Grunt Lord wrote...
that is a good fanfic though but jack just came out of nowhere but still great!
True. It did come out of nowhere, but Jack is just unstable even though Shepard tried to help her. I wrote that scene before I knew she has mellowed some. Actually I wrote the whole thing before E3. Well, I've changed things some since, but I've tried to keep it in within my thoughts of not really knowing anything besides Kaidan/Ash being Spectres and James Vega and the little info that was out before E3.
I needed a little action and I thought that was the best route. I just hope Jack fans don't get mad. And if they do, I'm sorry. I could have done someone else, but Jack is ...well...Jack.
I will say this here. There are three characters I don't mention at all. My final chapter note, I will explain why. But like I said in my note for chapter 14, this is a story about Shepard and Liara. Not a story about Shepard's squad mates. People asking me about them is getting a slight bit annoying.

@King Minos. There are better authors than myself. I'm still new at writing fanfic. I always have stories in my head(not always about Mass Effect), but I've never put them down before I found that site. I am glad you are enjoying it. I did enjoy writing it. Editing it another story:pinched:
Last year I had some cross over between True Blood and Mass Effect. It was vampires in space. LMAO. Too bad that story is gone from my head now. I couldn't recreate that if I wanted to.
Modifié par ladyvader, 31 août 2011 - 10:27 .