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[Zjarcal]

@broutefoin

Lovely art! I look forward to the finished piece.

RVonE wrote...

Repostin' for awesome:

By Artshardz.

I had seen this dozens of times and it is only until now that I notice that the kitten is Merrill... 

[_Somebody]

Zjarcal wrote...
I had seen this dozens of times and it is only until now that I notice that the kitten is Merrill... 

I never noticed either until now.

[mesmerizedish]

You're both wrong. It's but a pretender. There's only one Merrillcat, and that is most assuredly not her.

*strokes the real Merrillcat lovingly*

[DoNotIngest]

ishmaeltheforsaken wrote...

You're both wrong. It's but a pretender. There's only one Merrillcat, and that is most assuredly not her.

*strokes the real Merrillcat lovingly*

How can you love the Merrillcat? It is so... Tilted!

[Knight of Dane]

Updated my fic, the link is in my signature.
Direct link to chapter 6: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6831578/6/
Hope it works.

[RVonE]

Somebody wrote...

Zjarcal wrote...
I had seen this dozens of times and it is only until now that I notice that the kitten is Merrill... 

I never noticed either until now.

You didn't think I just posted this here for Isabela, did you?

[LobselVith8]

ishmaeltheforsaken wrote...

Maria Caliban wrote...

ishmaeltheforsaken wrote...

Which class do you guys think works better for a Merrillmance? Warrior or mage?

Warrior.

That's what I was expecting... I just love playing mages so much  

You're not alone! I love playing as a mage, too!  And I'm only countless hours late in pointing this out, too.

[Maria Caliban]

The best class for romancing Merrill is: Sandwich.

[Blackout62]

Knight of Dane wrote...

Updated my fic, the link is in my signature.
Direct link to chapter 6: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6831578/6/
Hope it works.

You need to start a new paragraph with every change of speaker.

Example:
"Buy me a drink?" A creamy accent came from the door to his room, it
opened and he instantly recognized the uniform of the seekers. It wasn't
Cassandra though. "Huh, are you 'seeking' me again?" He asked back to
her. "What do you want? Your colleague already questioned me and I still
have no idea where the champion is." The red haired woman sat down in
front of him and tossed a small pouch of coins towards him. "You are a
merchant, yes? This is a deal you and I make, not you and the chantry."

Multiple times while reading I couldn't figure out who was speaking. It should read as:

"Buy me a drink?" A creamy accent came from the door to his room, it
opened and he instantly recognized the uniform of the seekers. It wasn't
Cassandra though.
"Huh, are you 'seeking' me again?" He asked back to
her. "What do you want? Your colleague already questioned me and I still
have no idea where the champion is."
The red haired woman sat down in
front of him and tossed a small pouch of coins towards him. "You are a
merchant, yes? This is a deal you and I make, not you and the chantry."

I'd understand if you don't go back through your previous chapters and fix this but doing so in later chapters will lead to the reader more easily comprehending the the shifts in dialogue.

[_Somebody]

Maria Caliban wrote...

The best class for romancing Merrill is: Sandwich.

No, thats the best class for romancing Anders.

Modifié par Somebody, 08 avril 2011 - 10:06 .

[mesmerizedish]

Maria Caliban wrote...

The best class for romancing Merrill is: Sandwich.

Now I'm even more okay with being a sandwich.

[Ace Attorney]

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[thesuperdarkone]

T3hAnubis wrote...



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Epic WinB)

[mesmerizedish]

Hot on the heels of Varric's shirt, I have even more terrible news.

Someone has made Merrill "sexy."

I don't want to link to it, because it makes me feel dirty. But modded!Isabela seems to have taught Merrill how to frolic topless.

I'll let that stew in your brains for a little while.

I have nothing against nudity in and of itself. I'm fine with breasts in sex scenes. But tearing off Merrill's robes in normal gameplay, purely for titillation, does not sit well with me. Isabela's cleavage is awesome and in character. But Merrill's nipples are just too far.

           R.I.P.
     Merrill's Virtue
        3/11-4/11
"We hardly knew her"

Modifié par ishmaeltheforsaken, 08 avril 2011 - 10:48 .

[RVonE]

T3hAnubis wrote...



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That's pretty good.
I like Isabela's location.

[draken-heart]

T3hAnubis wrote...



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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. looks like someone has just won the internet:lol:

[Gavinthelocust]

ishmaeltheforsaken wrote...

Hot on the heels of Varric's shirt, I have even more terrible news.

Someone has made Merrill "sexy."

I don't want to link to it, because it makes me feel dirty. But modded!Isabela seems to have taught Merrill how to frolic topless.

I'll let that stew in your brains for a little while.

I have nothing against nudity in and of itself. I'm fine with breasts in sex scenes. But tearing off Merrill's robes in normal gameplay, purely for titillation, does not sit well with me. Isabela's cleavage is awesome and in character. But Merrill's nipples are just too far.

           R.I.P.
     Merrill's Virtue
        3/11-4/11
"We hardly knew her"

It was only a matter of time, we all know what modders will do once given freedom. If only they ignored her as they did Velanna she'd still be with us.

[LobselVith8]

ishmaeltheforsaken wrote...

Maria Caliban wrote...

I see Merrill as being isolated from the daily life of her clan. Given that an apostate Hawke would have to live in secrecy, always hiding herself, and spend time studying the arcane arts as well as learning the self-discipline or willpower needed to resist demons, she could easily relate to Merrill and find a number of similarities between them.

Which is not good in my eyes.

