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[Dunizel]

highcastle wrote...

Did I make everyone cry? Or at least wibble? Because that's totally my goal with the vast majority of those fics. Anders may be a masochist, but Elle pointed out I'm just bit of a sadist.

Oh you did...no tears were shed, but the mood was just right.
What I absolutely love is those little pearls you write, like this for example: "Or if it had, then he spoke them again, birthed them again. Maybe that was the trick of it. You can't say something once and expect it to last. You remake it, again and again, year after year."

I like to read again your stories because everytime I notice that following the narration I maybe didn't give much attention to phrases like that. And they are beutiful and flawlessly placed in the narration. They hit just the right spot in the right moment. 

Edit for ToP, it's been a while...

by sandara

Modifié par Dunizel, 25 mai 2011 - 04:56 .

[DAYtheELF]

Dunizel wrote...

highcastle wrote...

Did I make everyone cry? Or at least wibble? Because that's totally my goal with the vast majority of those fics. Anders may be a masochist, but Elle pointed out I'm just bit of a sadist.

Oh you did.
What I absolutely love is those little pearls you write, like this for example: "Or if it had, then he spoke them again, birthed them again. Maybe that was the trick of it. You can't say something once and expect it to last. You remake it, again and again, year after year."

I like to read again your stories because everytime I notice that following the narration I maybe didn't give much attention to phrases like that. And they are beutiful and flawlessly placed in the narration. They hit just the right spot in the right moment. 

^this

[highcastle]

Alright, I'm blushing lots now and seriously contemplating printing some of these comments to put above my desk for my Debbie Downer days.

[Evilnor]

Personally, I don't go for slash often, but I couldn't help reading this one. Very well-done and emotionally stirring. Wish I could be that poetic . . .

[Sialater]

highcastle wrote...

Alright, I'm blushing lots now and seriously contemplating printing some of these comments to put above my desk for my Debbie Downer days.

Do it.    Every writer needs reassurance.  What we do, we do without a net or an audience.  We don't get feedback till we've hit "publish" and maybe not even then.

Writing sucks, but someone has to do it.

[highcastle]

Sialater wrote...

highcastle wrote...

Alright, I'm blushing lots now and seriously contemplating printing some of these comments to put above my desk for my Debbie Downer days.

Do it.    Every writer needs reassurance.  What we do, we do without a net or an audience.  We don't get feedback till we've hit "publish" and maybe not even then.

Writing sucks, but someone has to do it.

Damn straight! *feels the need to clink shot glasses together or something*

[Sialater]

highcastle wrote...

Sialater wrote...

highcastle wrote...

Alright, I'm blushing lots now and seriously contemplating printing some of these comments to put above my desk for my Debbie Downer days.

Do it.    Every writer needs reassurance.  What we do, we do without a net or an audience.  We don't get feedback till we've hit "publish" and maybe not even then.

Writing sucks, but someone has to do it.

Damn straight! *feels the need to clink shot glasses together or something*

~passes out the booze~

After all, I share this disease.

[AerdrieDarkmoon]

I wasn't sobbing hysterically, but at that last line, tears fell, painting my checks. I can't come up with the right words all the time, that's why I do art...

... I should finish said art... I have 3 unfinished DA2 pictures.. *hangs head shamefully*

edit: Besides the point, your own writing is full of much deep emotion, that must be why you are so much more in touch with them, which is a good thing. 

*huggles Elle* 

Modifié par AerdrieDarkmoon, 25 mai 2011 - 05:22 .

[dpMeggers]

ElleMullineux wrote...

I take it I was on my own at the sobbing hysterically at my laptop party?... Just me?

I have a bad habit of reading my fanfic either very early in the morning or very late at night, the upshot of which is I'm too tired to emote properly. And I don't cry very easily. Combined, this means powerful stuff gets a wibble at most.

[YamiSnuffles]

@ Elle, I finished your picture!

[MG800]

dpMeggers wrote...

ElleMullineux wrote...

I take it I was on my own at the sobbing hysterically at my laptop party?... Just me?

