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[DOsquareZER]

Aristobulus500 wrote...

I think that Meer makes a better Paragon, and Hale makes a better Renegade. Hale just always sounds pissed off and frustrated and angry. Which makes perfect sense for a renegade, but it just sounds awkward to hear trying to say nice things in a pissed off angry tone.

TheMarshal wrote...

Hey, know what we're not gonna do? Have a freakin' discussion about voice actors!

--Full Stop--

Be my guest, post something to change the subject!

by all means encourage the discussion.  While we're at it, lets talk christianty vs atheism, or how males are superior to female.  Some in depth and intellectual stuff to be said and heard but in the end opinions will not be swayed and angry bitterness will always remain - we've seen happen countless times, its not even funny anymore.  Scars... voice actor discussion promotes serious scars.  In the words of a famous alien fish friend we all know and love these kinds of topics are very much in the ... "its a trap!" catergory.

Moving on.  I never noticed how awesome liara's boots are before...always assumed they were a type of heel - never bothered to look that closely haha 

Edit: damnit marshal, beat me to it.

Modifié par doozer12, 24 avril 2012 - 09:45 .

[IliyaMoroumetz]

TheMarshal wrote...


I'm working out the next few chapters of Returned in my head.  Had to reimagine a number of things because when I mentioned the outline to a writer friend of mine she basically told me Alice was coming across as pathological.  So there's that.

Do you have an ending in mind?

[Akernis]

IliyaMoroumetz wrote...

Fanfiction, then!

Me, I'm writing a story about Matriarch Liara meeting one of Shepard's human descendants and having a ball with that.

I'm also writing a story about Aethyta becoming a Grandmother and all the dirty things she'll whisper to the kid, who'll only burble in response.

I am working on my first ME fanfic that at first is about my headcanon ending, and will hoepfully develop into a series of stories with even more focus on ShepardxLiara. I already have nearly six pages of notes and ideas.. so lost of work to do .

[TheMarshal]

IliyaMoroumetz wrote...

TheMarshal wrote...

I'm working out the next few chapters of Returned in my head.  Had to reimagine a number of things because when I mentioned the outline to a writer friend of mine she basically told me Alice was coming across as pathological.  So there's that.

Do you have an ending in mind?

A few.  Three, I guess.  It largely depends on how things start panning out after Chapter 6.  I've got a two chapter interlude right now, and then things start to get meaty.

I wrote a flashback intro for Chapter 5 that I really like, but I'm wondering if it's going to come across as I'd hoped...

Modifié par TheMarshal, 24 avril 2012 - 09:53 .

[polor89]

doozer12 wrote...

Aristobulus500 wrote...

I think that Meer makes a better Paragon, and Hale makes a better Renegade. Hale just always sounds pissed off and frustrated and angry. Which makes perfect sense for a renegade, but it just sounds awkward to hear trying to say nice things in a pissed off angry tone.

TheMarshal wrote...

Hey, know what we're not gonna do? Have a freakin' discussion about voice actors!

--Full Stop--

Be my guest, post something to change the subject!

by all means encourage the discussion.  While we're at it, lets talk christianty vs atheism, or how males are superior to female.  Some in depth and intellectual stuff to be said and heard but in the end opinions will not be swayed and angry bitterness will always remain - we've seen happen countless times, its not even funny anymore.  Scars... voice actor discussion promotes serious scars.  In the words of a famous alien fish friend we all know and love these kinds of topics are very much in the ... "its a trap!" catergory.

Moving on.  I never noticed how awesome liara's boots are before...always assumed they were a type of heel - never bothered to look that closely haha 

Edit: damnit marshal, beat me to it.

Its not that bad to get offtopic sometimes diversity keeps things interesting

[Dude on Fire]

Bu-bu-bu-but... voice actors? I was just getting to Hale's line right before Liara's goodbye! "MMHHHGGGGRRLLLLhow are we doing?"

[MidnightRaith]

Aristobulus500 wrote...

I think that Meer makes a better Paragon, and Hale makes a better Renegade. Hale just always sounds pissed off and frustrated and angry. Which makes perfect sense for a renegade, but it just sounds awkward to hear trying to say nice things in a pissed off angry tone.

