FieryPhoenix7 wrote...
Smudboy agrees with you. 
That was the sypnosis I watched and referenced to, although are opinions are similar. I found that particular example quite a nice example.

Phaedon wrote...
Rebuttal!
Aye, and excluding their individual arcs. How does the game acknowledge their existence? Samara and Garrus’ conflict are never again referenced to or even mentioned subsequent to their conclusion. When the focal point of a storyline is the characters and not the main plot; these characters should transcend and be predominant throughout the game. Samara’s code is in absolute contrast to virtually everyone aboard the Normandy, yet she has no words to express her opinion. Using the demonstration between Ash and Shepard, both characters develop during the
main story, and in only mere seconds of dialogue. If Samara had questioned the crew or even herself for having to be apart of injustice based upon her perspective. She would grow and develop as a character outside of her loyalty mission. This would be an example of a character story. What ME2 can be described as is an episodic story. The qualm is it has a primary plot to adhere to; the Reapers. This was underdeveloped and frequently ignored to focus on episodic stories that are forgotten upon their conclusion.
Every one of your rebuttals mentioning individualization is in regards to only when that character is on center stage. In every story excluding their own, they are almost entirely silent. No one says anything during another squad’s loyalty mission with few exceptions. Miranda is a hilarious example because a large portion of her character development is optional. She is arrogant enough to mention Veetor being returned unharmed if brought along for Tali’s loyalty mission, yet has no opinion beyond that? The Suicide Mission is even worse. She has a critical, character defining moment that is completely optional. If she is not in your party, you will never witness her development; that she has affirmed her loyalty to Shepard over TIM. This should be an essential part of her character but anyone not using her during the final boss will never see it.
Arguably, one of the worst examples is Legion during Tali’s loyalty mission. If brought, the entire early portion of the mission is altered. The Quarian guard is hostile immediately upon your arrival, Tali is weary of Shepard’s decision to bring Legion, Admiral Koris insinuates Tali is attempting to coerce support by bringing a Geth, each Admiral will offer their opinion of Legion and finally, Legion will answer their opinions with his own. This is the fundamental example of cause and effect in a narrative. Legion’s presence was the cause of hostility and as a result, it affect Tali’s loyalty mission because dialogue and character interaction was changed. Even better, Legion grew
and Tali grew as characters, which is made apparent when Tali agrees with Legion after hearing Admiral Xen’s desire to dissect him. This is all exquisite development because every plot arc is addressed and developed. There is one significant problem.
It was removed from the actual game and only accessible through modding. One of the best development moments of the entire game was removed and you wonder why we criticize the main story.
What I described above should have been the standard. No, not every character would have an opinion of that magnitude but at least one or two would. Samara would have never walked away silently when innocents were stranded because of Zaeed’s selfish desire to pursue Vido. She may have accepted it because of her oath to Shepard but she most certainly should have commented.
Yet another example is Garrus and Tali having nothing at all to say when meeting Wrex. This is all the more evidence of them not existing in the main plot. No one else has unique dialogue at that moment so why should Garrus or Tali? That was Bioware’s position.
This happens literally in 60% of the dialogue with the squaddies.
This almost never happens and in a character driven storyline, it should be the absolute. Take away my quotes from your post and you have nearly as much content in ME2 where characters offer opinions outside their own arc.
Lazuli actually offered a rather accurate description of ME2. The story coincides with a television series and is episodic in structure, as aforementioned. There would nary a qualm if there was not a main plot and that these characters were supposed to be that plot. A television show like Friends or Law & Order’s ‘main plot’ as it were, is about everyday life. They frankly, do not have a plot that leads outside of each episode. Coincidently, each character acknowledges one another, has discusses about what is transpiring in that specific episode and if there is a subsequent reference later into the series in another episode; the characters are all aware of or become aware of it. This does not happen in Mass Effect 2 and it has a main plot, hence why people criticize it.
And again, you make sure that your squaddies are focused for the suicide mission.
Correct, yet once they step outside the limelight. They no longer have an opinion or seem to exist. If I again reference to television. Friends has six characters, all of whom have an opinion regardless of who that episode is focusing on. Joey is a lady’s man and the remaining five cast always have an opinion about this, mostly negative. No one has an opinion other than Shepard about Garrus and Sidonis. It is never even mentioned afterward. I have already addressed this above but made the TV reference to drive home the point.
I believe there is something you are misconstruing. I do not believe Mass Effect’s story is the end all be all, hardly. It has numerous perplexing moments where my eyebrow raises, most noticeably about how inept Shepard is ay providing evidence. In addition, I do not dislike the recruitment or loyalty missions by their lonesome. It is both the main plot and how the characters interact in said plot, loyalty, and recruitment missions.
Edit: I would go into detail about how Shepard is a brick and more often than not a NPC in her own story but Glacier has that covered and is doing an admirable job. Please not I do not agree with everything in his/her post.
Modifié par Bourne Endeavor, 09 janvier 2011 - 05:58 .