mushoops86anjyl wrote...
laecraft wrote...
mushoops86anjyl wrote...
laecraft wrote...
mushoops86anjyl wrote...
Cerberus becoming indoctrinated isn't contrived at all. Indoctrination has been a major plot point since day one and Cerberus has been aggressively experimenting with reaper technology since moment they acquired it. Experimentation on the technology known to cause indoctrination without knowing HOW that indoctrination occurs could very well lead to becoming indoctrinated for those doing the studying. There's no forced connection there, no artificial bridge. A very simple explanation for Cerberus working with the reapers? Yup. Contrived? Nope.
It would make even more sense for the Alliance to become indoctrinated, since they're the ones who are studying the avatar's remains. Yet people would rage so much at having to shoot at the humans wearing masks and the Alliance logos. Hence this role falls to Cerberus. Let's face it, it's not about sense.
Also true but I am not arguing that. I am only arguing that Cerberus' indoctrination, if true, isn't contrived.
It's not unbelievable, it's not just satisfactory. Feels forced. Like bending the path so that it could reach the set destination. Even though the path doesn't naturally go that way, and nothing suggests that it would go that way.
Except for TIM's experience with that artefact. But it's the only thing, and it feels like it's just set there like a chekov gun, to prevent the accusations of discontinuity. That's why it feels forced. Nothing else about TIM's character suggests that he would succumb to the indoctrination. Hell, even Grayson resisted it for more than a week, with the Reaper tech injected right into his body, and they had to use drugs on him to suppress his willpower to get any results. I'd say TIM has a tad more willpower than his former henchman.
I still don't see how it feels forced. Indoctrination is supposed to be one of the deadliest tools of the reapers not just because of its power but also its subtlety. It is supposed to be a force more powerful than any one organic mind, no matter how impressive that mind might be. One would need specific techonology to fight reaper indoctrination, and the quickest way to acquire that technology would be to study the reapers themselves, thereby putting oneself into the very situation one is trying to protect against. If anything went wrong during the study, if the reaper tech escaped whatever containment that was built around it, whoever was in the compromised area would be at severe risk of indoctrination. All this is assuming that those studying the reaper tech know how indoctrination works, which they don't, or that the containment would be effective. The indoctrination could very well bypass any and all barriers erected around it. Bottom line is that no one knows exactly how indoctrination works, only that it is incredibly powerful and subtle and that is has been shown many times throughout the series that being around any type of reaper or reaper technology is incredibly dangerous exactly because of the effects of indoctrination on organic minds.
The only possible discontinuity I see is our current Shepard not babbling to himself about how sweet the reapers are but then again it's hard for a game surrounding one man to go from an action hero shootout to a sit down love fest halfway through.
Lore-wise? It's not forced. I'm not saying that it's impossible within the ME laws. I'm saying it's poor story-telling. Exactly because indoctrination is so powerful and mysterious and no one knows how it works, it's a magic wand. It's deus ex machina that could explain any character distortion, any betrayal, any plot twist, that would've otherwise been completely unexplainable and unrealistic and impossible to pull off. You don't ever have to play by the rules, just pull indoctrination, everything explained. You don't have to work for it, create plausible and complex motivations and interesting plots. And the worst thing of all, this offense is completely justified by the lore. It is completely justified, and we can't even complain about this violation! Don't you see how horrible it makes it?
Just to clarify: I'm not disputing TIM's indoctrination is a strong possiblity. In fact, I believe that's probably what's going to happen. I just really, really, REALLY don't like it.
Modifié par laecraft, 10 juin 2011 - 06:13 .