Personally, I've never agreed with this sentiment, but to each his own. IMO, Hale makes a good Paragon if you like a more emotional, Type II-III anti-hero. Especially given the events of ME2, the Paragon doesn't really feel like your average white knight, pure hero type. Even in the first game, you feel that no matter the alignment, Shepard was around to get the job done. This is reflected in Hale's performance when she comes across frustrated and impatient when she's doing nice things. Like talking to Conrad the final time. Femshep is definitely tired to talking to him, and she makes this known, despite the fact that she's still putting up with him. One example out of many, but it does let the player know that being Paragon is not about being the White Knight.

EDIT: Huzzah! It worked. Thanks, Sunnie.  Been awhile since I've posted in forums, I feel like a forum noob all over again lol.

Modifié par MidnightRaith, 24 avril 2012 - 10:24 .

[IliyaMoroumetz]

TheMarshal wrote...

A few.  Three, I guess.  It largely depends on how things start panning out after Chapter 6.  I've got a two chapter interlude right now, and then things start to get meaty.

I wrote a flashback intro for Chapter 5 that I really like, but I'm wondering if it's going to come across as I'd hoped...

How many chapters do you have planned in total?  Sorry for all the questions, I'm geniunely curious and am eager to help other writers get to work.

[Akernis]

We are moving to voice actors again .
Back to fanfics, quick, someone get Lightspeaker.

Modifié par Akernis, 24 avril 2012 - 10:01 .

[The Lightspeaker]

Stop right there. We are NOT having the voice-actor conversation again. It makes people angry and upset for no benefit whatsoever.

Have a fresh off the press Liara/Shep picture from ME2 instead:


On a side note: does anyone else find that no matter WHAT you do with your character Shepard looks a bit odd from some angles? Or hell, that all humans look a bit odd from some angles in ME2?

EdIt:

Back to fanfics, quick, someone get Lightspeaker.

I appreciate the sentiment but I can't write that quick.

Working on ME2 stuff now though, so there'll be some stuff up soon enough.

Modifié par The Lightspeaker, 24 avril 2012 - 10:07 .

[MidnightRaith]

Akernis wrote...

We are moving to voice actors again .
Back to fanfics, quick, someone get Lightspeaker.

*Shrug* Technically, I'm replying to someone I was already speaking with. So long as we keep the discussion civil and respectful, I see no problem with having it.

[TheMarshal]

IliyaMoroumetz wrote...

How many chapters do you have planned in total?  Sorry for all the questions, I'm geniunely curious and am eager to help other writers get to work.

It's tough to say for certain.  Initially I thought about nine.  Three for the first act, three for the second, and three for the third.  Now that I've gotten started on the second act, it seems that this one will be short (two chapters) but the final act is still up in the air.  Could be three.  Could be four or five, depending on how certain parts of the story play out, whether I want to actually give character to any of the side characters, etc.

[Tyranniac]

The Lightspeaker wrote...
I appreciate the sentiment but I can't write that quick.

Working on ME2 stuff now though, so there'll be some stuff up soon enough.

Just remembered I forgot to mention you did a good job with the most recent one! (Although I would say I prefer the ones that take place during the game)

[morten n86]

Remeber how dissepointed i was when i found out liara wasnt in my squad in ME2.
then came the dlc Lotsb.
Bloody hell that was brilliant

[MidnightRaith]

TheMarshal wrote...

IliyaMoroumetz wrote...

How many chapters do you have planned in total?  Sorry for all the questions, I'm geniunely curious and am eager to help other writers get to work.

It's tough to say for certain.  Initially I thought about nine.  Three for the first act, three for the second, and three for the third.  Now that I've gotten started on the second act, it seems that this one will be short (two chapters) but the final act is still up in the air.  Could be three.  Could be four or five, depending on how certain parts of the story play out, whether I want to actually give character to any of the side characters, etc.

I keep putting off reviewing yours, Marshall. Your fic is quite unique and you're definitely executing it well. Very well written. I generally write very long reviews on what I think you did right, what can be improved on, however I feel guilty about my... what? Five...six? Unfinished fics that I keep putting off to log on. Long story short, RL donkey kicked me in the face and I haven't been able to muster up the effort to continue any of them. IDK, reviewing your fic, discontinuing one of my own, and organizing the rest in order of interest are on my To Do LIst....

