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[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

Melicamp wrote...

Pinkflu wrote...

So how mad do you think Liara would be if Shep reprogrammed Glyph with a copy of the Shepard VI for funzies?

I think she'd find a use for it while Shep is away... 

That sounds more disturbing than it should given the actual endings.

[Bloodhowl5429]

Dude on Fire wrote...

Bloodhowl5429 wrote...

Dude on Fire wrote...

WaterWar wrote...

 Does anyone know of a good fanfic with Liara and Shepard (either gender) LI that takes place after/around an alternative ending of ME3? I would love to read something nice/good that I can use to cheer me up when I've completed the game again with LI as a love interest. The current ending makes me sad 

You have an LI as your love interest? THIS IS MADNESS!

Quite, i always says "im going to be differant on this playthrough" (of any of the games) and i always end up with Liara as LI and being faithful.

I think you missed my point. LI = Love Interest. You basicly said you want a love interest as your love interest.

Sorry i miss read "an" as "another". I realy should stop skip reading as im not that great at it.

[Melicamp]

Lizardviking wrote...

Melicamp wrote...

Pinkflu wrote...

So how mad do you think Liara would be if Shep reprogrammed Glyph with a copy of the Shepard VI for funzies?

I think she'd find a use for it while Shep is away... 

That sounds more disturbing than it should given the actual endings.

Oh no! Now I'm imagining Liara as a shut-in, who ignores the other survivors of the Normandy crash, in favour of a VI of her lost love which she clings to for her only company... 

Stupid ending. <_<

[jlb524]

Sunnie22 wrote...

Pinkflu wrote...

So how mad do you think Liara would be if Shep reprogrammed Glyph with a copy of the Shepard VI for funzies?

I'm pretty sure she would find it adorable, right after she reprogrammed Sheps clock radio to be Glyph!

Haha, that won't last long.

[Kilshrek]

Melicamp wrote...

Pinkflu wrote...

So how mad do you think Liara would be if Shep reprogrammed Glyph with a copy of the Shepard VI for funzies?

I think she'd find a use for it while Shep is away... 

Oh, another omni tool sort of thing huh?

[Mr.House]

I would not mind my clock radio being Glyph. He's an awesome info drone. Liara did a good job.

[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

Melicamp wrote...

Lizardviking wrote...

Melicamp wrote...

Pinkflu wrote...

So how mad do you think Liara would be if Shep reprogrammed Glyph with a copy of the Shepard VI for funzies?

I think she'd find a use for it while Shep is away... 

That sounds more disturbing than it should given the actual endings.

Oh no! Now I'm imagining Liara as a shut-in, who ignores the other survivors of the Normandy crash, in favour of a VI of her lost love which she clings to for her only company... 

Nah, do not worry! After the crash Liara got together with Kaidan, who finally got to satisfy his fetish for asari since Shepard is out of the picture. Or in case with Ashley, finally make up with lots of angry sex that had been building up between them for the last 3 years.

....

Stupid ending. <_<

[jlb524]

Mr.House wrote...
I would not mind my clock radio being Glyph. He's an awesome info drone. Liara did a good job.

He doesn't shut up!

[Forsakentale]

Dude on Fire wrote...

In my point of view, bromances aren't homosexual ones, they're more like brohugs. You know, you're in a bromance cause your bros. Bros are bros. Nothing more.

Exactly. Bros are bros and nothing more, that's why I support them. I freak out every time I'm too nice to someone in the games and they think we're in love...

[The Lightspeaker]

Heh, I go away 15 minutes to eat and a whole bunch of people already apparently read it. Thanks guys.

Luxure wrote...

Thank you. I enjoyed the time I've spent reading it. Great stuff, and I hope you're willing to make some more.

Edit: I felt even better when Naomi used her biotics, I'm an Adept person so **** yeah!

Thanks. Yes, my current plan is to do at least a few different short stories sprinkled through the whole game and, later, the series. Although I don't know how I'm going to handle ME2 yet given that Liara isn't a crew member.

