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[Dreaming-in-Shadow]

...my hand has a mind of its own.
I sit down to draw Fem!Hawke, Carver and Bethany as little kids, then I look and what have I drawn? Nate and Anders kissing. *facepalm*

[eleridragon]

YamiSnuffles wrote...

And so goes the sordid tale of Garrett and Marian Hawke...

As it turned out, the master of the Alicorn ranch was a very kindly fellow named FabAnders. FabAnders loved every one of his Alicorns very much and made sure to ride each one daily so that they would know they were loved. Thus, when Garret and Marian asked to borrow an Alicorn or two, FabAnders became anxious.

"I'm not sure I could part with one of my Alicorns, even for a little while," FabAnders told them. "I get very lonely on my own since my dear cat, Ser Pounce ran off. Pounce said he was going to lead a kitten army to save the princesses in the Circle Mountains and I have not seen him since."

Marian's face lit up. "Why sir," she started. "We are heading to the Circle Mountains ourselves to save those very princesses. If we save them, perhaps we can bring Ser Pounce back with us when we return the Alicorns we borrow."

"You would do that? For me?" FabAnders asked with a nervous blush across his cheeks.

"But of course," Marian replied.

FabAnders stared at the ground, suddenly too nervous to look at Marian. Still staring at the ground, he asked, "Well, I know we just met, but I feel like I already know you. Perhaps... perhaps when you return with my Alicorns... you could move in with me?"

Garrett was about to laugh and offer FabAnders a sandwich just as they had with Mermanders. Much to his surprise, though, his sister spoke up first.

"I want to be right here," she said, with a slightly deranged smile. "UNTIL THE DAY WE DIE!!!"

With that, FabAnders jumped on Marian. Garrett had to pry the two apart.

"I think we ought to focus on saving the princesses before we make any hasty promises, sister," he said.

FabAnders and Marian both looked chagrined but agreed. They worked out a deal and then FabAnders led the siblings to his two strongest Alicorns. Although he assured them they were more than up to the task, Marian and Garrett found them to be a bit of a bumpy ride. Actually, no matter what FabAnders might have said, they could have sworn that no one had ever ridden these Alicorns because they seemed so uncomfortable being mounted.

*this... gets worse more awesome the more I write it I think. Maybe I shouldn't write on the fly. Or maybe I always should. I'm not sure*

Fixed it for you

[Dreaming-in-Shadow]

YamiSnuffles wrote...

And so goes the sordid tale of Garrett and Marian Hawke...

As it turned out, the master of the Alicorn ranch was a very kindly fellow named FabAnders. FabAnders loved every one of his Alicorns very much and made sure to ride each one daily so that they would know they were loved. Thus, when Garret and Marian asked to borrow an Alicorn or two, FabAnders became anxious.

"I'm not sure I could part with one of my Alicorns, even for a little while," FabAnders told them. "I get very lonely on my own since my dear cat, Ser Pounce ran off. Pounce said he was going to lead a kitten army to save the princesses in the Circle Mountains and I have not seen him since."

Marian's face lit up. "Why sir," she started. "We are heading to the Circle Mountains ourselves to save those very princesses. If we save them, perhaps we can bring Ser Pounce back with us when we return the Alicorns we borrow."

"You would do that? For me?" FabAnders asked with a nervous blush across his cheeks.

"But of course," Marian replied.

FabAnders stared at the ground, suddenly too nervous to look at Marian. Still staring at the ground, he asked, "Well, I know we just met, but I feel like I already know you. Perhaps... perhaps when you return with my Alicorns... you could move in with me?"

Garrett was about to laugh and offer FabAnders a sandwich just as they had with Mermanders. Much to his surprise, though, his sister spoke up first.

"I want to be right here," she said, with a slightly deranged smile. "UNTIL THE DAY WE DIE!!!"

With that, FabAnders jumped on Marian. Garrett had to pry the two apart.

"I think we ought to focus on saving the princesses before we make any hasty promises, sister," he said.

FabAnders and Marian both looked chagrined but agreed. They worked out a deal and then FabAnders led the siblings to his two strongest Alicorns. Although he assured them they were more than up to the task, Marian and Garrett found them to be a bit of a bumpy ride. Actually, no matter what FabAnders might have said, they could have sworn that no one had ever ridden these Alicorns because they seemed so uncomfortable being mounted.

