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The Shep Your Shep Could Look Like
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Hk47sPappy
, mars 20 2011 04:12
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Posté 20 mars 2011 - 09:54
GuardianAngel470
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Interesting and funny but I feel like it could have used a few things.
First off, the VO person could have slowed down a little. I was impressed by how she didn't mess up at that speed, but part of the amusement is the paced delivery.
Second, most of the funniest jokes from the commercial were cut. The diamonds, the horse, and the rest weren't there. It would have been cool to have found a way to incorporate that into the video.
Otherwise, well done.
First off, the VO person could have slowed down a little. I was impressed by how she didn't mess up at that speed, but part of the amusement is the paced delivery.
Second, most of the funniest jokes from the commercial were cut. The diamonds, the horse, and the rest weren't there. It would have been cool to have found a way to incorporate that into the video.
Otherwise, well done.
