Aristobulus500 wrote...
This is a longer fic, Theo, but it really works well. I love the dynamic of Garrus and Tali as a comparison to Shepard and Liara - there are some similarities, but Garrus and Tali have their own styles, their own relationship that is different from the one Shepard and Liara have together.
As well, just a chance to see Thessia and the city explored some more - there are some very pretty sights described here, and it all makes sense too and is fitting for the Asari.
I especially love the overall emotion and tone of this one - it keeps a very relaxed, casual and pleasant tone. There's more I can say - and I will - but I want to give people a chance to read it before writing up a more detailed post.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts - there was definitely an opportunity to be taken with displaying Garrus and Tali's friendship with Shepard and Liara and the differences between them. If any of the characters have this special bond in Mass Effect, it's them, and it's only probable that they would keep in contact and see each other throughout their lives.
And indeed more of a chance to explore Thessia - every setting in the planet really has so much to be seen, I don't think it would ever be thoroughly explored - there's just so much to it, and who knows what else!
Akernis wrote...
Yeah, a new story from you, looking forward to reading it 
And in that case I might as well share as I just got finished with a fic of my own, a follow up to "Birthday".
About a little project Shepard wants to share with Liara.
http://akernis.devia...t.com/#/d55q8sb
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, Akernis, I replied via PM in the FFN, and I also read your own story - and I loved it - it was very sweet and touching. I told you what I think in detail on DA.
noxiuniversitas1 wrote...
A thing of beauty... absolutely recommend it! Go. Read. Now. !!!!
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Haha, we can never have too much pink - thank you so much for recommending it, Jen, and for reading & reviewing, of course! :happy:
Modifié par Theodoro, 02 juillet 2012 - 09:43 .