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Sometimes the urge to write just ain't there. Usually, playing some ME will get the juices flowing, but I just haven't been feeling like putting fingers to keyboard unless it's to press "WASD" and click left mouse to fire.

But I tried a little exercise that turned out to be fun, making essentially "vanity plates" for a couple of fics I've written. I just GIS'd some screengrabs and used the pixl online image editor and they turned out pretty decent, aside from pixl's less than stellar font rendering. 

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Just Like Old Times

"Don't forget to introduce yourself to EDI, the ship's new artificial intelligence."

Tali looked over her shoulder at the Cerberus agent, contemplating what she just heard. Introduce yourself to the Cerberus A.I. that controls the ship and everything on it. Including even Shepard, maybe. She couldn't even bring herself to look at the Commander. She turned and the door sealed shut behind her, leaving her in a short deserted corridor.

The cold, sterile hall held no memories for her. When Shepard had said they were returning to the Normandy, she knew it wasn't going to be the same vessel, but she had assumed it would at least be an Alliance ship instead of a Cerberus privateer. She was alone, her marine escort all but wiped out, the lone survivor light years away on his way home where she should have gone. Instead, she was trapped on an enemy starship with the one man she trusted above all else their willing ally. She cursed her foolishness at agreeing to come aboard at all when in her heart she knew that man had died two years before.

"Welcome aboard, Tali'Zorah nas Reyya," a female voice said from a panel across from her, snapping her back to the now. A holographic sphere made of swirling dots materialzed and pulsed with the vocalization.

"vas Neema," Tali corrected the dots.

"I apologize. Our records of you are out of date. I will update them immediately. May I direct you to your quarters, or would you like to proceed to Engineering?"

She felt like a fool for leaving the briefing room without asking for directions, but wanted to leave before Shepard could offer to show her. She was angrier still that the virtual abomination had already started gathering intel on her. Worse, it had been listening the whole time and clued in she was lost. She weighed the options given. "My quarters, please."

"Please follow the indicator lights on the deck to starboard, and turn left to the CIC. Yeoman Chambers will attend to you."

Tali sighed deeply as soft blue lights in the floor tracked to a newly opened hatch. She followed through what appeared to be a lab and research facility where a one-horned salarian paced back and forth in front of a bench full of instruments. He muttered to himself and paid her no attention, but she felt relief at the sight of another non-human. She continued left through another hatch that opened into the CIC.

It was the Normandy, but not the Normandy. It had the same basic layout, with the central command area ringed with outward facing crew stations. The corridor to the cockpit stretched out of view. It seemed cold and sterile, brightly polished and perfect, without the scrapes and dents that showed people lived there. It was as soulless as the computer that controlled it. Against her better judgment, she scanned the room for a familiar face and found none.

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"They work for Cerberus," Tali pointed at the two humans standing next to Garrus. "Not for the Commander."

"C'mon, that's not fair," Jacob replied indignantly. "Shepard's the skipper. Period. He gives an order, we follow it. End of story. You act like we're all waiting to put a knife in his back."

Miranda held her arm out in front of him. "I'll handle this, Jacob."

"No, I want to hear," Tali said. "I want to know how loyal you will be when your Illusive Man orders you to eliminate Shepard when he's through being of use to you."

Jacob scowled. "Tali, you don't know what the hell you're talking about."

"Don't I? Maybe it's you who do not know." Tali turned to the recruits at her end of the table. "Those of us who were on the Normandy, the real Normandy know plenty. We saw first hand what Cerberus is capable of. Unspeakable cruelty. Unbelievable treachery. The rumors you've heard don't do justice to the truth."

She looked at her two human friends who wore the uniform of her enemy. "Do I know what I'm talking about? Joker? Doctor? You performed the autopsy on Admiral Kahoku did you not?"

Doctor Chakwas looked down at the floor and nodded."Yes. I did. And on the others. I wouldn't have believed it if I hadn't seen it myself."

Joker glanced across the table to see Jacob and Miranda glaring at him. He adjusted his ball cap and cleared his throat. "I think I'd to talk to my lawyer before answering any questions."

Tali looked once again at the turian. "Garrus? How many Cerberus agents do you think you've killed?"