And yeah, I love biotics. My "canon" femshep was Vanguard/Adept/Adept across the three games and since I'm using her as the basis for this, biotics.

Chaosbrain wrote...
Just finished reading.. I LOVE it! [smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/w00t.png[/smilie]
The way you describe the uncertainty of Liara is very amusing and nice to read. Also your Shepard is kinda badass [smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/lol.png[/smilie]

Credit for Liara has to go largely to BioWare. Thats the kind of Liara that they conjured up in my mind with the first game, with her gradually becoming more confident and assertive through the series.

My Shepard is pure Paragon, but viciously loyal and protective of people she cares about as well as holding a particular distaste for the whole "human first" thing. In summary: she's an emotional and passionate person who cares deeply. So it was a totally natural progression of the story for her.

Kilshrek wrote...

Totally
channelling Mal Reynolds, if I don't miss my guess? Short and sweet, I
love it. It's a great break in my reading, and I need one. I also need
to write some 2000 words of my own. Only in a much drier fashion. Goddess help me.

MOAR!

Not deliberate but on reflection maybe a little. I do love Firefly. Honestly though its just how I've always seen my Shepard.

Good luck with your writing! And I'll have more as soon as I'm able. I DO actually already have a scene planned out in my head for either the next one I do or the one after that that I think could be incredibly touching. Although I'm going to have to be very careful how I fit it in. I just have to work out where I fit it in now and to actually get it written down along with the rest of the short story that goes around it.

Tyranniac wrote...

That was really great! Fit in well with the story if you ask me. Do write more!

Only thing I can think of (and yes, this is silly) is that alarm clocks seem to be holographic in ME [smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/lol.png[/smilie]

Thanks. Part of the reason this took so long was because I wasn't writing ANYTHING until I'd actually re-played the section where I was putting the story in. And even having done that I was constantly replaying youtube videos checking for inconsistencies with the rest of it.

As for the alarm clock, she knocked the holographic projector off the table. Or maybe she's just a traditionalist. Hell I don't know I didn't even actually think about that one. I'm claiming creative freedom unless you really think its a big problem.

JadeDragonMTR wrote...

That's very cute!! More please!

Appreciate it. More stories like this will be added as I mentioned above. The cuteness is entirely down to how Liara acts in the first game. I'd actually forgotten how formal, nervous, socially uncomfortable and vulnerable she came across when you first meet her. Its really quite sweet.

Lizardviking wrote...

I liked it! [smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/grin.png[/smilie]

Thanks for reading. Hopefully things will get even better as I get back into writing stuff (again, not written anything creative in oh...far too long now).

Xenmir wrote...

I agree completely! Very cute. You captured their personalities in ME1 very well. [smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/joyful.png[/smilie]

Thanks. I wrote the entire thing with personality first and foremost in mind. Its very important to me that I get it right so I appreciate that a lot.

Arcataye wrote...

It was great!
Liara talks much when she's nervous, and Shepard just goes "No.", great part.
Shepard
seems like a badass, but that's just good! The guard incident was
nicely done, I could see the biotics with my eyes (good imagination and
sleepiness does wonders).

Please, do link more if you do write.

I'm glad you liked it. As above the personalities were really important to me so I was studying the interactions and conversations quite intently when replaying to get the personalities and relationship each has at this point just right. I'd like to think I've got their essences down quite well.

As far as my Shep goes, I mentioned above her personality. Pure paragon at heart, but passionate and emotional and she's had her head turned by this beautiful asari scientist who just walked into her life. I tried to give just enough description to the biotics to make it  visual without overpowering the story I was telling, so I'm pleased you think it was well done.

Of course I'll link more if (or more likely WHEN) I get more done.

Bloodhowl5429 wrote...

That was great, loved your Shepards character.

Seen as you asked for some feedback there are only two things that I felt could have been a bit different.

