To Arquen:
[quote]Fenris has participated in an indirect education, and it is enough to make his opinions and views valid. [/quote] “Indirect education” means here that he just walked around with open eyes, nothing more. I already explained in a previous post what I consider an important education. “Self-directed education” also assumes drive and purpose to learn, something Fenris hasn’t exhibited. As I’ve said, all words about “Self-directed/indirect education”, “learning strategies”, etc. merely obstruct the fact there are no signs that, except for martial arts, Fenris had any education or formed any strategies to get it. I can use all these words describing 5 years old kid and cite that he learned to speak and to walk as an examples. You are still using horribly broad definitions that allow to put professor and stone age savage on the same level – and you are actually using them for a similar purpose.
[quote] Arguably more valid in some areas such as Tevinter, slavery, and oppression [/quote] He has no education even in this areas, all he has is a short personal experience. I already explained using an example in a post to phyreblade74 why it is limited. His memories don’t give a valid basis to form conclusions, no matter what Fenris himself believes. And being a slave doesn’t give an insight on why and how slavery exists, its roots and strong/weak points, or in what countries it exists or existed. All it gives, really, is a handful of morbid tales and a damaged person.
[quote] Fenris' knowledge gained indirectly is JUST as valid as anyone else in the party. Likewise, it has already been proven that he has drive for self directed learning because he has absorbed a lot of knowledge already. [/quote] Nothing was proven here. Had he drive for self-directed learning he would learn to read long before his third year in Kirkwall. Most of the things he knows about Tevinter are common knowledge even in Ferelden/Kirkwall. Sole exception is a widespread of blood magic. With Qunary he shows that he knows a common greeting (just like everyone living in a country for a day would) and some basic facts about their society and its interactions with foreigners. It doesn’t show any drive whatsoever, it merely shows that Fenris isn’t a potato. In game itself Fenris shows only enormous confidence in all his conclusions and views which is usually a counterproductive to learning. First-hand knowledge, things Fenris saw personally, is valid. Fenris’ opinions, even based on that knowledge, due to lack of general knowledge, experience, erudition, frame of reference, worth little.
[quote] 30+ years …studying the mage/templar solution… Neither did ANY_OTHER_PARTY_MEMBER [/quote] Again, exaggerations. The only thing Fenris did study systematically is fighting (at best). Any other party member is highly likely literate, had some form of systematic base education, except for maybe Isabela, and is more experienced due to longer memory span. And no, no one was exactly coach potato compared to Fenris. In fact, there is only one ‘native’ Kirkwaller in the party…and he is a dwarf.
[quote]Also, yes Fenris learned more in "10 years of being a slave/on the run..." about slavery, oppression, magic, cruelty of mages and magisters than someone with 30 years of experience in an institution undergoing a formal education about these things. [/quote] Laughable. Being a slave for a 100 years would teach nothing at all about history of slavery in a world, about how widespread on endemic it is, about its real roots in customs/religion, about its economic strong and weak points. Bolt in a turbine knows nothing about plane. Illiterate medieval foot-soldier, even free, knows little about wars he fights in, their real reasons and grand strategies.
[quote]First hand experience in a subject trumps any simple book reading or formal education on the subject. [/quote] “First hand experience” in watching lighting strike is trumped by reading a book on elementary physics. Former typically leads only to stories about gods and spirits warring in heavens. “First hand” experience in getting a head trauma doesn’t transform a person into a neuro-surgeon or even a paramedic. "First hand" experience in, say, getting lead poisoning doesn't even grant any knowledge, only health problems.
[quote]A scholar on Tevinter culture and slavery has no concept of what being a slave actually means. [/quote] Yet when talking about how to prevent slavery, how to make in economically unfeasible, how it has originated, how it is maintained globally, I’d choose a scholar every time. Actual slave would just tell some unpleasant stories and give, at best, some half-assed ideas.
