Ok. Wow.
So, stating you are a professional writer/amateur game designer is giving yourself some sort of elistic egotistical nature from the start without even having to read.
You are clearly not a 'Professional' writer, when you have a ton of run-on sentences. Furthermore, another point that proves you aren't a 'Professional' writer is some of the points you express about DA2's story.
By all means you have the right to your opinion and if you don't like the story, that's your thing. However, I don't see how DA:O even holds it's own to DA2's story. In DA2 there is suspense (for lack of a better word), and a lot of unpredictability.
For instance, in DA:O the storyline is basically you're toon (who I might add, doesn't have nearly as much emotional connection as Hawke does with the player; at least in my opinion) who goes to a few places to recruit some people, and then goes to a final battle with those people.
While DA:O is an amazing game, don't get me wrong; the story is definitely in my opinion lesser than DA2 in quality. Also, DA:O was incredibly and almost painfully boring to play and in the combat. I loved the story and world but I was already bored when I got to Lothering. The Origins stories may try to connect you with the character a bit, but I believe Hawke has a much greater emotional connection.
In addition, the character have a ton more depth than in the predecessor. Other than Morrigan, who was my favorite (and still is) character in the Dragon Age series. Some of these companions and NPCs are extremely well written and I want to just dive into their history, a lot more than I did in Origins or other games in general.
I don't know about some of your points. I seriously question your credibility when you make a thread title so egotistical and almost trying to belittle other reviews. While it is all opinion, you are seriously overlooking some facts.
Another concern is that you haven't registered the game. That's the first thing I do with any of my games for any developer if there is an option to. Regarding the ending and what-not; well, I simply haven't gotten there yet since I am only 17 hours in.
I don't know how I feel about your review. Everyone is entitled to their opinion but your whole post feels exaggerated and almost troll-like to me. I am not by any means a BioWare fan boy, but this review kind of ticks me off.
Anyways, thats my 2 cents; take it or leave it.
Modifié par -Zorph-, 10 mars 2011 - 11:44 .