still a good kid at heart despite the things he had seen, he would never let me down. He was loyal beyond the call of duty and luckily for me his book was the Karma-Sutra!!
I lay there for a moment waiting, knowing what was to come and knowing that I would never be alone again!"

Also Xalena that picture of the van is priceless!
Modifié par Captain Crash, 16 janvier 2011 - 08:58 .