*this... gets worse the more I write it I think. Maybe I shouldn't write on the fly. Or maybe I always should. I'm not sure*

 This is the most beautiful story I have ever read! <3
XD

[Sialater]

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

Sialater wrote...

YOu mean when the romance, started?

Nope. He's either a Templar, a GW or dead by then.

I really wanted protective younger brother banter, dammit!

Templar!Carver and Anders will make interesting brothers-in-law... 

I had to laugh out loud at that one.  

GWCarver as well.  

Modifié par Sialater, 22 avril 2011 - 06:56 .

[autumnyte]

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

...my hand has a mind of its own.
I sit down to draw Fem!Hawke, Carver and Bethany as little kids, then I look and what have I drawn? Nate and Anders kissing. *facepalm*

I like the way your hand thinks.

[Dreaming-in-Shadow]

autumnyte wrote...

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

...my hand has a mind of its own.
I sit down to draw Fem!Hawke, Carver and Bethany as little kids, then I look and what have I drawn? Nate and Anders kissing. *facepalm*

I like the way your hand thinks.

It appears Nate even looks grumpy when he's kissing. XD

[Sialater]

YamiSnuffles wrote...

And so goes the sordid tale of Garrett and Marian Hawke...

As it turned out, the master of the Alicorn ranch was a very kindly fellow named FabAnders. FabAnders loved every one of his Alicorns very much and made sure to ride each one daily so that they would know they were loved. Thus, when Garret and Marian asked to borrow an Alicorn or two, FabAnders became anxious.

"I'm not sure I could part with one of my Alicorns, even for a little while," FabAnders told them. "I get very lonely on my own since my dear cat, Ser Pounce ran off. Pounce said he was going to lead a kitten army to save the princesses in the Circle Mountains and I have not seen him since."

Marian's face lit up. "Why sir," she started. "We are heading to the Circle Mountains ourselves to save those very princesses. If we save them, perhaps we can bring Ser Pounce back with us when we return the Alicorns we borrow."

"You would do that? For me?" FabAnders asked with a nervous blush across his cheeks.

"But of course," Marian replied.

FabAnders stared at the ground, suddenly too nervous to look at Marian. Still staring at the ground, he asked, "Well, I know we just met, but I feel like I already know you. Perhaps... perhaps when you return with my Alicorns... you could move in with me?"

Garrett was about to laugh and offer FabAnders a sandwich just as they had with Mermanders. Much to his surprise, though, his sister spoke up first.

"I want to be right here," she said, with a slightly deranged smile. "UNTIL THE DAY WE DIE!!!"

With that, FabAnders jumped on Marian. Garrett had to pry the two apart.

"I think we ought to focus on saving the princesses before we make any hasty promises, sister," he said.

FabAnders and Marian both looked chagrined but agreed. They worked out a deal and then FabAnders led the siblings to his two strongest Alicorns. Although he assured them they were more than up to the task, Marian and Garrett found them to be a bit of a bumpy ride. Actually, no matter what FabAnders might have said, they could have sworn that no one had ever ridden these Alicorns because they seemed so uncomfortable being mounted.

*this... gets worse the more I write it I think. Maybe I shouldn't write on the fly. Or maybe I always should. I'm not sure*

I think the most interesting part of your story is that they still haven't gotten dressed and Garrett is still wearing a shell bra.

[YamiSnuffles]

Sialater wrote...

I think the most interesting part of your story is that they still haven't gotten dressed and Garrett is still wearing a shell bra.

Hahaha. This is what happens, apparently, when I churn out fiction. It gets even smuttier than I intended. But now I think I have to keep it that way... at least for now.

[Dunizel]

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

...I have the strangest urge to draw Nathaniel and Anders making out...

Strangest?
Here?

It is a glorious urge, and shall be followed!

Yami your story is fabolous! I am so refreshing the page to read the next chapter! I'm enchanted!


p.s: *chagrined*...I so imagined a Bella-Marian xD

[Dreaming-in-Shadow]

YamiSnuffles wrote...

