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[Tyranniac]

 

The Lightspeaker wrote...

Tyranniac wrote...

Anybody have any feedback to offer on the log aside from spelling errors? (I think I've taken care of most of them now... [smilie]http://social.bioware.com/images/forum/emoticons/uncertain.png[/smilie])

I was trying to decide whether to be tactful or honest. So I settled on honesty: personally I think the style is good but it feels a little "clinical" rather than a personal log. Please don't take offence it’s just that it seems to focus quite a lot on this happened and then this happened and this is whats going on rather than being personal.

I was actually thinking a while back of writing something like that myself and gave a lot of thought to the subject so I’ve thrown together a first entry for my own Shepard as an example of what I mean, though I lost my initial notes so its not quite as I planned originally (sorry about the huge post guys).

...

Honest is good. Far more helpful, yes? And yeah, you're right. I was worried about that. I'm going to try to flesh it out a bit with more personality and such. I didn't want to make it too long, but there was also a lot of things that needed saying in the first part. I think it will be easier to be more personal with other entries since there will be less events transpiring between each entry.

I like yours by the way, you certainly don't have the same problem I do. I notice our Shepards are very different by the way!

[The Lightspeaker]

Tyranniac wrote...

Honest is good. Far more helpful, yes? And yeah, you're right. I was worried about that. I'm going to try to flesh it out a bit with more personality and such. I didn't want to make it too long, but there was also a lot of things that needed saying in the first part. I think it will be easier to be more personal with other entries since there will be less events transpiring between each entry.

If length is an issue with your writing style then its generally better to start breaking it down rather than leaving stuff out in my opinion. Spread something across several entries rather than doing absolutely everything in one go. Obviously some things do just happen one thing after another but generally speaking theres usually a way to find a break point.

I like yours by the way, you certainly don't have the same problem I do. I notice our Shepards are very different by the way!

Thanks. I've been writing various stories and odds and ends of fanfic for a few years now so I've had time to practice. I've actually not written anything in a long time and that was a hell of a lot of fun so if you don't mind too much (in terms of "stealing your thunder") I might carry it on in a blog entry.

And the differences in Shepards are not surprising. Everyone's Shep is personal to them.

[BeDotWe]

Oh god check this out. It's the reverse of the Liara flashback.

Modifié par BeDotWe, 25 mars 2012 - 11:20 .

[zingro]

Sunnie22 wrote...
Just a quick note, page counting can get a thread locked, and has happened on numerous occasions...

No offence, but Im sure the mods have worse threads to lock than Liara lovers dropping the next few hundred numbers page to reach. All Love threads are guilty of page counts.

Now back to more serious blue issues.. Liara pic bomb incoming

[GODofWAR93]

Yuqi wrote...

moreeman06 wrote...

 And now for Yuqi and PMC's pleasure



 
 
 
 
 
[smilie]http://i1259.photobucket.com/albums/ii560/moreeman06/MassEffect32012-03-2417-10-03-74.jpg[/smilie]

Zomg  he has such a rugged and sexy look! it. 

Cohina's,VareenSoldier's,Moremans, and Trekkers  MSheps are now my FAVORITE  ones, on the Citadel! (Has shamelessly saved them to desktop :innocent:)

*sob*  I feel left out, you don't like my Shep?

[The Lightspeaker]

zingro wrote...

That is...quite some pose...

[PMC65]

jlb524 wrote...

PMC65 wrote...

And your avatar ... is that HER?

yeah

Sweet Christmas! Now I'm not only jealous of Liara but wishin' that I was an asari.

[hollow22_]

zingro, better not tempt mods to close this one all your pics are wonderfull, but please no offence too while I'm telling you this, since this is no personal attack: bombing pics just for the fun of posting them is against rule 6 of BSN tiped here:

"No posting single images or animated images. Posting single images or animated .gifs/images instead of engaging in discussion is not allowed. These are discussion forums and that means engaging in dialog, not picture spam. Using images to support your discussion is fine as long as the images used conform to the standard forum rules (no adult content, no slander, no racism, etc). Posting single images instead of discussion will be considered spam and will not be tolerated. Images will be deleted without warning. Posters may be banned for repeated offenses."

I repeat, I know you didn't want to spam them, and I loved all the pics, but better being carefull since we all (including you) don't want liara's thread locked, and also this time you as poster will riks of being banned

[VarrenSoldier]

*sees Yuqi saves Josh*
You guys can use Josh's likeness in fanart. As long as it shows Josh and Liara being together.
Thank you for your time.
EDIT: I wonder why they don't like random pics.

Modifié par VarrenSoldier, 25 mars 2012 - 11:21 .

[Neeh]

The Lightspeaker wrote...

zingro wrote...

That is...quite some pose...

And here I was, convinced Liara didn't know the meaning of underwear...oh well.

[jlb524]

PMC65 wrote...
Sweet Christmas! Now I'm not only jealous of Liara but wishin' that I was an asari.

Just one of the 35 perks that comes with being an asari.

[The Lightspeaker]

Neeh wrote...