[quote] he has a right, like anyone else, to convey his experiences and knowledge gained from them. It has been substantially proven over and over again that one does not need books to aquire learning, to gain education, or to be taken seriously. [/quote] No one ever argued that education can be gained, for example, via tutors (not necessarily apprenticeship). There was nothing to prove here. I’d like to see examples though of extensive education in any area with limited or impossible experimental approach gained without books and tutors. In fact, I already asked for such examples once.
As I’ve said,
your arguments that lack of any formal education and literacy shouldn’t be viewed as a serious flaw when estimating an authority are such that they remove any distinction between various forms of education and knowledge and even between educated human and a non-comatose cat. Fenris has, of course, right to retell his experience and even give his opinions. My point was that the former is limited and the latter is practically worthless.
[quote] Comparison to what? whom? [/quote] To any literate and educated party member/person without amnesia.
[quote] Fenris does not have the right to comment or act on his beliefs and experiences because he cannot read and has not lived in a circle or in Kirkwall? False. [/quote] He has _right_, and I explicitly said it in a previous post. Freedom of speech isn’t really a modern concept.
[quote] He can say " the moment they are free, mages will make themselves magisters," because he has experienced and observed this many times over. [/quote] Good example, really…for me. And the truth of it is that Fenris knows, really knows, only two things here: he was a slave and his master was a mage. Your words imply that he had seen or gained information from authoritative sources (like, monograph or historical course) about multiple societies/historical cases of “free mages”. Nothing even close. He has exactly 0 first-hand experience in this area for he never witnessed such transformation. He had no access to trustworthy sources even on Tevinter, lacking both education and literacy. All he ever could have were, basically, parts of conversations on Tevinter history. Gossips. He is retelling what he had heard from god-knows who and when, like in a game of broken phone, and believes that others have to take such garbage seriously. Had he actually any form of education he would know that freedom is not a yes/no condition to begin with. He would know that even in his meaning (no Circle) mages ARE free among the Dalish, Rivainy and Chasind, yet there are no replicas of Tevinter. He would know that slavery isn’t even limited to Tevinter and that slave to a non-mage is still a slave. In short, he can say only that he was a slave to a mage. Everything his else are conjectures of uneducated amnesiac on human nature and historical laws, and there are no reasons at all to take them seriously.
[quote] Hawke sides with the mages all of them turn to blood magic[/quote]
[quote]In every situation where mages are concerned they turn to blood magic, and most of them end up abominations. [/quote]
Wrong in two aspects. First, in street-battles in both forces of _Circle_ mages (near Meredith and massive templar-mages confrontation later) no single Circle mage uses blood magic. That makes around 20-30 of them. Attack on the Gallows (cut-scene)? Around ten at least mages, no blood magic. Attack on an inner chamber? Again, no blood magic, around ten Circle mages. There are several blood mages on the streets in the final quest, but all in all, they are in minority. Even though there are no reasons for a sane person not to use every source they have when cornered by their would-be murderers. Fenris, with his constantly used markings, created by a blood mage and slaver, is the last person to take morally high ground here. Second, the very point that mage shouldn’t use his own blood to empower magic is highly debatable. Also, let's not forget that in the Templar ending H.'s best ally, supposedly loyal knght of the Maker, attacks H. with a corrupted sword forged from a heathen idol in a deranged attempt to usurp all power in Kirkwall. H. also gains a fine knowledge that he has helped a psychopath and enemy to commit a mass murder despite having numerous warnings from, almost everyone including Cullen, that there is something very wrong with Meredith.
[quote] It is assumption, not fact. Just as I used the 10-year old example to illustrate this argument before to clarify that this statement has no validity. [/quote] Correct. It is an assumption. Judging by appearance, Fenris is in his early thirties (at most), like his sister. Given that he competed for markings, it is safe to conclude that the competition was martial in nature and that he was at least teenager/young adult at the time to show some skill. He also mentions that he doesn’t remember his childhood or something to such effect. Combined – memory span of a teenager, most likely.