Sialater wrote...

I think the most interesting part of your story is that they still haven't gotten dressed and Garrett is still wearing a shell bra.

Hahaha. This is what happens, apparently, when I churn out fiction. It gets even smuttier than I intended. But now I think I have to keep it that way... at least for now.

You do have to keep it that way!

Hey f it makes it any better, I started drawing the Hawke siblings being all cute, ended up with Nate and Anders kissing, and now it kind of looks like they're doing... something else.

...for science, of course. Maybe I should make Nate shirtless...

[Sialater]

YamiSnuffles wrote...

Sialater wrote...

I think the most interesting part of your story is that they still haven't gotten dressed and Garrett is still wearing a shell bra.

Hahaha. This is what happens, apparently, when I churn out fiction. It gets even smuttier than I intended. But now I think I have to keep it that way... at least for now.

Yes, you MUST keep it that way.  FabAnders making out with a naked Marian in front of her brother is hysterical.  

[0o-Constance-o0]

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

...my hand has a mind of its own.
I sit down to draw Fem!Hawke, Carver and Bethany as little kids, then I look and what have I drawn? Nate and Anders kissing. *facepalm*

Oh please do post it dear

[Dreaming-in-Shadow]

0o-Constance-o0 wrote...

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

...my hand has a mind of its own.
I sit down to draw Fem!Hawke, Carver and Bethany as little kids, then I look and what have I drawn? Nate and Anders kissing. *facepalm*

Oh please do post it dear

Will do, as soon as it's finished and once I've determined whether they're almost having sex or if I'm just perverted.

[SmilingDeceit]

 I give up trying to catch on this thread. 15ish pages since I went to bed this morning? *shakesfist*

Why do I seem to miss the good debates when sleeping? 

[legbamel]

YamiSnuffles wrote...
And so goes the sordid tale of Garrett and Marian Hawke...

As it turned out, the master of the Alicorn ranch was a very kindly fellow named FabAnders. FabAnders loved every one of his Alicorns very much and made sure to ride each one daily so that they would know they were loved. Thus, when Garret and Marian asked to borrow an Alicorn or two, FabAnders became anxious.

"I'm not sure I could part with one of my Alicorns, even for a little while," FabAnders told them. "I get very lonely on my own since my dear cat, Ser Pounce ran off. Pounce said he was going to lead a kitten army to save the princesses in the Circle Mountains and I have not seen him since."

Marian's face lit up. "Why sir," she started. "We are heading to the Circle Mountains ourselves to save those very princesses. If we save them, perhaps we can bring Ser Pounce back with us when we return the Alicorns we borrow."

"You would do that? For me?" FabAnders asked with a nervous blush across his cheeks.

"But of course," Marian replied.

FabAnders stared at the ground, suddenly too nervous to look at Marian. Still staring at the ground, he asked, "Well, I know we just met, but I feel like I already know you. Perhaps... perhaps when you return with my Alicorns... you could move in with me?"

Garrett was about to laugh and offer FabAnders a sandwich just as they had with Mermanders. Much to his surprise, though, his sister spoke up first.

"I want to be right here," she said, with a slightly deranged smile. "UNTIL THE DAY WE DIE!!!"

With that, FabAnders jumped on Marian. Garrett had to pry the two apart.

"I think we ought to focus on saving the princesses before we make any hasty promises, sister," he said.

FabAnders and Marian both looked chagrined but agreed. They worked out a deal and then FabAnders led the siblings to his two strongest Alicorns. Although he assured them they were more than up to the task, Marian and Garrett found them to be a bit of a bumpy ride. Actually, no matter what FabAnders might have said, they could have sworn that no one had ever ridden these Alicorns because they seemed so uncomfortable being mounted.

*this... gets worse the more I write it I think. Maybe I shouldn't write on the fly. Or maybe I always should. I'm not sure*

Yes.  Always.  More. 

[0o-Constance-o0]

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

0o-Constance-o0 wrote...

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

...my hand has a mind of its own.
I sit down to draw Fem!Hawke, Carver and Bethany as little kids, then I look and what have I drawn? Nate and Anders kissing. *facepalm*

Oh please do post it dear

Will do, as soon as it's finished and once I've determined whether they're almost having sex or if I'm just perverted.

the less clothes the better be sure to make it nice and chaste, yes?

