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[PMC65]

lillitheris wrote...

The Lightspeaker wrote...

PMC65 wrote...

but for now I'll pick up Austen, Dickens, etc.

My problem is I've got like...20 pages of A Dance with Dragons left and then I'm out of new novels for the most part.

Although I think I've got all the Sherlock Holmes stuff about here somewhere...maybe I'll read that.

I’m gathering up the big list of fanfic on the Fan Creations forum. Maybe there’s some new Garrus/whatever there, if only Liara stuff is risky?

It's just FShep/Liara & MShep/Ashley that I avoid ... I have read a few Liara with Miranda, MSheps with Liara, etc. I've seen your thread (cool) and I plan on using it for other character fan fic stories in the ME universe.  

[Obsidian Gryphon]

IliyaMoroumetz wrote...

Got another Liara one-shot I think you folks will appreciate.

Hands Off!

Am just starting into the femShep + Liara fanfics so this is a nice one. Thanks for the link! Though I'm somewhat thrown off by the first name for Shepard since that's not what I used for my own Shep.Still a great read though.

[Yuqi]

Obsidian Gryphon wrote...

IliyaMoroumetz wrote...

Got another Liara one-shot I think you folks will appreciate.

Hands Off!

Am just starting into the femShep + Liara fanfics so this is a nice one. Thanks for the link! Though I'm somewhat thrown off by the first name for Shepard since that's not what I used for my own Shep.Still a great read though.

*snip*

Jane is actually the default name for fshep, so I can see why Iilya used it. It's like with Chrono Trigger you can name the characters yourself in-game, but they all have  default names..So when you write for Chrono trigger it's easir for people to asscociate with the default names, as opposed to what the writer named the characters in-game.

Modifié par Yuqi, 09 mai 2012 - 01:01 .

[IliyaMoroumetz]

Yuqi wrote...

Jane is actually the default name for fshep. 

Indeed.  When I'm writing stories for my canon!Shep, I use the name Nora, since she has her own personal story to deal with. 

Otherwise, I just use Jane or a rather everyday name for a woman when the situation of the story calls for it. 

I.e. For a manipulative and seductive Shepard that can make anyone do whatever she wants, I use Lilith.  For a high minded and almost Paladin-like shepard, fueled by righteous fire, I'd use Celestine.  You get the idea.

[moreeman06]

IliyaMoroumetz wrote...

Got another Liara one-shot I think you folks will appreciate.

Hands Off!

It was a fun little read, I also like the allusion to BW's more than questionable shower wear

[IliyaMoroumetz]

moreeman06 wrote...

It was a fun little read, I also like the allusion to BW's more than questionable shower wear

Liara doesn't bother with something so frivalous, if her love scene and the subsequent morning afterward are of any indication.  

But yeah, if Shepard wasn't already enamored with either Liara (or Ashley, barring the asari, curse you, Bioware, for not giving femshep the option!), she'd be scolding Traynor for ruining her clothes!

Modifié par IliyaMoroumetz, 09 mai 2012 - 01:22 .

[Obsidian Gryphon]

Yuqi wrote...

Obsidian Gryphon wrote...

IliyaMoroumetz wrote...

Got another Liara one-shot I think you folks will appreciate.

Hands Off!

Am just starting into the femShep + Liara fanfics so this is a nice one. Thanks for the link! Though I'm somewhat thrown off by the first name for Shepard since that's not what I used for my own Shep.Still a great read though.

*snip*

Jane is actually the default name for fshep, so I can see why Iilya used it. It's like with Chrono Trigger you can name the characters yourself in-game, but they all have  default names..So when you write for Chrono trigger it's easir for people to asscociate with the default names, as opposed to what the writer named the characters in-game.

I'm too used to Shepard because that's what everyone calls her / him so I always think of the char in that way, even though I have given my own Shep a first name. Just like what good old Dr Chakwas said.    Seems like a scariledge to address Shepard by anyhting other than ... Shepard

[DarkCloudd]

IliyaMoroumetz wrote...

moreeman06 wrote...

It was a fun little read, I also like the allusion to BW's more than questionable shower wear

Liara doesn't bother with something so frivalous, if her love scene and the subsequent morning afterward are of any indication.  

But yeah, if Shepard wasn't already enamored with either Liara (or Ashley, barring the asari, curse you, Bioware, for not giving femshep the option!), she'd be scolding Traynor for ruining her clothes!

I posted a review on FF.net. I was the second one that reviewed it. I really loved the jab at BW for the shower thing too, that was excellent!

Modifié par DarkCloudd, 09 mai 2012 - 01:39 .

[IliyaMoroumetz]

DarkCloudd wrote...

I posted a review on FF.net. I was the second one that reviewed it. I really loved the jab at BW for the shower thing too, that was excellent!

Ya know, I always wonder if people ever see the subtle references I make in my stories to things like that.  Thank you.

[MidnightRaith]

Hi guys. Dang, missed a crap load of stuff today....

Well, here's a question for y'all. What is the plural for asari? I like to think it is its own plural form. However, I see many a fanfic writer that like to use "asaris" and that just doesn't look right to me. Like it wouldn't be grammatically correct.... Given that I want to be a book editor in the future, I place more importance over this stuff than I probably should, but I'm of the opinion that a fic without proper grammar breaks immersion....

[moreeman06]

MidnightRaith wrote...

Hi guys. Dang, missed a crap load of stuff today....

Well, here's a question for y'all. What is the plural for asari? I like to think it is its own plural form. However, I see many a fanfic writer that like to use "asaris" and that just doesn't look right to me. Like it wouldn't be grammatically correct.... Given that I want to be a book editor in the future, I place more importance over this stuff than I probably should, but I'm of the opinion that a fic without proper grammar breaks immersion....

