Akernis wrote...
That can work, sometimes it is far more interesting when the character has trouple with the romance in the beginning, makes it all the more potent when it does work out.
One of my favourite fanfics has a firmly cold and agressive renegade Shepard who is in the writer's own words "a rough diamind if ever there was one" in love with Liara and it is extremely interesting to read how she gradually opens up to Liara
I just can't help myself, Kaelis is very ineterested in helping LIara in any way he can
Agreed. Having the romance be just perfect can quite easily be dull, if there is no drama then there is no real reason to get involved as nothing is at stake.
That said, I feel the drama should mostly be in the middle of the story. While I do not think that Liara and Shepard should automaticly fall in love with each other the moment they meet on Therum, the romance in ME1 should not be too drama filled. It is only in ME2 where both characters and their realtionship must suffer and endure.





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