Aristobulus500 wrote...
*Talks about Theo's fic*
About some of the specific points you raised.
I did not think Shepard seemed to weak since I feel fine with, probably even prefers, for him to have an emotionally vulnerable side for what matter most dearly to him. I think I would have done it much the same way if I had been the one writing it.
I did not feel that Liara was inconsistent either, at least not to the decree I think you meant, for me when she meet Shepard in her office she experienced intense feelings of disbelief for him really being there, confusion for how to handle his return and her own feelings of sorrow up until then and at last fear of pushing him away again, especially if he learns what she did to help revive him.
In defence to this overwhelming emotional response she shut all her feelings down and simply became cold as it was to much to handle for her at that moment.
It is first when she is back in her apartment and alone that she allows her feelings to open up again and without Shepard around she can think clearly again and first then realises that she has done precisely what she had feared.
I also did not feel like he rejected the way Liara behaved on Ilium, simply showing how she really is that we normally does not get to see until after the Shadow Broker is defeated. It is not like he wrote Liara and Shepard's meeting on Ilium as a happy reunion of lovers.
However I can see where you are coming from with this particular viewpoint, it just wasn't a problem for me as I preferred her this way.
And while I agree with you that it would be very hard, if not impossible to integrate into the game without altering LotSB then I greatly enjoyed it anyway.
And lastly I just assumed that Liara told her where she lived.
Edit: While I agree that there are some characteristics that Shepard must adhere to (Human, Alliance marine, Commander of the Normandy, trying to stop the Reapers etc.) anything beyond that is really open to interpetation. Some of the things you can actually do in the game seems more out-of-character for Shepard to me than what I read in Theo's (and most other's in fact) fic.
I have yet to see a Shepard in fanfic where I felt anything resembling "Wait, that is not Shepard" (granted I haven't read that many beyond those posted by members here, but the point stands). in the worst cases I have just gone "well I can't identify with that Shepard, on to the next fic".
Modifié par Akernis, 28 mai 2012 - 11:04 .