I think it would just be Asari like the plural of moose is moose,  saying mooses our deers isn't write and just like you said Asaris sounds just as wrong to me

[IliyaMoroumetz]

MidnightRaith wrote...

Hi guys. Dang, missed a crap load of stuff today....

Well, here's a question for y'all. What is the plural for asari? I like to think it is its own plural form. However, I see many a fanfic writer that like to use "asaris" and that just doesn't look right to me. Like it wouldn't be grammatically correct.... Given that I want to be a book editor in the future, I place more importance over this stuff than I probably should, but I'm of the opinion that a fic without proper grammar breaks immersion....

There's one asari and then there's a squad of asari. 

So, you're right in scrutinizing 'asaris' in the plural sense.

[lillitheris]

MidnightRaith wrote...

Hi guys. Dang, missed a crap load of stuff today....

Well, here's a question for y'all. What is the plural for asari? I like to think it is its own plural form. However, I see many a fanfic writer that like to use "asaris" and that just doesn't look right to me. Like it wouldn't be grammatically correct.... Given that I want to be a book editor in the future, I place more importance over this stuff than I probably should, but I'm of the opinion that a fic without proper grammar breaks immersion....

I think it’s generally agreed it’s asari, as with krogan, volus, hanar, elcor (although I have seen elcors a little more often than the others). Salarians, turians, and humans are the only ones pluralized normally that I can think off headtop.

[moreeman06]

lillitheris wrote...

MidnightRaith wrote...

Hi guys. Dang, missed a crap load of stuff today....

Well, here's a question for y'all. What is the plural for asari? I like to think it is its own plural form. However, I see many a fanfic writer that like to use "asaris" and that just doesn't look right to me. Like it wouldn't be grammatically correct.... Given that I want to be a book editor in the future, I place more importance over this stuff than I probably should, but I'm of the opinion that a fic without proper grammar breaks immersion....

I think it’s generally agreed it’s asari, as with krogan, volus, hanar, elcor (although I have seen elcors a little more often than the others). Salarians, turians, and humans are the only ones pluralized normally that I can think off headtop.

and quarians and batarians

[lillitheris]

IliyaMoroumetz wrote...

There's one asari and then there's a squad of asari. 

How about ‘a wave’ of asari? Or ‘a sky’ of asari? A ‘squad’ seems so mundane, like ‘flock’ or something.

Modifié par lillitheris, 09 mai 2012 - 02:25 .

[IliyaMoroumetz]

lillitheris wrote...

IliyaMoroumetz wrote...

There's one asari and then there's a squad of asari. 

How about a ‘wave of asari’? Or a ‘sky of asari’? A ‘squad’ seems so mundane, like ‘flock’ or something.

A wave is good.  Mostly because of their connection to the sea and all that.

[Brooks Mac]

I concur!
I like all the asari.
But i love a certain asarus, liara!
Lol jk. (about the -us part ;D) I think your right though!

[coatsworth]

Brooks Mac wrote...

I concur!
I like all the asari.
But i love a certain asarus, liara!
Lol jk. (about the -us part ;D) I think your right though!

Clever, but i stick to asari for me when i do writing.

[PMC65]

MidnightRaith wrote...

Hi guys. Dang, missed a crap load of stuff today....

Well, here's a question for y'all. What is the plural for asari? I like to think it is its own plural form. However, I see many a fanfic writer that like to use "asaris" and that just doesn't look right to me. Like it wouldn't be grammatically correct.... Given that I want to be a book editor in the future, I place more importance over this stuff than I probably should, but I'm of the opinion that a fic without proper grammar breaks immersion....

It is asari and yet I used asaris in A Thessian's Whisper. What was I thinking? Aaack!

A reader punched me for it and I was really grateful because I knew it yet there I was ... a.s.a.r.i.s. Idiot!

I'll go back and correct when I have time and probably make yet more updates to chapters when I do.

[rubynorman]

Asaris is some kinds of fish, right ?

*Check my mail, see nothing new, look at PMC with puppy eyes*

My newest FA. I save the whole piece for my oneshot but the exams are coming.. so I'll drop it for now.
fav.me/d4z60da

Modifié par rubynorman, 09 mai 2012 - 02:58 .

[moreeman06]

rubynorman wrote...

Asaris is some kinds of fish, right ?

*Check my mail, see nothing new, look at PMC with puppy eyes*

My newest FA. I save the whole piece for my oneshot but the exams are coming.. so I'll drop it for now.
fav.me/d4z60da

yay you finally finished it now where is the fic to go with it.  I love the way it came out btw:D

[rubynorman]

moreeman06 wrote...

yay you finally finished it now where is the fic to go with it.  I love the way it came out btw:D

That fic is a mess . I find it quite boring with my bad jokes, so I'll drop it until I'm done with my exams. Thank you for all the help so far .

[moreeman06]

rubynorman wrote...

moreeman06 wrote...

yay you finally finished it now where is the fic to go with it.  I love the way it came out btw:D

That fic is a mess . I find it quite boring with my bad jokes, so I'll drop it until I'm done with my exams. Thank you for all the help so far .

No problem and finish it, I don't want to sound like a teacher but i want to see a polished final version pronto

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 Mass Effect:  Liara's Memory's by Ian-Coast  
http://ian-coast.dev...ories-299791312 

Modifié par moreeman06, 09 mai 2012 - 03:32 .

[rubynorman]

New box in the forum Mass Effect 3 Fan Creations 
New topic Embrace Eternity: Liara T'Soni Tribute Videos/Drawings

Modifié par rubynorman, 09 mai 2012 - 04:06 .