Merrill doesn't need someone who relates to being isolated but someone who's used to being knee-deep in the muck of normal life. Warrior Hawke is never tempted by blood magic, doesn't spend her nights pouring over arcane secrets, and doesn't worry about demons brainjacking her.

Yeah... I can't help but feel that warrior!Hawke's opinion is worthier than mage!Hawke's... somone who does have to deal with demons mindjacking her might be projecting some of her own wishful thinking onto Merrill when she says that Merrill's actually not evil and stupid. Warrior!Hawke is more objective.

At the same time, warrior!Hawke can't really understand in the same way that mage!Hawke can. Sure, she can say blood magic is fine, she never has to deal with any of the consequences.

I imagine I'll have a stronger idea in my head once I've played my mage more.

I really liked this discussion, it gives me a different perspective on the relationship between a Warrior Hawke and an apostate Merrill. It does seem that a warrior (or even a rogue) Hawke would be taking a bigger leap of faith on Merrill's use of blood magic and her attempts to build a functional Eluvian.

Just curious, but why do you think it took three years for Merrill and Hawke to get together? I know the story dictates, but I found it odd that it would have three years for Hawke to express his feelings to Merrill.

[Blackout62]

ishmaeltheforsaken wrote...

Hot on the heels of Varric's shirt, I have even more terrible news.

Someone has made Merrill "sexy."

I don't want to link to it, because it makes me feel dirty. But modded!Isabela seems to have taught Merrill how to frolic topless.

I'll let that stew in your brains for a little while.

I have nothing against nudity in and of itself. I'm fine with breasts in sex scenes. But tearing off Merrill's robes in normal gameplay, purely for titillation, does not sit well with me. Isabela's cleavage is awesome and in character. But Merrill's nipples are just too far.

           R.I.P.
     Merrill's Virtue
        3/11-4/11
"We hardly knew her"

Absolute Internet corrupts absolutely.

[mesmerizedish]

LobselVith8 wrote...

Just curious, but why do you think it took three years for Merrill and Hawke to get together? I know the story dictates, but I found it odd that it would have three years for Hawke to express his feelings to Merrill.

Well, in my case, it was because Merrill kept ignoring my character's flirts. She got tired of it and rolled around with Isabela for a while. She'd rather get down with someone she doesn't love than pine for she does.

Of course, it all turned out to be Merrill being a [kitten]. She manned up eventually, and it all worked out.

Modifié par ishmaeltheforsaken, 08 avril 2011 - 10:58 .

[Knight of Dane]

Blackout62 wrote...

Knight of Dane wrote...

Updated my fic, the link is in my signature.
Direct link to chapter 6: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6831578/6/
Hope it works.

You need to start a new paragraph with every change of speaker.

Example:
"Buy me a drink?" A creamy accent came from the door to his room, it
opened and he instantly recognized the uniform of the seekers. It wasn't
Cassandra though. "Huh, are you 'seeking' me again?" He asked back to
her. "What do you want? Your colleague already questioned me and I still
have no idea where the champion is." The red haired woman sat down in
front of him and tossed a small pouch of coins towards him. "You are a
merchant, yes? This is a deal you and I make, not you and the chantry."

Multiple times while reading I couldn't figure out who was speaking. It should read as:

"Buy me a drink?" A creamy accent came from the door to his room, it
opened and he instantly recognized the uniform of the seekers. It wasn't
Cassandra though.
"Huh, are you 'seeking' me again?" He asked back to
her. "What do you want? Your colleague already questioned me and I still
have no idea where the champion is."
The red haired woman sat down in
front of him and tossed a small pouch of coins towards him. "You are a
merchant, yes? This is a deal you and I make, not you and the chantry."

I'd understand if you don't go back through your previous chapters and fix this but doing so in later chapters will lead to the reader more easily comprehending the the shifts in dialogue.

This was pretty prcise, thank you! I have had that critic with paragraphp before, my issue was just that people seemed to tell me that paragraph's were something else all the time.
I don't know how to translate the word to Danish, I'm not sure if "Paragraf" is the same thing entirely.

I will work on it.

[RVonE]

ishmaeltheforsaken wrote...

Hot on the heels of Varric's shirt, I have even more terrible news.

Someone has made Merrill "sexy."

I don't want to link to it, because it makes me feel dirty. But modded!Isabela seems to have taught Merrill how to frolic topless.

I'll let that stew in your brains for a little while.

I have nothing against nudity in and of itself. I'm fine with breasts in sex scenes. But tearing off Merrill's robes in normal gameplay, purely for titillation, does not sit well with me. Isabela's cleavage is awesome and in character. But Merrill's nipples are just too far.

           R.I.P.
     Merrill's Virtue
        3/11-4/11
"We hardly knew her"

I just looked up the file. I don't know what that guy was thinking but that doesn't look sexy at all. Also, her bust size seems a bit smaller than what her romance lingerie appeared to suggest. /creeper mode

[mesmerizedish]

RVonE wrote...

I just looked up the file. I don't know what that guy was thinking but that doesn't look sexy at all. Also, her bust size seems a bit smaller than what her romance lingerie appeared to suggest. /creeper mode

That's because it's just the model of a more binding robe retextured to look like bare skin.

[RVonE]

ishmaeltheforsaken wrote...

RVonE wrote...

I just looked up the file. I don't know what that guy was thinking but that doesn't look sexy at all. Also, her bust size seems a bit smaller than what her romance lingerie appeared to suggest. /creeper mode

That's because it's just the model of a more binding robe retextured to look like bare skin.

Of course.
Bianca should have a talk with that guy.

[mesmerizedish]

RVonE wrote...

Of course.
Bianca should have a talk with that guy.

She's so sociable