The
first is that in the second line Naomi doesn’t really need her last
name stated after her first as it becomes clear who Liara is talking to
in the next line.  

The second is that during the excellent
verbal beat down of the marine I was so hoping that Shepard was going to
take a sip of coffee and leave him standing in an awkward silence,
while she glared at him. Although I just reread that part and realised
that she put the cup down. [smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/sad.png[/smilie]

Still would have been cool though.


Again was great, hope you do some more. 

Thanks for your feedback. I'm glad there were no glaring issues.

Fair point on the little minor detail. I'm not sure whether or not I want to leave that in but thank you for point it out.

I like your style on the coffee idea, however I think my Shepard is a little too passionate for that. Nobody upsets her Liara! 

More will be produced with time. Though I'm deliberately not going to be putting up stuff until I've replayed the section of game that I'm putting it in. Its crucial to me to get the characters right which means first-hand study.

fat slug wrote...

Final reason made me smile, really shows her "soft" side.

Thank you. Like I said before my Shepard is an emotional and passionate person and it was important to me to show she wasn't just one-dimensional.


Phew. Got through all the feedback. Thanks guys. I really appreciate it, keep it coming. As long as I don't just miss it I read it all and plan to reply to it all individually as best I can. If you haven't read it yet then I'd really appreciate it if you do and provide feedback.

[MaroAlighieri]

Melicamp wrote...

Oh no! Now I'm imagining Liara as a shut-in, who ignores the other survivors of the Normandy crash, in favour of a VI of her lost love which she clings to for her only company... 

Stupid ending. <_<

She sits there, day in and day out, making idle conversation with something that can never really answer her. A poor imitation of what she's lost, a reminder of what she will never have.

*depresses all of you*

[kumquats]

Lizardviking wrote...

Nah, do not worry! After the crash Liara got together with Kaidan, who finally got to satisfy his fetish for asari since Shepard is out of the picture. Or in case with Ashley, finally make up with lots of angry sex that had been building up between them for the last 3 years.

You asked for it.



by Epantiras

*runs away*

[Mr.House]

jlb524 wrote...

Mr.House wrote...
I would not mind my clock radio being Glyph. He's an awesome info drone. Liara did a good job.

He doesn't shut up!

Hey could be worse, he could keep on calling you Shadow Broker.

[Kilshrek]

*quickly pops in to see how thread is going*

*notices people are trying to out-depress one another*

*runs for life*

*drops a funny*

Sauce

[Mr.House]

Liara probably bought a Shepard VI anyways.

[jlb524]

Mr.House wrote...

jlb524 wrote...

Mr.House wrote...
I would not mind my clock radio being Glyph. He's an awesome info drone. Liara did a good job.

He doesn't shut up!

Hey could be worse, he could keep on calling you Shadow Broker.

He calls me, "Shadow Broker's Mistress" or sometimes "Mistress" for short.

[Andronic0s]

Forsakentale wrote...

Dude on Fire wrote...

In my point of view, bromances aren't homosexual ones, they're more like brohugs. You know, you're in a bromance cause your bros. Bros are bros. Nothing more.

Exactly. Bros are bros and nothing more, that's why I support them. I freak out every time I'm too nice to someone in the games and they think we're in love...

yeah...Kaidan asking my Shep to "be something more" out of the blue was weird (specially to me since I avoided spoilers and did not knew that he had been made bisexual in ME3), since Kaidan was: 1) best friend, 2) knew Shep for 4 years at least and 3) (most important one) knows Shep is on a long term relantionship with Liara , it was kind of hilarious though because as soon as I shot him down I walked over to Liara 5 meters away and asked her for marriage 

I like how they did it in DA2 where they had extra flirt dialogue for the romances, so you can choose to go the bro path or the "more than friends" path   

[TMA LIVE]

jlb524 wrote...

Mr.House wrote...

jlb524 wrote...

Mr.House wrote...
I would not mind my clock radio being Glyph. He's an awesome info drone. Liara did a good job.