"Personally?" Garrus thought for a moment. "Sixteen, between Binthu and Nepheron. Shared with the rest of the squad, I'd estimate we're responsible for perhaps sixty or seventy deaths in their organization, assuming they were not mercenaries in Cerberus' employ."

Jacob frowned at Garrus' emotionless tally of human lives. As he told the turian in the armory that morning, he had never heard of Cerberus operations on those planets until Shepard brought them up. He didn't ask what the results of those missions were, but to hear Garrus casually throw out numbers like that made his stomach turn cold, regardless of the reason. Was it because it was an alien that pulled the trigger, he wondered? Or because of all the people on the ship, he knew Garrus Vakarian would never fire a shot that would put innocents in danger?

Miranda, on the other hand, did not blink an eye.

"And you?" Garrus asked Tali politely.

Tali looked down. "I don't keep count."

"Thirteen," Miranda said levelly.

"I figured you'd know," Tali told the Cerberus statistician, "And I don't regret a single one. I know Garrus doesn't either."

"That much is true," Garrus confirmed.

"Then why the hell are you standing with them now?" Tali yelled, her voice tinged with an equal mix of anger, disbelief, and the pain of betrayal.


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Am I getting any more writing done? Nah, not really. But at least I'm having fun... I recommend it to anybody else stuck staring at a block.

Modifié par ElectricZ, 21 février 2011 - 03:57 .


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Tomorrow's dawn is one of my favourite fics of all time. It certainly deserves a poster!

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Nice work. I like the first one best. It has that 'clean and professional' style that I enjoy.

I'd love to do something similar for my fic (seeing as how writer's blocks are coming more frequently for me between chapters). I've always wanted to make a sort of book cover, kind of like what Terror_K did for their major fic.

Problem is, my story is original and does not have any one the Mass Effect characters in it, aside from short appearances of minor characters. Additionally, the characters that are there are rather unique in their appearance, so just pulling screencaps of generic NPCs from the game won't work for me.

Plus I just have no skill in the visual design department. I can still dream about it though, right?

...Right?

Modifié par Severyx, 18 février 2011 - 12:42 .


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Yeah, it's a lot easier to whip something like these up when clip art is readily available as screengrabs. You can at least create some custom human characters with the character creator in the game, and you could always grab some screen grabs of background characters to stand in for your original characters... As for visual design skills, you don't have to actually show anybody unless you're happy with it.



At the very least you might get frustrated enough by the whole exercise to get yourself writing again. ;)

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Grunt stood up from the hull. "Where are you going?"

"What the **** do you care?"

"Shepard gave us an order to stand watch." Grunt said.

Jack slung her pack over her shoulder and stalked back out to stand face-to-chest with Grunt. His teeth were very white and sharp, and she tilted her head back so they were only inches away from her nose. "I'm not your boyfriend's ****. That's your specialty, isn't it?"

"I thought you were smart, Jack," Grunt said, glowering down at her. "You're disappointing me."

"Funny coming from a science project who calls himself Grunt," Jack sneered and walked back to the meadow. "He's using you. You're just too dumb to see it."

Grunt called after her. "I was wrong. You're not stupid, you're weak."

Jack stopped cold. "What did you say?"

"You're weak," Grunt enunciated clearly. "You've got all that power. But you won't learn. And it's not because you can't."

Jack paced back and forth, energy crackling up and down her arms. "You want to find out how strong I am?"

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Tomorrow's Dawn

The salarian stalked out the door. When the hatch closed behind him, Tali breathed a sigh of relief. "Thanks," she told Garrus. "I really don't need an audience for this."

Garrus nodded. "You going to be okay here?"

"Definitely. Mordin's setup is much more appropriate for data operations than what we've got in engineering," Tali said.

"That's not what I meant," Garrus said. "Are you okay?"

Tali set her tool bag on the table next to Legion's feet. "Why wouldn't I be?"

"You used to drag people in to watch you tear down one of these things. It was almost a spectator sport."

"Was it?" Tali searched through her satchel for nothing in particular.

Garrus leaned against the wall. "Look... We all know how badly damaged he is. No one's going to think less of you if you can't bring him back."

Tali slammed her hands down on the table and whirled around to face the turian.

Garrus felt the temperature in the room drop twenty degrees. "Ah, I guess you're not worried about that. What is it, then? What's bothering you?"