[quote] That means that the older someone is and the more memory they have the more they can be taken seriously. This is not true. [/quote] Really? Would you take opinions of Fenris with one minute worth of memories seriously? With one day? One week? One month? What is the magical number when actual experience ceases to matter?
[quote]I quote myself: "Fenris never was an apprentice, not arguing that, but he did learn in much the same way. He observed, experienced, and reflected. [/quote] No, it is not the same way. Tutor is a key to apprenticeship. Saying that ‘he observed, experienced and reflected’ and equal it in worth to actual apprenticeship is wrong and based on nothing. Any single human being ‘observed, experienced and reflected’. It doesn’t make knowledge and authority of every human the same. [quote]well he did learn quite a lot of new things living in Kirkwall[/quote] What, you mean in Act I he didn’t know everything from a glance like he did in Gallows?
[quote]To say he learned nothing or had the drive to learn nothing has no proof. Nothing being reading? Well, he does learn reading, and if Hawke never offers to teach him then one doesn't even know he is illiterate and therefore can make no assumptions on his learning. [/quote]. Negative statements are usually harder to prove. I can also ask you to prove that he wasn’t, say, a serial killer/rapist since Act I. He spent 3 years in Kirkwall without learning to read and showed no initiative to start learning on his own. Then presented with a book he doesn’t even mention willingness to study. That’s a valid basis for assumptions. These are signs of his attitude. However, assumption that he somehow learns to read later or has some drive for self-education is truly baseless and without proof.
[quote] He learns a lot about himself during his stay in Kirkwall….[/quote]. Psychological development and gaining knowledge are different things. Even the former is, actually, not that significant, since only in the end of Act III he says those words about poison and still has no idea what to do with his freedom.
[quote]Fenris does not presume authority in anything. He is a follower, and states as much. "I am no leader." [/quote]
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[quote]As far as "the most valid one," there is NEVER a suggestion that Fenris believes his opinion IS the most valid one. [/quote]
He gives his opinions with supreme confidence in them (more often than not a mark of ignoramus), and in every discussion is completely unwilling to acknowledge even a possibility of being wrong. It should be noted also that it is possible to change minds of Anders(!), Merrill, Sebastian and Aveline on rivalry paths, but not Fenris. He is more fanatical than a literally possessed by vengeance suicidal terrorist, which says a lot. In the end he is quite willing to kill his only allies in the city to enforce his opinions. Doesn’t '
believe his opinion IS the most valid one '? Riiight.
[quote]So, the illiterate amnesiac foreigner still has valuable knowledge and experiences to share, and should be at least listened to and considered when making decisions. [/quote]. Listen to his first-hand experiences – yes, with a grain of salt. Even with an example with a foreigner I never denied it. Why with a grain of salt? Well, first, no human is perfect recording device; perceptions/prejudices change memories at least subtly. Second, as I’ve pointed multiple times, at least one thing from Fenris’ ‘experience’, his markings, is not exactly what he says (he explicitly states ‘against my will’). My point, however, was always “who would really take opinions of an illiterate amnesiac foreigner on their society/profession/anything just as seriously as opinions of educated experienced person from their country.”. Quite typically instead of arguing that (it is difficult to disagree with obvious) you say essentially that foreigner still knows _something_. Why, of course.
[quote]"I would just like to go one week without meeting and insane mage, just one week..." says Hawke. [/quote] Which is obviously an exaggeration of a tired man. He could also say “I would like to go one week without meeting a templar who is a rapist/torturer/murderer/insane”.
[quote]Fenris' opinions are biased LIKE_EVERYONE_ELSE, but that does not make him wrong. [/quote] Automatically – no, it doesn’t. Strong, fanatical bias gives one good reason to doubt, though. Traumas in the past give another. Relative (to everyone else) ignorance gives a third reason. The inhuman speed with which he makes his conclusions, like in Gallows, makes four. When he bothers to explain his conclusions (like ~‘no one can resist temptations for long’ or ~‘magic and slavery are together in Tevinter, so it will be like this always’) his reasoning isn’t even remotely convincing. Remind me, are there any good reasons to trust his opinions? I know I wouldn’t listen to anyone like this IRL.