Modifié par MidnightRaith, 24 avril 2012 - 10:27 .

[Sunnie]

MidnightRaith wrote...

EDIT: Sigh.... It seems I've forgotten how to replace links with text... Could someone provide the code?

[*url=http://link.whatever]Text you wnt to be the link[/url]

Remove the * in the first tag when doing a real link.

[Deltakarma]

I am trying to write a Fan-Fic..... but... so... lazy.

I was going to do a chapter kind of thing then change it into a comic.

My first would be going through a Krogan that I created.
Then go off of his "love", which is an Asari.

Honestly, I feel that both would make good comics.....
The Asari one will have some pretty sick things.

My timeline would range from the day before the Genophage release to pretty much whenever I decide to branch it off.

To talk a bit of my Asari side, I was going to make her meet Liara as an agent for the Shadow Broker for information on things and change it into a teeny friendship....

Dont want to spoil it to much, but I think I will try and incorporate Liara heavily when Shepard is "MIA". And branch it off of the love interest I had.... god it feels like I am making a movie....

Anyways, when I am done with all that, going to make my own ending and have my Shep and Liara have some "tiny" adventures. Hehehe

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Also, quick question....

Why do F!Sheps seem to choose Liara in Mass Effect 3 more now... I am seeing A LOT of Deviant Art of F!Shep and Liara.... Im guessing making up for lost time? Hehehe

[polor89]

guys you know any good fanfic between shep-liara? post ending or something like that

[Aristobulus500]

I see you changed your avatar from a Krogan to Liara, Polor.

[Akernis]

polor89 wrote...

guys you know any good fanfic between shep-liara? post ending or something like that

Moreeman and Marshal has some good post-ending ones I know, on deviantart and fanfiction.net respectably.

Modifié par Akernis, 24 avril 2012 - 10:41 .

[Neeh]

Gif dump!
It's fairly big so I won't image tag it. I have alot of these things laying around that I never feel are worth uploading anywhere, mostly discarded plans or failed attempts at awesomeness, but a few here might enjoy it atleast.

>Gif link<


Also, I've been meaning to ask, as it looks like we're on the topic of fanfics. Does anyone have a list or something with a few good ones? 'am hitting the road in a weeks time and I wouldn't mind some reading material to kill time. 16 hour drive, woot. I've collected most of the work posted here, but I'm sure there's some closet writers or hidden gems around!

[MidnightRaith]

polor89 wrote...

guys you know any good fanfic between shep-liara? post ending or something like that

Rae D. Magdon on fanfic also had a good one. Called Rebirth.

Neeh wrote...
Also, I've been meaning to ask, as it looks like we're on the topic of fanfics. Does anyone have a list or something with a few good ones? 'am hitting the road in a weeks time and I wouldn't mind some reading material to kill time. 16 hour drive, woot. I've collected most of the work posted here, but I'm sure there's some closet writers or hidden gems around!

A Thessian's Whisper is a good long one if you haven't read it yet. If you have, well, personally I think it's good enough for a reread.

Modifié par MidnightRaith, 24 avril 2012 - 10:41 .

[Deltakarma]

Neeh wrote...

Gif dump!
It's fairly big so I won't image tag it. I have alot of these things laying around that I never feel are worth uploading anywhere, mostly discarded plans or failed attempts at awesomeness, but a few here might enjoy it atleast.

>Gif link<

Mother of God..... would it be wierd if I wanted to go forward and kiss it 

Modifié par Deltakarma, 24 avril 2012 - 10:40 .

[Velocithon]

Neeh wrote...

Gif dump!
It's fairly big so I won't image tag it. I have alot of these things laying around that I never feel are worth uploading anywhere, mostly discarded plans or failed attempts at awesomeness, but a few here might enjoy it atleast.

>Gif link<


Also, I've been meaning to ask, as it looks like we're on the topic of fanfics. Does anyone have a list or something with a few good ones? 'am hitting the road in a weeks time and I wouldn't mind some reading material to kill time. 16 hour drive, woot. I've collected most of the work posted here, but I'm sure there's some closet writers or hidden gems around!

*slaps*

EVERYTHING YOU MAKE....UPLOAD!!!