[Dreaming-in-Shadow]

0o-Constance-o0 wrote...

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

0o-Constance-o0 wrote...

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

...my hand has a mind of its own.
I sit down to draw Fem!Hawke, Carver and Bethany as little kids, then I look and what have I drawn? Nate and Anders kissing. *facepalm*

Oh please do post it dear

Will do, as soon as it's finished and once I've determined whether they're almost having sex or if I'm just perverted.

the less clothes the better be sure to make it nice and chaste, yes?

...that... depends... does "chaste" translate as being very, very close together with Nate shirtless and with his hand on Anders' butt?
In that case, yeah. My drawing has taken the vow of chastity... 

[0o-Constance-o0]

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

0o-Constance-o0 wrote...

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

0o-Constance-o0 wrote...

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

...my hand has a mind of its own.
I sit down to draw Fem!Hawke, Carver and Bethany as little kids, then I look and what have I drawn? Nate and Anders kissing. *facepalm*

Oh please do post it dear

Will do, as soon as it's finished and once I've determined whether they're almost having sex or if I'm just perverted.

the less clothes the better be sure to make it nice and chaste, yes?

...that... depends... does "chaste" translate as being very, very close together with Nate shirtless and with his hand on Anders' butt?
In that case, yeah. My drawing has taken the vow of chastity... 

This is acceptable, but filthy fanfiction writing mind will happily fill in the blanks

[Heidenreich]

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

0o-Constance-o0 wrote...

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

0o-Constance-o0 wrote...

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

...my hand has a mind of its own.
I sit down to draw Fem!Hawke, Carver and Bethany as little kids, then I look and what have I drawn? Nate and Anders kissing. *facepalm*

Oh please do post it dear

Will do, as soon as it's finished and once I've determined whether they're almost having sex or if I'm just perverted.

the less clothes the better be sure to make it nice and chaste, yes?

...that... depends... does "chaste" translate as being very, very close together with Nate shirtless and with his hand on Anders' butt?
In that case, yeah. My drawing has taken the vow of chastity... 

I demand unfinished posting.


Now.

[SmilingDeceit]

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

...that... depends... does "chaste" translate as being very, very close together with Nate shirtless and with his hand on Anders' butt?
In that case, yeah. My drawing has taken the vow of chastity... 

Chastity? In this thread? Such things are an injustice and must be purged! 

[legbamel]

Heidenreich wrote...

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

0o-Constance-o0 wrote...

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

0o-Constance-o0 wrote...

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...
...my hand has a mind of its own.
I sit down to draw Fem!Hawke, Carver and Bethany as little kids, then I look and what have I drawn? Nate and Anders kissing. *facepalm*

Oh please do post it dear

Will do, as soon as it's finished and once I've determined whether they're almost having sex or if I'm just perverted

the less clothes the better be sure to make it nice and chaste, yes?

...that... depends... does "chaste" translate as being very, very close together with Nate shirtless and with his hand on Anders' butt?
In that case, yeah. My drawing has taken the vow of chastity... 

I demand unfinished posting.

Now.

So that we can...critique it, of course.  To help you do your best. 

[Heidenreich]

legbamel wrote...

Heidenreich wrote...

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

0o-Constance-o0 wrote...

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...

0o-Constance-o0 wrote...

Dreaming-in-Shadow wrote...
...my hand has a mind of its own.
I sit down to draw Fem!Hawke, Carver and Bethany as little kids, then I look and what have I drawn? Nate and Anders kissing. *facepalm*

Oh please do post it dear

Will do, as soon as it's finished and once I've determined whether they're almost having sex or if I'm just perverted

the less clothes the better be sure to make it nice and chaste, yes?

...that... depends... does "chaste" translate as being very, very close together with Nate shirtless and with his hand on Anders' butt?
In that case, yeah. My drawing has taken the vow of chastity... 

I demand unfinished posting.

Now.

So that we can...critique it, of course.  To help you do your best. 

Oh.. Of course:innocent:

[YamiSnuffles]

I don't even know where this is going any more but, here ya go...

