Modifié par Ardinal, 03 avril 2011 - 08:24 .
FemHawke Fanart
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Ardinal
, mars 25 2011 05:47
#1
Posté 25 mars 2011 - 05:47
Ardinal
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Decided to dedictate my latest digital art excersise to DA:II with a FemHawke portrait. I'm self taught so any feedback would be appreciated.
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#2
Posté 25 mars 2011 - 05:52
flexxdk
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I don't think there's any need for feedback, is there?
It's beautiful as it is.
It's beautiful as it is.
#3
Posté 25 mars 2011 - 06:07
Emperor Iaius I
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Nice work on the blood spatter. Lips seem off to me, but I'm not an artist so I couldn't give you any advice on that. It's better than what I could do.
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Posté 27 mars 2011 - 03:05
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Thank you.
I wasn't too happy with the lips to be honest, would have liked them to be a little more detailed or less red. Will have to practice getting the lips right I think.
I wasn't too happy with the lips to be honest, would have liked them to be a little more detailed or less red. Will have to practice getting the lips right I think.
#5
Posté 27 mars 2011 - 03:23
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Ardinal wrote...
Thank you.
I wasn't too happy with the lips to be honest, would have liked them to be a little more detailed or less red. Will have to practice getting the lips right I think.
They look OK to me. Might need to have it match the smear (or have the smear match it).
But then again, I don't know the piece like you do.
#6
Posté 27 mars 2011 - 03:33
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The upper lip looks too thin to me, but other than that, it's good.
#7
Posté 27 mars 2011 - 03:41
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Something about it looks off to me, And it's troubling me that I can't figure out what... I think the space between the nose and mouth, But im not sure!! But she sure is darn sexy 
Good work.
Good work.
#9
Posté 27 mars 2011 - 04:09
xX N7 Xx
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lips are too small, mouth should measure half way at the eyes.
#10
Posté 27 mars 2011 - 04:53
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the blood splatter should be sharpened up a bit. It looks too blurry compare to the rest.
#11
Posté 28 mars 2011 - 11:51
Ardinal
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Thank you for the excellent feedback. Your tips and critiques have really helped.
#12
Posté 28 mars 2011 - 01:08
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a fantastic piece, i love how you've done the eyes and eyelashes, the blood smear is the perfect shape, but it doesnt follow the shape of the nose, so it looks a bit flat on the page
#13
Posté 14 octobre 2011 - 10:06
Lelianas Song
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I like your use of color in the composition. If you feel that some of the critical feedback is helpful, good for you, but when it comes to your own style, express your own heart, not what others think it should be.
#14
Posté 15 octobre 2011 - 02:09
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I like it alot! Good job! The top lip is a bit thin but she is beautiful!
