Morrigan: Change has come. Resist if you must, but your struggles will be in vain. Fight if you will, but your defeat is inevitable. Submission will be your only answer. In the end the earth will be stained red and the whole of Thedas will bow. For this has been seen. However, the end is not yet here. (something foreshadowee)
The Val Royeaux grand cathedral (thing) from where the white divine resides, stands before us in all of its glory. The artful colored stained windows shimmer before the hurling of fierce flame. Shattering the window violently, a powerful explosion occurs within the premises, sending pieces of stone, wood, and glass in all directions. The fire consumes the area, as it sputters uncontrollably.
Screams out of fear deafens the air. Then the aggressor appears. Wearing a fine tailored robe, the man wields a staff. He signals towards the cathedral and a wave of men rush by him, consuming his sight. The mage hurls yet another fireball.
A horn sounds out in the distance and as the men rush the steps of the cathedral, they're met by heavily armored guards bearing the symbol of the Chantry. It is all out chaos.
The Seeker appears as the main doors slowly open. (Familiar figures stand behind her) They rush down the steps and join the fray. (Camera zooms into her eyes and zooms back out to see another character)
Hawke now stands before us, charging fiercely. He lunges towards a heavily armored soldier and at the slash of his staff, flames consume the man. (He continues onward with his companions now visible) They meet with blades first against the soldiers, but they are quickly dispatched.
Blood mages dominate the field. (Hawke and Cassandra are both seen on split screen) Separating themselves from their party, they rush through the lines of Tevinter soldiers to eliminate the mages. The mages put up a fight. Sending fire and lightning at them, however, they prove to be no match for our veteran heroes.
Near the bottom of the set of steps and within the middle of the field, our original mage aggressor is once again seen. Holding his ground, he seems to be unstoppable. Our heroes charge at him in opposite directions. (Cassandra rushing further down the steps and Hawke rushing up the steps) They both jump at him that could be a one hit blow, but the mage sends them both hurling back (mind blast *****es) The mage refocuses on Hawke and tries to mind control him. Struggling against the mind control, Hawke manages to get back onto his feet, but falls onto one knee. In a last attempt Hawke uses blood magic. (Zoom to see Cassandra's wtf face) He breaks free and the Tevinter Magister is dumbfounded. As he lets his guard down for that very split second, Hawke unleashes a bolt of lightning. Sending the mage near the Seeker. Standing over the body, the Seeker takes a look at the mage. The mage seems to be dead (since it was a hell of a blast), but twitches then begins to transform. Cassandra steps away cautiously, then tries to strike the creature but something prevents contact from slaying the levitating, radiating, entity. An abomination/arcane horror (something eeeeviiiil) suddenly appears. The creature turns the tide of battle. Through its high magical resistance and its superior abilities (such as crushing prison), our heroes are pinned down. And as it seems that it might be the end for these two, something unexpected occurs.
(The camera moves through the battlefield as if someone were running. Nearing the abomination/arcane horror the camera leaps.) The creature sends out waves of lightning (quick side view to see character soaring towards creature then back to 1st person view) but then a sword is seen to connect with the creature's face. Impaling it to the ground (the camera changes position; looking upward) the man retrieves his weapon from the skull of the creature. And it's now clear that the person that we're looking at is the Hero of Ferelden. Cassandra and Hawke are released from the spells, but before they can say a word a powerful roar shakes the very ground. Then our three heroes look up and a shadow of a dragon engulfs them. (Then it's black, the DA3 logo appears fades back and ends.)
- epic music is a must..... inon zur meets apocalyptica meets awesome quire...... collaborate music with the animation let the beginning build up with a quire then let it be sheer unattainable awesome sauce when the violence begins. Have those doubtful moments be supported with the music. When appropriate, the music overwhelms the sound. (change volume but stay constant)
- Great sound is a must. I want to tremble when I hear that dam dragon. I want goose bumps when I hear lightning ****ing, **** up. Booms here and there. Metal clashing and people yelling out in agony. Hear the footsteps when the warden is charging. Hear the blade slicing through the mages skull and then impaling him to the ground. Again collaborate with the music and animation. Don't let the sounds always overpower the music.
- I want blood. Red, fluidly sprays of sticky blood. But don't give me that unreal gore. This isn't Gears, this isn't Duke Nukem, this isn't DA2, THIS IS DA3!!! (a pic of the warden kickn hawke.lol)
- When characters are fighting reflect abilities and such (like in every other trailer).
- Different and intense camera shots (good work with DA2's trailer) and use slow-mo and sped up effects when appropriate.
- When Morrigan speaks break down her dialogue into parts to fit with the cinematic. For example she says, " However, the end is not yet here...." after the Warden whoops dat ass and as he's taking out the sword from the guys face.
- For those that are whining cause the warden is dead, not human, not a warrior, has a vag instead of a sac with a flesh arrow, well................... this is the dam default story...... so enjoy. This, like the previous trailers, should just get your attention and not indicate the players limited freedom, within the rpg. In game the warden can represent another character that is all.
- The setting is in Orlais and this building is the holiest of holies.... it's where the she-pope lives. The architecture better be frenchy cuz.... aren't they French or somethn?
- The dudes startn **** are indeed Tevinter.... but not are all mages...... there should be a reference to the black divine if i'm gettn the lore right. Have them bear an emblem of their clique.
- The Seeker represents the hero cliche figure and her companions are the goody goodies like leliana, some templar dude (new guy), and sabastian. (2 rogues in a party???.... unsound rpg)
- The Seeker....... have no clue what class she should be in the vid....... (dam another rogue???)
- Hawke will be again indeed mage and the warden a warrior for the sake of the previous trailers. They will have the same features (the same gear is unlikely, even if I don't like my Warden having that ridiculous, meaningless tattoo on his face).... My warden is a spirit/arcane warrior templar healer...... a.k.a monsta tank/support or paladin by wow standards with the almighty and imposing circle tower tattoo. same face btw
- Hawke represents the anti-hero ( for being a blood mage) so his crew should consist of the less virtuous and shady characters such as isabella, merril, and...... (dam need a tank.... hate carver.... anders could be dead as default and three mages is just one too many....... duno...... fuuuggghhhhh) yeah, Zev.... two rogues and two mages... murdersauce dps before they kill us then
- yes this trailer might be too long for air so will trim it... some parts can be taken out. We can release the "extended version" somewhere else, somewhere more appreciated and important and making its debut.
- this trailer might be too bloody so take it out for the tv ads and have it for the "extended version"
- party members are seen to get a kill atleast... then it's all about our protagonists
- If Sir Gaider makes this sloppy writing sexy and detailed, then we have a real DA3 trailer outline..... booyahhh
- And yes i've made a story/gameplay in my mind supporting this trailer (loser..... wahh) Prepare to be thrown into climax.
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