Thanks for all the support and comments from people quoting my posts. It's good to know I'm not the only one who reads Horizon, Shep and Kaidan this way.
FrozenFire42 wrote...
ElitePinecone wrote...
The dissonance between the actual conversation and then Shepard's talk with Kelly afterwards - 'I missed him', etc, makes me think the writers didn't coordinate very well on Horizon.
Completely agree. Shepard's conversations with Kelly and Joker were actually, y'know, good. I don't know why he couldn't have shown that emotion when he was face-to-face with Kaidan moments earlier...I guess it could be uncoordinated writers...bleh, I'll just blame the interns, maybe they wrote Shep's Horizon lines.
I agree on this too; the post-Horizon conversations have much more emotional depth than the majority of the Horizon scene (though I feel the best work on Horizon is in those few moments of silence when Kaidan and Shepard just look at each other, his eyes say so much, and then they embrace; everything after that goes downhill).
For me, what was especially dissonant about Horizon was the fact that Shepard knew Kaidan would be there - had some reason to believe, even, that the Collectors might be targetting Kaidan specifically - and was racing through combat to stop the attack, save the colony, and hopefully help Kaidan. Then, when the Collector ship takes off, the mechanic Delan is utterly distraught, but Shepard is totally calm. There isn't even the option to say "Kaidan could be on that ship - we need to follow it on the double!" Shepard doesn't yet know that he's made it through the attack. She treats the Collectors' escape as unfortunate but takes an "it can't be helped" attitude. Now, I don't believe in making her fall down in tears and cry "Nooooo!!!!" to the smoky sky. Shepard is not a tantrum-prone child but a woman of action. I'd have liked to see her readying to take some action rather than making excuses to a random NPC.
Modifié par Estelindis, 08 juin 2011 - 05:36 .