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[mesmerizedish]

I also like it. I'll be excited for when it's finished

[_Somebody]

Looks good.

[Bfler]

Very nice.

[Esbatty]

Chapter 5 is upon thee. Its short on purpose kind of a cliffhanger of sorts. And if I learned anything from my time on the BSN anytime a writer creates a cliffhanger moment, its because they hate you... the consumer. *nods* Yeah, I'm a bad boy. Ladies love bad boys. And fan fiction. Yeah.

[broutefoin]

After a few rage induced (4 I think) "thermo nuclear erasing" on her face, and several ( I mean SEVERAL!) quick face study sketches to work out my hand/eye coordination and proportions,  I have it down to something decent... I still need to fix the tattoo on her forehead, and her chin/lips need more work being a disfuntional perfetionist blows *sigh*

now if can only get the hair right before my mental doomsday clock reaches midnight <_<.

I will get rid of the mirror, focus more on their faces/chest.

now, to sleep I go before I Shift+Delete the whole thing and gnaw on someone's trachea in a fit of extreme belligerence.

cheers!

Modifié par broutefoin, 16 avril 2011 - 08:39 .

[Paraxial]

broutefoin wrote...
Edit - I'm going to snip the art, it's right above me and I don't want to be "that guy".

Wow. Great Male-Hawke/Merrill fanart, or just great Merrill fanart in general I suppose, is good to see.

Made my night.

Modifié par Bible Doctor, 16 avril 2011 - 08:45 .

[mesmerizedish]

@broutefoin: Merrill's face looks wonderful!

[Esbatty]

That, serah, is totally Merrill's face. And I dont particularly pay attention to her vassallin. Since I'm distracted by her eyes and lips and om nom nom

[PseudoEthnic]

Esbatty wrote...

Chapter 5 is upon thee. Its short on purpose kind of a cliffhanger of sorts. And if I learned anything from my time on the BSN anytime a writer creates a cliffhanger moment, its because they hate you... the consumer. *nods* Yeah, I'm a bad boy. Ladies love bad boys. And fan fiction. Yeah.

I'm not digging this. I'm not a big fan of Sebastian, but this chapter makes him OOC. Why would he attack Hawke and crew when he said that he would be foolish to attack him during the finale? Plus, I thought that he was more angry at Anders than Hawke. Not to mention that his line about how the champion is a companion to abominations and murderers is being very hypocritical. He killed alongside Hawke and his companions for four years, and he didn't put up a big fuss about that, then. What's the deal?

[Paraxial]

PseudoEthnic wrote...
What's the deal?

My guess would be that OP agrees with Anders and kept him alive. Whatever the case was I felt put off a bit by it too, I like Sebastian so it burned me somethin' fierce. At least it is well written though, can't fault him for writing his story how he wants it.

[Esbatty]

Daaaaaaaaayummmmmmmmm, there is a Dragon Age 2 like split on this chapter. I've already got some upset reviews and PMs on FF.net too.

I honestly can't explain it all in a post or a PM, but as I've said to others - "this is not a muahahahah moment for Sebastian. I am not making him a mustache twirler. Its a cliffhanger, it leaves you wondering, its very abrupt like the end of a tv episode you didn't know was gonna be two-parter. But I am glad this upset people, it means you care, either about the story or the characters. So just give me 1 more chapter before you decide to walk the plank. Okay? okay."

Also I do not hate Sebastian. I actually like him alot. He is dedicated, he is passionate, and he can hold quite the grudge. That and he is a fellow rogue, and I f**kin' love rogues. So yeah, just trust me on this.

[Bfler]

@broutefoin
Merrill's head looks fantastic. Go on with your drawing.

[Fieryeel]

I don't find it so OOC because I told my Sebastian to retake Starkhaven, and he was on full rivalry. And I spared Anders, so I wouldn't be too surprised.

[Paraxial]

Fieryeel wrote...
I spared Anders.

Spared Anders?



Threw that dude under a bus. ASAP.

[halokitty]

WOW! Seriously, that is the most perfect rendition of Merrill's face I've seen so far. Great work, keep going with it!

[_Somebody]

broutefoin wrote...

After a few rage induced (4 I think) "thermo nuclear erasing" on her face, and several ( I mean SEVERAL!) quick face study sketches to work out my hand/eye coordination and proportions,  I have it down to something decent... I still need to fix the tattoo on her forehead, and her chin/lips need more work being a disfuntional perfetionist blows *sigh*

now if can only get the hair right before my mental doomsday clock reaches midnight <_<.

I will get rid of the mirror, focus more on their faces/chest.

now, to sleep I go before I Shift+Delete the whole thing and gnaw on someone's trachea in a fit of extreme belligerence.

cheers!
*snip*

Wow, that looks great. Merrill's face looks perfect! 

[Blze001]

Hawke: "I think Merrill named this falcon sculpture Finnigan... no, wait, Finnigan is on the north face. This one is 'Messere Pointyface'."

That was priceless... simply priceless...

[_Somebody]

Blze001 wrote...

Hawke: "I think Merrill named this falcon sculpture Finnigan... no, wait, Finnigan is on the north face. This one is 'Messere Pointyface'."

That was priceless... simply priceless...

When did you get that? I kept clicking on the statue in Hawke's home, but never got it.

[broutefoin]

you get it from the window up the stairs, not the statue in the house, if you look outside, to the left, there is a falcon statue

[broutefoin]

and thanks for the kind words people, after some much needed sleep, my mental rage missiles have been disarmed, now, to the hair! *flies away*

[_Somebody]

broutefoin wrote...

you get it from the window up the stairs, not the statue in the house, if you look outside, to the left, there is a falcon statue

So its outside the house?

E: I see what you meant now. Still didnt get that dialogue though.

Modifié par Somebody, 16 avril 2011 - 05:59 .

[Hekate]

Just thought everyone should know the new XBOX patch is out. I wasn't sure at first but I went back to an old save and didn't get the Merrill glitch.

[broutefoin]

@ Somebody, just keep clicking, it should trigger at some point, most of the time i get a comment on Varric or the "put some clothes on man!" remark heh

[Paraxial]

Blze001 wrote...

Hawke: "I think Merrill named this falcon sculpture Finnigan... no, wait, Finnigan is on the north face. This one is 'Messere Pointyface'."

That was priceless... simply priceless...

I laughed more at 'Finnigan' than I did at 'Messere Pointyface'.

[Maria Caliban]

I can't get any of the rare dialogues. Because I'm horribly impatient and refuse to stand there and click away at a single hotspot as it plays the same dialogue over and over. Why don't they have it just go through a set of responses instead of randomly calling one?