"What's bothering me?" Tali's eyes burned behind her faceplate. "Everybody treating Legion like its a damn person. Calling it 'he.' 'How's he doing?', 'Can you fix him?', 'It's terrible what happened to him!' Even giving it a name in the first place!"

"People treat machines with affection all the time," Garrus said calmly. "It's natural when you work with them in close proximity. Just ask your little friend Chik'tikka. I'm sure she would agree."

"When was the last time any of you held a vigil for my combat drone?"

Garrus shrugged. "Never, now that you mention it. But I don't recall the last time she engaged me in meaningful conversation, either. Look, Legion was special, I'll admit it. I didn't particularly like him when Shepard powered him on, but he grew on me. He grew on all of us."

"Well then," Tali snapped. "All of you can go to hell."

Garrus balked at the sudden assault. "Hey-"

Tali's tone got louder and harsher. "These things wiped out my entire civilization and drove us from our homeworld! And the entire galaxy turned their backs on us. You, the asari, the salarians! You banished us from civilized space for creating artificial intelligence, and called it genocide when we tried to fight back! We have been completely ostracized by every species in the galaxy for three hundred years!"

Garrus folded his arms across his chest and watched her as she paced around the table. This obviously ran a lot deeper than nicknames and the proper use of pronouns.

Tali stared down at Legion as she circled around. "They sided with the reapers. They attacked the Citadel. They've killed who knows how many of my people. My friends. My father..." she choked back her tears. "They've brought nothing but death and destruction wherever they go. And in spite of it all, the quarians are still the villains. Most planets would rather see the geth show up rather than the migrant fleet. And not once has anyone given us the tiniest bit of sympathy or help."

Garrus let his gaze drop. He knew she was correct. Quarians were viewed as a plague by most, even amongst his own kind. Untrustworthy, disloyal, deceptive... everything Tali was not. And collectively, over the centuries, the entire galaxy quietly learned to ignore them.

Tali gripped the edge of the table and shook her head. "And even here, on the Normandy, amongst my friends... Legion told you geth are to be trusted and I say they are still dangerous. You tell me... Who did you all believe?"

Garrus still looked at the floor and said nothing.

The silence seared Tali's heart worse than anything the turian could have said. She turned around to face him. "That's what I thought."

Modifié par ElectricZ, 21 février 2011 - 04:03 .


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No artwork for it, but chapter 5 of For Tomorrow We Die is up on FF.net.

Doing cover art was actually a good way to get over some writer's block. I highly recommend it. Grab you a free image editor like GIMP, or the pixl online editor, find some screenshots, and go to town!

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Chapter 6 of For Tomorrow We Die is up on FF.net

But for the most entertainment bang for your credit, check out Khambilo's Mass Effect Hipster Thread. It's totally deck.

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Gotta keep pushin' that fanfic! Chapter 7 of For Tomorrow We Die is up on FF.net.

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I made this for Tasha vas Nar Rayya's Heroes Never Die fic:
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And an accompanying banner:
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Nodscouter wrote...

I made this for Tasha vas Nar Rayya's Heroes Never Die fic:


Try putting a black border around the whole shebang, or maybe shrinking the title so it doesn't run to the edges of the artwork.

Also, maybe move Shepard and Garrus closer together at the bottom, unless you're trying to indicate some kind of distance between them. Cover art should reflect the emotion of the piece you're representing, at least in this amateur's opinion. ;)

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Chapter 9 is up, with a quickie vanity plate for...

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For Tomorrow We Die

"And let's not forget about our new friends we're so eager to help... The quarians. There's a reason they've have been stuck in space since before humans had powered flight. They've had countless opportunities to atone for unleashing the geth into civilized space. Have they done it? No. Have they even tried? No. Are they going to? No! According to them, they're the victims. It's the geth's fault the quarians gave them sentience, just like it's their fault they decided to use it. Had the geth been just a little more successful in their rebellion, who knows what problems that would have avoided down the line? I certainly don't support genocide, but in the grand scheme of things, you gotta wonder if the geth would have attacked us at all if they had better examples of organics to learn from.