[quote] NO, Fenris in many examples explains how his slavery worked. Even more so take the lore that Tevinter was based off of Rome and the slavery there was based off of how Romans treated their slaves and one can make the logical conclusion. [/quote] Ah, yes, exactly my analogies. So when I think of what constitutes suffering in such place and time, I think of Rome. And I think that slave who was a prized possession and whose sister was given an opportunity to join a ruling class was immensely LUCKY compared to almost any other slave.
[quote] His aversion to touch, for example is a condition suffered by people who have been abused. His statement "I was a slave, I propped up the furniture if need be," is most telling. [/quote] And I move the furniture if need be, oh my god. Truly, suffering. Aversion to touch – not sure, I interpreted it as a sensitive skin due to markings.
[quote] Also, "paraded me around in a collar like a qunari mage." Called me his "pet." There are instances where Fenris speaks of slaves being beaten in the streets. Killed, etc. etc. [/quote] Oh, yes. Other slaves suffered indeed. Fenris? Come on, being called ‘a pet’ is nothing unusual for a slave.
[quote] Any research into Fenris' dialogue and character reveals that it wasn't "tame" suffering he endured. [/quote] Once again, comparison. In this case to other slaves. No one argues that being a slave is a joyful pastime. I never said it was. I said that according to Fenris’ words, not opinions, he had it relatively easy.
[quote]Fenris is an example of an Anti-Hero character. [/quote] Actually, repeated twice.
[quote] In the other post it was presumed that he had to be some kind of selfless, honorable, charitable person in order to be taken seriously as a productive or likeable character…hero [/quote]
The only one making presumptions about this issue was you.
I didn’t ask to prove that Fenris is ‘selfless’. I asked for a single display of altruism.
I didn’t ask to prove that Fenris is ‘honorable’. I asked for a single act of honor.
I didn’t ask to prove that Fenris is ‘charitable’. I asked for a single act of compassion or even mercy. Not for a couple of non-hostile phrases, mind you.
And no, I didn’t say that Fenris has to be a hero to be taken seriously. I didn’t compare him to heroes, to begin with.
This issue is actually a fine illustration of the whole discussion. I asked (non-rhetorically) for an example of any Fenris’ act that would show admirable moral qualities. At first I was answered that Fenris is no kitten-saving saint. Now I receive an answer that no, Fenris is no hero. At no point ever absence of such examples was honestly admitted (if they are really absent - I'm honestly in doubt here), but there is abundance of statements general to the point of irrelevancy. Fenris is, indeed, no saint and no pure hero. No one in DA series was. In fact, such characters are simply rare in [modern] fiction and even more so in life. I repeat myself, but again and again only an incredibly broad generalization allows saying anything good about Fenris.
About anti-hero… Where to begin.
First, we are discussing Fenris as a person, not a combination of literary tropes. To define situation more clearly through exaggeration, imagine this scene: we are discussing an antagonist A. I ask what good qualities do you see in A., given that he is, basically, a monster and a criminal. You answer that as a villain A. is supposed to be all these things. Not only it is not really true, it doesn’t somehow make A. a better person. A. remains a disgusting bastard, stating that he is a “villain” merely notes that such was the author’s intention.
Second, term 'antihero' is usually applied to a protagonist, and definition on, say, merriam-webster (or wiki), though very lacking, explicitly states so. But I disagree here, for example on the basis that story doesn't have to have a single protagonist. Hm... Can it be said to a certain degree about DA2 story given that Isabela and Anders influence it at least as much as H.?
Third, no, antihero isn’t someone without any heroic qualities. One of the definitions is “The Antihero is someone with some of the qualities of a villain, up to and including brutality, cynicism, and ruthlessness, but with the soul or motivations of a more conventional Hero”. Some examples of anti-heroes in modern fiction?