He doesn't shut up!

Hey could be worse, he could keep on calling you Shadow Broker.

He calls me, "Shadow Broker's Mistress" or sometimes "Mistress" for short.

Wait, are you serious? Or is that something I missed?

[Tyranniac]

The Lightspeaker wrote...

Tyranniac wrote...

That was really great! Fit in well with the story if you ask me. Do write more!

Only thing I can think of (and yes, this is silly) is that alarm clocks seem to be holographic in ME [smilie]../../../images/forum/emoticons/lol.png[/smilie]

Thanks. Part of the reason this took so long was because I wasn't writing ANYTHING until I'd actually re-played the section where I was putting the story in. And even having done that I was constantly replaying youtube videos checking for inconsistencies with the rest of it.

As for the alarm clock, she knocked the holographic projector off the table. Or maybe she's just a traditionalist. Hell I don't know I didn't even actually think about that one. I'm claiming creative freedom unless you really think its a big problem.

Heh, nah, hardly a real problem.  I guess I'm just abnormally obsessed with the holographic alarms.  

[jlb524]

TMA LIVE wrote...

Wait, are you serious? Or is that something I missed?

It comes with the new LotSB dialog fix.

Or I'm totally joking which is more likely 

[kumquats]

Andronic0s wrote...

I like how they did it in DA2 where they had extra flirt dialogue for the romances, so you can choose to go the bro path or the "more than friends" path   

Happened to me, too. Just use the renegade dialogue and he will drop the romance. The 'renegade' path, seems to be the friendship path. It wasn't harsh or anything, but killed of the romance with Kaidan very early in the game.

I guess that would work with Ashley, too.

[Dude on Fire]

Kilshrek wrote...

*quickly pops in to see how thread is going*

*notices people are trying to out-depress one another*

*runs for life*

*drops a funny*

Sauce

This is friggin hillarious. Nuff said.

[Tyrannosaurus Rex]

Andronic0s wrote...

Forsakentale wrote...

Dude on Fire wrote...

In my point of view, bromances aren't homosexual ones, they're more like brohugs. You know, you're in a bromance cause your bros. Bros are bros. Nothing more.

Exactly. Bros are bros and nothing more, that's why I support them. I freak out every time I'm too nice to someone in the games and they think we're in love...

yeah...Kaidan asking my Shep to "be something more" out of the blue was weird (specially to me since I avoided spoilers and did not knew that he had been made bisexual in ME3), since Kaidan was: 1) best friend, 2) knew Shep for 4 years at least and 3) (most important one) knows Shep is on a long term relantionship with Liara , it was kind of hilarious though because as soon as I shot him down I walked over to Liara 5 meters away and asked her for marriage 

I like how they did it in DA2 where they had extra flirt dialogue for the romances, so you can choose to go the bro path or the "more than friends" path   

If you actually talk with Liara first and confirm the romance with her. The awkward romance dialog with Kaidan is cut out and instead you have a very sweet and heartfelt conversation with him.

"EDIT" TOP!

Modifié par Lizardviking, 29 mars 2012 - 09:27 .

[Luxure]

Tyranniac wrote...

WaterWar wrote...

 Does anyone know of a good fanfic with Liara and Shepard (either gender) LI that takes place after/around an alternative ending of ME3? I would love to read something nice/good that I can use to cheer me up when I've completed the game again with LI as a love interest. The current ending makes me sad 

I haven't read much fan fiction but I'll just shamelessly post my own ending (Obviously made to suit my Shepard, and I haven't written much before, but it might help a bit at least?):

Part 1: 
http://social.biowar...39/blog/212210/ 
Part 2: 
http://social.biowar...39/blog/212211/ 
Part 3:   http://social.biowar...39/blog/212241/ 


Sorry if you don't like it and hope you cheer up! Might be a little light on Liara right now but fourth part will fix that.

You thinking about making a Part 4 ? I really enjoyed reading through all of them and It'll be nice to see some more.