MY THOUGHTS ON CIRCLES, LET ME SHOW YOU IT.
Evessa wrote...
lol This is true. But my "Templars" aren't "Templars" as we know them to be. There's no fanatic devotion to the church (first of all, my story has no church), they are just people born with their own unique powers. They can't cast fireballs or anything but they can (like Dragon Age Templars) dispel magic, friendly and hostile. There are zealouts, however, that belong to their own little dark order (like the Black Aja in Wheele of Time), thinking the gods are on their side. In my story, though, the gods favor the "Mages" not the "Templars," as Mages are born of the mixing of their blood with the lesser races (demigods, if you will). No mere "human" has access to magical talent, just those born of the bloodline of the gods, and not all of them do have powers. So they're not "Templars," they're just people born with the ability to dispel magic.
I've mentioned this before, but my solution to the Circles would be to allow mages back into public life. Keep the Circles as learning institutions that are open to both mages and regular people for magical education: the mages learn how to use and control their abilities, and non-mages can understand how magic works to take the edge off their fear.
Take away the system of Chantry law that controls what mages can and cannot do, and treat them as normal people under civil and criminal law. A murder is a murder, regardless of means, so a mage should be tried and sentenced for harming someone with magic the same way someone would if they went mad with an axe.
Incorporate the templars into regular guard forces with the same rules and regulations, just with extra knowledge and abilities that enable them to deal with mages on equal terms. Hell, let mages become templars too, if they want to.
If templars use lyrium to nullify the effects of magic on themselves, then let a few cells in every jail have lyrium baked into the walls, so that a mage can be imprisoned for punishments thatdon't deserve a death sentence, just as a regular person would.
There's the risk of abominations, sure, but there would be people trained in every community that know how to deal with it, and I think the risk would be lessened if the mages didn't feel the need to turn to that sort of power out of fear.
I don't believe many mages would care for the Tevinter style of rule by the magisters: Feynriel certainly sees horrified by some of the things he sees there, and none of the mages we've had as companions thus far are interested in anything but being allowed to go about their business like regular people.
In the even that a group of mages got together determined to overthrow a kingdom, I think there'd be plenty of mages working with templars and regular people to maintain the status quo of equality. I believe few mages would want to see their loved ones sold into slavery, or having to turn to dangerous magic in order to just survive.
It would take many years to accomplish, I'm sure, but I believe it would be a system that would work given time and understanding.
Modifié par Threeparts, 05 avril 2011 - 10:06 .