"The 'Migrant' Fleet. Ha. Let's take a close look at what that means. Migration, by definition, means moving from one destination to another. Look it up in the dictionary. 'To move from one country or region and settle in another.' The quarians don't migrate. They're not settling anywhere. They've never even tried adapting or integrating with any other culture. It's an infinite universe, filled with an infinite number of worlds they could discover and colonize, and they've got a fleet larger than any other species in the galaxy combined. So why haven't they done it? In the past century, we've colonized dozens of systems, hundreds of worlds. It takes hard work. Perseverance. But at a more basic, simple level, we decided to do it so our species wouldn't be confined to one world. So that humanity, regardless of what happens to Earth, will persevere. You don't keep all your eggs in one basket.

"The quarians just don't seem to have that drive. Is it any wonder they lost their homeworld? Is it any wonder they don't have a single colony to call home? Who's to blame for that? I got two guesses for you. And it ain't the geth, and it certainly ain't us! No, they'd rather wander space for the rest of eternity. You know, it's probably bred into them by this point. Space is their home.

"The 'Migrant' Fleet... Maybe it's time we start calling the flotilla what it really is. The Vagrant Fleet. They don't contribute. They don't build. They take. They consume. They descend on a system like locusts and strip bare any planet they can reach. They steal, and pilfer from those who are truly struggling out on the rim of civilized space, robbing what other honest, decent folk worked hard to earn, and when everything of value is gone they move on. It's a vagrant fleet. An invasion fleet.

"Even their mere passing will tie up a mass relay for days. Imagine having to wait a week before traversing the Charon relay just to get to Arcturus. Imagine for a moment, what would happen if the Vagrant Fleet were to come to Sol. I hate to say it, but if the quarians and geth can't make peace, can that be far behind? Are we going to offer up our home to the poor, helpless quarians? Is our solar system next to host the great galactic tent city, until what little resources we have left are sucked dry?

"It makes you think, doesn't it? Now you know I don't support extremist groups like Earth First, Terra Firma or Cerberus. But I understand them. I understand the need for them. In a galaxy where every other species looks out for itself... where they predate our ascension by centuries, and in some cases millennia, sometimes it takes a few radical voices to make us pay attention to what is going on right under our noses. We have it pretty good here, and it makes us complacent. And even though Chicken Little runs around with his tiny wings in the air screaming 'the sky is falling'... sometimes it's not just an acorn falling from a tree. This time, the sky may truly be falling."

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Chapter 10 of For Tomorrow We Die is up, along with a new vanity plate... Made the layout a little cleaner and somber, and the explosion on the liveship a little more explodey...

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...and chapters 11, 12 and 13 of For Tomorrow We Die are up on FF.net for your reading pleasure.

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For Tomorrow We Die, now with Chapter 14 and 15 included FREE!*


*with chapters 1-13. Click of mouse not included.

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Playing around with combining screenshots again...

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Pretty simple one, just taking a shot of Tali and pasting over one of Legion and then blurring it to make it look like depth of field.

With a paragon Shep, I've always gotten the feeling that Legion (and by definition the other geth) hold a special reverence for their creators that obviously is not shared with any other species. The quarians for the most part want the geth to drop dead, but with Legion's description of how the geth treat Rannoch and their gradual development of emotions, it's as if they desire reconciliation though they don't know how to ask for or offer it.

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Tomorrow's Dawn was amazing, currently holding off on FTWD until its complete!

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Thanks, Thang! Gonna be a while FTWD is actually complete, though. I took a break to do a lighter piece and am back on the case, but as it stands at 60K words it's maybe 1/4-1/3 complete. My goal is to get it done before ME3 comes out. Wish me luck. ;)

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I couldn't wait, each chapter kept pulling me in so I finished up to ch 20, great work, looking forward to the next few chapters.

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*SCROLLSCROLLSCROLL* Nuh-nuh-nuh-nuh, don't look at any more pics, you saw the first one and read the excerpt, now go back and read the whole damned thing...


Thanks =)

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And the hits just keep on a-hittin'... Got blocked on For Tomorrow We Die, so you know what that means! More shameless self promotion and graphic gratification!

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Friends Like These

"Come see me in engineering when you get back. Urgent. -T"

Garrus plucked the handwritten note written on a purple stick-it from the hatch to the forward battery. Tali is at it again, he thought to himself as he folded the note between his talons. He
sighed and walked slowly back down the stairs towards the lift.

Mess Sargeant Gardner nodded at him as he passed by the galley a second time. "Forget something, Garrus?"