It turned out that the Alicorns were indeed magnificent mounts once they got used to you riding them. The Hawke twins were able to ride them long and hard without the Alicorns ever tiring. They certainly had wonderful stamina. This stamina allowed them to ride until they had nearly reached the forest at the foot of the mountains. They could have gone much farther but the Alicorns also had quite the appetite.

Garrett and Marian stopped to allow the Alicorns to graze. Every so often, Marian would slip them a bit of cheese from the rations FabAnders had kindly provided them with. Garrett, meanwhile, decided to stretch his legs. Riding the Alicorns might be the fastest way for him to get where he wanted, but it sure was tiring.

While Garrett wandered through the forest, he ran into a large wolf. The wolf was sleek and beautiful, with strange white markings covering its fur. Garrett approached the beast cautiously. The wolf growled as he drew closer.

"Halt, human. I know where you are going and I will not have it," the creature snarled.

Garrett was too surprised to take in what the wolf had said. "You can speak?" he gasped.

"Of course I can speak. What do you take me for?" the wolf retorted. "I am Fenris. I am the guardian of this forest and I will not let you pass. You seek to free the wretched princesses."

"Surely they cannot be so bad," Garrett said.

"They are," Fenris huffed. "It was a princess that once made me her pet and called me Messer Grumpy Pants. She locked me in her bedroom and forced me into the most ridiculous clothes. They are all like that."

Garrett paused to consider the situation. He did not want to kill Fenris, but he saw it might come to that if he and Marian tried to press on to the forest. Then he saw another option.

"You could come with us," he offered. "If you have not changed your mind about freeing the princesses by the time we reach them, then you are free to try to stop us."

Fenris examined Garrett closely. After a time he said, "Alright, human, I accept your offer. I sense no lie in your words."

And so, Fenris the wolf followed Garret back to Marian and the Alicorns. Once Garrett explained the deal he had made, the party set off once more. By the end of the day they reached the edge of the Forest of Necroboners.

...

Modifié par YamiSnuffles, 22 avril 2011 - 07:27 .

[Dreaming-in-Shadow]

YamiSnuffles wrote...

I don't even know where this is going any more but, here ya go...

It turned out that the Alicorns were indeed magnificent mounts once they got used to you riding them. The Hawke twins were able to ride them long and hard without the Alicorns ever tiring. They certainly had wonderful stamina. This stamina allowed them to ride until they had nearly reached the forest at the foot of the mountains. They could have gone much farther but the Alicorns also had quite the appetite.

Garrett and Marian stopped to allow the Alicorns to graze. Every so often, Marian would slip them a bit of cheese from the rations FabAnders had kindly provided them with. Garrett, meanwhile, decided to stretch his legs. Riding the Alicorns might be the fastest way for him to get where he wanted, but it sure was tiring.

While Garrett wandered through the forest, he ran into a large wolf. The wolf was sleek and beautiful, with strange white markings covering its fur. Garrett approached the beast cautiously. The wolf growled as he drew closer.

"Halt, human. I know where you are going and I will not have it," the creature snarled.

Garrett was too surprised to take in what the wolf had said. "You can speak?" he gasped.

"Of course I can speak. What do you take me for?" the wolf retorted. "I am Fenris. I am the guardian of this forest and I will not let you pass. You seek to free the wretched princesses."

"Surely they cannot be so bad," Garrett said.

"They are," Fenris huffed. "It was a princess that once made me her pet and called me Messer Grumpy Pants. She locked me in her bedroom and forced me into the most ridiculous clothes. They are all like that."

Garrett paused to consider the situation. He did not want to kill Fenris, but he saw it might come to that if he and Marian tried to press on to the forest. Then he saw another option.

"You could come with us," he offered. "If you have not changed your mind about freeing the princesses by the time we reach them, then you are free to try to stop us."

Fenris examined Garrett closely. After a time he said, "Alright, human, I accept your offer. I sense no lie in your words."

And so, Fenris the wolf followed Garret back to Marian and the Alicorns. Once Garrett explained the deal he had made, the party set off once more. By the end of the day they reached the edge of the Forest of Necroboners.

...

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[Heidenreich]

I demand Fenris the wolf humping garret's leg.

Do it.


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