Films: Han Solo. Main character in “Firefly” (forgot his full name). Dexter, AFAIK.
Literature: Philip Marlowe. Elric of Melnibone. Roland (“The Dark Tower”).
What is common for them? Well, to begin with, my original question (“example of a single act…”) would be answered immediately and with several examples. What is more, most of them actually have positive morality and their negative morality is usually more complex than “slavery is bad”. Saying that Fenris is an anti-hero isn’t exactly incorrect, and yet it is once again very broad definition with many different sub-types and one that is used usually to describe far better persons. Why, Simmons in “The Anti-Hero in the American Novel” actually refers to a serious discussion about Christ as an anti-hero (although I’m not getting it, probably American thing). And looking at the definition above, I agree that Fenris has all 3 listed qualities of a “villain”, but I fail to see anything heroic in his soul/motivations. The only point in his favor is hatred of slavery, and that's not much.
On a personal preference… I actually like antiheroes for being “striped”, as I call it, beings. Persons with good and bad sides to them. Varric is an antihero, yes. Anders. Leliana, if returned to her "bard" personality. Oghren...doubtful, though. Sten, for he possesses both qunary brand of honor and selflessness. Garrus. Thane. H., perhaps. Fenris? He is an ignorant egocentric ruthless killing machine. Can he be called an anti-hero simply because he is a character & not a hero & not a villain? Perhaps. Still rather unsympathetic one in my opinion.
[quote]‘Rank’… plus the begging for help and his whining can be addressed as a separate argument. [/quote] OK. Whining is highly subjective and is a personal interpretation. Rank is irrelevant: initial argument was about morality, not fighting skill, the rest was me being petty.
[quote]So, here are some good examples of who Fenris is and what he cares about. He uses his marking with abandon against slavers. [/quote] That’s merely a negative morality with only one postulate. Extended vengeance, I’d say.
[quote]Very protective personality with a fierce loyalty. [/quote] I discussed his ‘fierce’ loyalty before. And here he threatens to kill Anders if mage does something… very similar to what Fenris already did by running away. This is hypocritical. He also puts his nose into something that is no longer his business, especially since H. can take of him/herself. This is rude to say the least. Your interpretation of “protectiveness” is possible, but I’d interpret such threat as merely a way to voice jealousy and aggression without sounding as a malicious fool.
[quote]He has genuine concern for the slave Orana [/quote] He does genuinely nothing for her. Even H. who ‘enslaves’ her (makes her serve for food and quarter, to put it more correctly) does immensely more. Fenris’ ‘concern’ leads only to him ****ing at H. Again, I see that he hates slavery, but I don’t see him really caring about slaves.
[quote] Isabela…Merrill [/quote] I asked for admirable _actions_. You tell me merely that Fenris agrees that slavery is bad. And that when Fenris ‘kicks the dog’ he actually means to encourage it, although even that is merely your interpretation and even if true ironically NOT the good way to encourage an actual dog. Cruelty is rarely a good way.
[quote] One of the best things he says is to Anders after Dissent.[/quote]It is probably the only non-hostile thing he ever says to Anders. Or to Anders and Merrill combined. Or to Anders, Merrill and mage H.-who-sides-with-mages-and-doesn't-romance-fenris combined. It is very telling that when talking about Fenris positively every _non-insult_ has to be presented as a point in his favor. Although yes, he is unexpectedly non-offensive in that conversation.
P.S. I'm getting an impression that you're somewhat fed up with these huge posts. I know I'm. My suggestions:
1)Argue 1-2 points at a time.
2)Agree to disagree on most points and argue 1-2 ONLY.
3)Agree to disagree. The way I see it we're unlikely to come to a total agreement and intepretations of fictional characters always vary.
4)?
Modifié par Nameless2345, 08 juin 2011 - 08:01 .