AlanC9 wrote...
Different enough so I'd wish I'd chosen one of the other lines? Example, please.Xewaka wrote...
The content of the phrase is defined by the subtleties.AlanC9 wrote...
So what? I don't mean to be flip there, but since we can only pick one of the three or so lines that have already been written by the devs, how much difference would the subtleties make?Nighteye2 wrote...
It would be better, though not by much. A paraphrased intention still gives far too little detail about what your character intends. All the subtle nuances of intent are lost in the paraphrase.
Edit: rather, so you'd wish you'd chosen another line. I may have different standards than you have.
Let's keep with the example that spawned this discussion: [aggresive] Shut up!
Original phrase: I am in command. You do as I say.
Phrase I'd expect: Quit whining and shut your hole.
You will notice that the phrase I expect has a hint of frustation and a command for silence, whereas the original phrase has neither. It has a statement of hierarchy and a reminder.
If I want to express something, I will choose the wording that best approaches the idea I want to convey. In this case, since "Shut up!" does not content command, I might consider choosing "Now is not the time", as it approaches the sense of urgency I'm seeking.





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