He held up the note as he walked. "Nope. Just another note from my secret admirer. How long ago was she up here?"

"Bout ten minutes. She ducked into see the Doc right afterwards. Maybe you can catch her."

"Thanks," Garrus said, his eyes turning toward the med bay windows. The compartment was completely empty and Dr. Chakwas nowhere in sight. He wondered what had gotten under Tali's suit this time?

Ever since coming aboard, the she had been obsessed with the idea that Cerberus was spying on her and everyone on the ship. So when she had something important to discuss, she wouldn't use the comm channels or instant messenger  because it might be monitored. So she'd leave cryptic notes for secret meetings when she wanted to talk about something sensitive, which  usually meant a field trip to the drive core. But, he had to remind  himself that she'd only been on the ship for a few weeks and hadn't had time to adjust and trust the new crew like he had. She just needed time.

Besides, it gets you out of the battery, he thought. He'd been spending far too much time in there as it was. After two months on the new Normandy, he was almost finished calibrating the weapon systems to peak efficiency. Another day or two and he'd be done with it, he was sure. He could afford to take a little time off. He sauntered through the mess, waving or nodding at the off duty personnel sitting around the tables as he made his way to the lift.

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"Garrus!" Tali stood up from the rail overlooking the drive core. Joker and Dr. Chakwas both stood with their back to the access way but turned when Tali said his name. The throbbing hum of the mass effect generators filled the chamber.

"Well isn't this a nice little gathering,"  Garrus said, joining the small circle. "Should we call Shepard down here? Make it a proper reunion?"

At the mention of Shepard's name, Tali stiffened and began to pace. "That's what we're here to talk about."

"A reunion?" Garrus said, glancing about in confusion. "Let me guess. You're having trouble picking out a centerpiece for the table?"

"No," Tali stopped and glared at him. "We're talking about Shepard!"

Joker gave Garrus a here-we-go-again look.

"What about him?"

Tali pulled up her omnitool. "I've noticed something. Every time the Normandy has docked at the Citadel, Shepard checks himself out and is gone an extra hour. We've been back four times since I've been on board. And each time-"

Garrus cleared his throat. It was no secret that on the original Alliance Normandy, Tali had a strange habit of turning up wherever the Commander happened to be almost any time he wasn't in CIC. It stopped being coincidence after the day Kaiden observed Tali entering and leaving the galley carrying her protein shake no less than five times. It turned out Shepard had his regular lunch delayed by a lengthy call to the Council. And on her sixth pass through she 'happened' to run into him and he invited her to sit and eat with him.

After that, Tali's "excursions" throughout the ship in search of the Commander became legendary. He tilted his head, but peered at the quarian from under his brow. "Tali, you're not... uh... stalking him again, are you?"

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I absolutely adore how you wrote up Chakwas in chapter 3. Hilarious.

As thanks for letting me use your tagline, I'm putting that fic in my author's notes to let everyone see it. I'm so endosing it!

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LuxDragon wrote...

I absolutely adore how you wrote up Chakwas in chapter 3. Hilarious.

As thanks for letting me use your tagline, I'm putting that fic in my author's notes to let everyone see it. I'm so endosing it!


My pleasure... Glad it's being put to good use. ;)

And one good plug deserves another -- you pimped yo' fanfic up quite nicely. PirateWars did a mighty fine job for Fight for the Lost:

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Friends Like These

I will confess, this one made me actualy leave my seat and fall on the floor in laughter.

Tommorow's Dawn was for the most part very good, but the ending(s) felt just a tad too sappy.  Just a tad.  Still very good overall.

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wilhelm Screamer wrote...

I will confess, this one made me actualy leave my seat and fall on the floor in laughter.

Tommorow's Dawn was for the most part very good, but the ending(s) felt just a tad too sappy.  Just a tad.  Still very good overall.


Thanks! Had a lot of fun writing "Friends."

And believe it or not, I know what you mean about TD... It's a fine line to walk between emotion and fluff, sentimentality and sap. The thing is, both Legion's demise or a reconciliation between Tali and Legion (and by extention, quarian and geth) in my mind couldn't be anything but an extremely emotional moment. It was tough to keep from going overboard. It's been a while since I did that one - might go back and fine tune it at some point.