Deltaboy37-1 wrote...
Where can I get the full picture? It's kind of missing... something... 
I felt the way she held her left hand didn't contribute to the flow the picture, so I had to cut it out ... sry.

Robhuzz wrote...
Someone get this guy/girl a job at BioWare and have him/her work on the next DLC.
Make it happen BioWare!
Although
could we change that slightly? Instead of having Liara jump from her seat and ninjameld with Shepard, she could get very close to Shepard and say with a seductive voice: "Wouldn't you rather do something else and....not talk about that?"
*Liara's eyes go black*
--> Insert kissing/cuddling scene on Liara's bed
Sure!
Once I conquered Bioware, we shall have at least five different flavours of Liara interrupts. Everything from the slightest hints of flirting to thoothrotting sweet romance to kinkiness that'll melt your screen.
Buy the
Turquise Edition and you'll get all ... at the same time!
And this one is clearly a very manly pineapple, just look at that strong and bulky silhouette!
jlb524 wrote...
I totally fall into both groups...really!
Riiiight ...

The Lightspeaker wrote...
And so I present:
Patience
Feedback is greatly appreciated.
Read it, liked it.
Putting
my nitpicking hat on, I'd I have to agree with Tyranniac in the dress matter. I can understand all your thoughts behind the idea, but it disturbs the "flow" a bit at that point. For me as the reader the white dress on the military vessel comes out of nowhere so to speak.
Other than that, nothing to complain. Great work, lookin' forward to reading more!
TheMarshal wrote...
Finally got my little one-shot out. More FemShep/Liara post-ME3 fluff (surprise surprise!)
Worlds Apart
Warning: Blue child ahoy!
Very nice and very touching.
Was a bit sceptic about the setting at the beginning, but that's just me. And the story managed to pull me in anyway and got
very rewarding towards the end.
Once again, great work!
Modifié par FdL_Ananas, 01 avril 2012 - 06:54 .