Liara Fans: keep your love blue and true!
#44776
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 08:53
#44777
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 08:55
So. Anybody interested in test reading my chapter 1?
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I would have liked to look at it but unfortunately I have too much to do currently
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Oh, but please! I beg of you!
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Perhaps I could threaten this thread to read it? "Do as I say or I will bombard this thread will blue babies" hmm? Perhaps that would work?
[quote]rubynorman wrote...
Bonus Matriarch

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Decent, but I have seen another one that did the same thing, but where Liara look way better in the dress.
[quote]CrimsonN7 wrote...
Just out of curiosity what class of Shepard do you guys/gals play as?
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Paragade Maleshep soldier.
Modifié par Lizardviking, 23 juillet 2012 - 08:58 .
#44778
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 09:01
You are aware that threatening the Commander and crack-shot of the Biotic Blue Baby Bombardment Brigade with blue baby bombardments is somewhat counterproductive right?Lizardviking wrote...
Akernis wrote...
I would have liked to look at it but unfortunately I have too much to do currentlyLizardviking wrote...
So. Anybody interested in test reading my chapter 1?
Oh, but please! I beg of you!
...
Perhaps I could threaten this thread to read it? "Do as I say or I will bombard this thread will blue babies" hmm? Perhaps that would work?
But in seriousness how long is the story? perhaps I can take some time.
Modifié par Akernis, 23 juillet 2012 - 09:02 .
#44779
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 09:05
CrimsonN7 wrote...
Just out of curiosity what class of Shepard do you guys/gals play as?
Female adept, and I usually use Liara and EDI as squadmates.
#44780
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 09:06
CrimsonN7 wrote...
Just out of curiosity what class of Shepard do you guys/gals play as?
Canon FemShep Infiltrator Paragon (ME1-2-3) with slam as a bonus power for making biotic explosion with Liara , BroShep ( only appears in ME3) Vanguard.
*Salute back* Anything for Blue BerryCrimsonN7 wrote...
Now that's underhanded sneakiness I can get on board with, your friend just needed a little guidance, Liara admires your dedication to the biotic brigade, I salute you{smilie}
I can't find my canon FemShep picture, so this broshep has a chance to show up.
#44781
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 09:13
Akernis wrote...
You are aware that threatening the Commander and crack-shot of the Biotic Blue Baby Bombardment Brigade with blue baby bombardments is somewhat counterproductive right?Lizardviking wrote...
Akernis wrote...
I would have liked to look at it but unfortunately I have too much to do currentlyLizardviking wrote...
So. Anybody interested in test reading my chapter 1?
Oh, but please! I beg of you!
...
Perhaps I could threaten this thread to read it? "Do as I say or I will bombard this thread will blue babies" hmm? Perhaps that would work?
But in seriousness how long is the story? perhaps I can take some time.
It is only 4323 words long (chapter 1 that is).
It is here if you want to read it,
Modifié par Lizardviking, 23 juillet 2012 - 09:13 .
#44783
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 09:21
Akernis wrote...
Okay, I have something else i have to do first, assuming I get time I will send you a PM when I have read it, anything in particular you want feedback on?Lizardviking wrote...
It is only 4323 words long (chapter 1 that is).
It is here if you want to read it,
I just want feedback on everything, from gramma, writing style, characterization, etc.
#44784
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 09:22
Fair enoughLizardviking wrote...
Akernis wrote...
Okay, I have something else i have to do first, assuming I get time I will send you a PM when I have read it, anything in particular you want feedback on?Lizardviking wrote...
It is only 4323 words long (chapter 1 that is).
It is here if you want to read it,
I just want feedback on everything, from gramma, writing style, characterization, etc.
#44785
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 09:36
rubynorman wrote...
*Salute back* Anything for Blue Berry
I can't find my canon FemShep picture, so this broshep has a chance to show up.
I'll see your man Shep and raise you a Liara salute!
#44786
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 09:36
rubynorman wrote...
Bonus MatriarchBeneziaLiara
Hmmm the hat gets in the way of her cute lil freckles and her gorg rich blue eyes;) Liked the look on Benezia, regal and mystical^_^
It's interesting to find out how everyone else plays as Shep, biotics, soldiers and infiltrators seem to be the most common picks, not alot of love for engineers it seems, I guess this class is more than likely the least popular class to play:whistle:
#44787
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 09:42
Modifié par Ravii, 23 juillet 2012 - 09:47 .
#44788
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 09:53
#44789
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 09:57

Yeah I guess waiting for Shep to spoil their plans gets boring after awhile:P
Modifié par CrimsonN7, 23 juillet 2012 - 09:58 .
#44790
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 09:59
#44791
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 10:06
#44792
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 10:08
#44793
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 10:09
#44794
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 10:12
Agreed I like that one much better except for the facial tatooesTheMarshal wrote...
I wish they had stuck with the original concepts for Benezia.
*snip*
The "nobody messes with my girl" one? but of courseshepard1038 wrote...
Did anyone used the renegade interrupt when talking to Matriarch Aethyta?
Modifié par Akernis, 23 juillet 2012 - 10:14 .
#44795
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 10:13
Ya, then she was like "Liara..." when Liara was being stubborn.shepard1038 wrote...
Did anyone used the renegade interrupt when talking to Matriarch Aethyta?
Modifié par Mr.House, 23 juillet 2012 - 10:14 .
#44796
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 10:16
Isn't that the paragon conversation choise when mentioning to Liara about talking with Aethyta? neither a renegade choice or an interrupt.Mr.House wrote...
Ya, then she was like "Liara..." when Liara was being stubborn.shepard1038 wrote...
Did anyone used the renegade interrupt when talking to Matriarch Aethyta?
#44797
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 10:18
When talking to Liara, yes. You just pick the upper dialog. Aethyta has the renegade interupt.Akernis wrote...
Isn't that the paragon conversation choise when mentioning to Liara about talking with Aethyta? neither a renegade choice or an interrupt.Mr.House wrote...
Ya, then she was like "Liara..." when Liara was being stubborn.shepard1038 wrote...
Did anyone used the renegade interrupt when talking to Matriarch Aethyta?
#44798
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 10:18
shepard1038 wrote...
Did anyone used the renegade interrupt when talking to Matriarch Aethyta?
Shepard says "That's not gonna happen" and Aethyta says "No arguement here. I only took these crap jobs to keep the matriarchs happy that she's under control." Than Shep "Just as long as we are clear. Nobody messes with my girl" Aethyta "*laughter*Maybe your good for her after all".
Edit: But Akernis was faster.
Modifié par Ravii, 23 juillet 2012 - 10:21 .
#44799
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 10:18
Yes. I wanted to used the renegade interrupt because she was threatening Shepard and Liara. And no one threatens Liara.<_<Akernis wrote...
The "nobody messes with my girl" one? but of courseshepard1038 wrote...
Did anyone used the renegade interrupt when talking to Matriarch Aethyta?nobody messes with Shepard's girl, pure and simply.
Edit:
Modifié par shepard1038, 23 juillet 2012 - 10:29 .
#44800
Posté 23 juillet 2012 - 10:28





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