I have a bad habit of reading my fanfic either very early in the morning or very late at night, the upshot of which is I'm too tired to emote properly. And I don't cry very easily. Combined, this means powerful stuff gets a wibble at most.

Alright, I'm getting nosy...
"Tree of Life" is a powerful stuff, soo your reaction was...?

And HI-C fanfiction made me wibble. With the Karl stuff - remembering what happened to them and reading this, IS masochistic.

[highcastle]

MG800 wrote...

dpMeggers wrote...

ElleMullineux wrote...

I take it I was on my own at the sobbing hysterically at my laptop party?... Just me?

I have a bad habit of reading my fanfic either very early in the morning or very late at night, the upshot of which is I'm too tired to emote properly. And I don't cry very easily. Combined, this means powerful stuff gets a wibble at most.

Alright, I'm getting nosy...
"Tree of Life" is a powerful stuff, soo your reaction was...?

And HI-C fanfiction made me wibble. With the Karl stuff - remembering what happened to them and reading this, IS masochistic.

I love the sound of crying in the morning. Sounds like...justice.

Mwahahahahaha...

[Sialater]

This all makes me sad I've not yet coaxed my muse to DA2 fic. I just can't get Anders to gel as voice yet.

[YamiSnuffles]

ElleMullineux wrote...
YAMI!!!!! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU!!!! :wub::wub:

Aw, thanks. It was a fun commission to work on. <3

It's been raining a lot here so lots of angst and rain resulted.

[Ryzaki]

Sialater wrote...

This all makes me sad I've not yet coaxed my muse to DA2 fic. I just can't get Anders to gel as voice yet.

 

Probably my hugest obstacle in BW game fanfics. I never feel like I do the character's justice. 

[Sialater]

Ryzaki wrote...

Sialater wrote...

This all makes me sad I've not yet coaxed my muse to DA2 fic. I just can't get Anders to gel as voice yet.

 

Probably my hugest obstacle in BW game fanfics. I never feel like I do the character's justice. 

I get Zev.  I get Alistair.  Hell, I've even got Garrus and Kaidan.  (According to those who've read those stories, at least.)

Anders eludes me.  Slippery apostate.  (Course, I'm having issues with Fenris, too.)

[highcastle]

ElleMullineux wrote...

Ahahahaaaa - Barney

Still crushing harder on Marshall though - it's so messed up. One dream and all my fantasies got realigned.

Although I'm crushing pretty hard on the Anders thread at the moment. Too much Awesome.

I probably shouldn't show you this, then. It'll only add to your confusion.

Edit: You mentioned the Fleet Foxes, I love you! I don't care that you're already married, clearly you must marry me too. It's the only solution!

Modifié par highcastle, 25 mai 2011 - 06:03 .

[Ryzaki]

Sialater wrote...
I get Zev.  I get Alistair.  Hell, I've even got Garrus and Kaidan.  (According to those who've read those stories, at least.)

Anders eludes me.  Slippery apostate.  (Course, I'm having issues with Fenris, too.)

Getting Zev well enough to write him is a feat I've given up on. Though...I think I get Kaidan. A smidge. At least when it comes to dude Shep. Garrus...not so much. 

 those DA2 male LIs like to be sneaky. 

[Sialater]

Ryzaki wrote...

Sialater wrote...
I get Zev.  I get Alistair.  Hell, I've even got Garrus and Kaidan.  (According to those who've read those stories, at least.)

Anders eludes me.  Slippery apostate.  (Course, I'm having issues with Fenris, too.)

Getting Zev well enough to write him is a feat I've given up on. Though...I think I get Kaidan. A smidge. At least when it comes to dude Shep. Garrus...not so much. 

 those DA2 male LIs like to be sneaky. 

Zev ate my brain.  I know the others will never take over like he did. 

[YamiSnuffles]

My problem with Anders fanfiction is that- for some reason- I can't find a good stopping point. Every little drabble I write threatens to turn into an epic. Considering my history of never, ever finishing longer fanfiction, I've vowed not to do the same with anything Anders.

Actually, I seem to have the same problem with Garrus fics. Darn BW guys.