The Lightspeaker wrote...

zingro wrote...

That is...quite some pose...

And here I was, convinced Liara didn't know the meaning of underwear...oh well.

I believe thats supposed to be some sort of bikini.

When wearing other clothes Liara might well be an "Asari Commando".

[Andronic0s]

Neeh wrote...

The Lightspeaker wrote...

zingro wrote...

That is...quite some pose...

And here I was, convinced Liara didn't know the meaning of underwear...oh well.

It's not underwear it is a swimsuit , they are probably at the beach Garrus mentioned, while garrus himself is around there somewhere, being used by Tali for his body most likely 

Modifié par Andronic0s, 25 mars 2012 - 11:27 .

[Sunnie]

zingro wrote...

Sunnie22 wrote...
Just a quick note, page counting can get a thread locked, and has happened on numerous occasions...

snip

No offence, but Im sure the mods have worse threads to lock than Liara lovers dropping the next few hundred numbers page to reach. All Love threads are guilty of page counts.

Now back to more serious blue issues.. Liara pic bomb incoming

pic snips

This is exactly the kind of attitude that results in needing to start a new thread. Showing a disrespect for site rules and staff is a one way ticket to a new thread.

[zennyrpg]

Just finished me1 with femshep romancing Liara. (My canon shep hooked up with Garrus).

I was inspired to do a run with Liara after playing LotSB. I found the shift in her character very interesting and she is, quite frankly, adorable. At first (in me1) I wasn't really digging on the relationship/ her personality... but once you actually get into the relationship it is very good. I'm looking forward to doing the LotSB stuff in part two.

For some reason I cannot play renegade. So the different relationships give me the most new content in playthroughs. From all the chatter on here, I think I'm going to like the Liara content in part 3.

[TMA LIVE]

Sunnie22 wrote...

zingro wrote...

Sunnie22 wrote...
Just a quick note, page counting can get a thread locked, and has happened on numerous occasions...

snip

No offence, but Im sure the mods have worse threads to lock than Liara lovers dropping the next few hundred numbers page to reach. All Love threads are guilty of page counts.

Now back to more serious blue issues.. Liara pic bomb incoming

pic snips

This is exactly the kind of attitude that results in needing to start a new thread. Showing a disrespect for site rules and staff is a one way ticket to a new thread.

I have to agree with this. You keep pushing the rules, and then the next thing you know, you get what happened to the Tali thread, where it was locked for a month, and same for any Tali Support Thread that someone tried to start.

And that one got locked, because not only did they picture spam, they spent too many pages going off topic.

[TMA LIVE]

zennyrpg wrote...

Just finished me1 with femshep romancing Liara. (My canon shep hooked up with Garrus).

I was inspired to do a run with Liara after playing LotSB. I found the shift in her character very interesting and she is, quite frankly, adorable. At first (in me1) I wasn't really digging on the relationship/ her personality... but once you actually get into the relationship it is very good. I'm looking forward to doing the LotSB stuff in part two.

For some reason I cannot play renegade. So the different relationships give me the most new content in playthroughs. From all the chatter on here, I think I'm going to like the Liara content in part 3.

I use Femshep and Maleshep in order to get different versions of her romance. Ones where Shep is more nice, or ones where Shepard is more mean. Or both based off the character. The both have their own dramas. That way, I get to see many sides of the relationship.

[zingro]

hollow22_ wrote...

zingro, better not tempt mods to close this one all your pics are wonderfull, but please no offence too while I'm telling you this, since this is no personal attack: bombing pics just for the fun of posting them is against rule 6 of BSN tiped here:

"No posting single images or animated images. Posting single images or animated .gifs/images instead of engaging in discussion is not allowed. These are discussion forums and that means engaging in dialog, not picture spam. Using images to support your discussion is fine as long as the images used conform to the standard forum rules (no adult content, no slander, no racism, etc). Posting single images instead of discussion will be considered spam and will not be tolerated. Images will be deleted without warning. Posters may be banned for repeated offenses."

I repeat, I know you didn't want to spam them, and I loved all the pics, but better being carefull since we all (including you) don't want liara's thread locked, and also this time you as poster will riks of being banned

sigh.. this thread is full of liara pic spam, it has been since day one, as all LI fan threads are full of pic spam. If you seriously want to be the hall monitor on BSN for pic spam start with everyone in this thread thats bombed liara pics and then go take on every other LI fan thread in the romance section.

Have fun with that.

[moreeman06]

hollow22_ wrote...

haha thanks Kilshrek, I have more pics you can consider interesting
guys, does anyone know when the import patch will be released?

Sorry no idea on that Hollow but i hope it comes out soon i had some problems with Tiberius's time code and i couldn't get his hair exactly right although everything else is pretty spot on.

Yuqi wrote...

moreeman06 wrote...

 *snip*

Zomg  he has such a rugged and sexy look! it. 

Cohina's,VareenSoldier's,Moremans, and Trekkers  MSheps are now my FAVORITE  ones, on the Citadel! (Has shamelessly saved them to desktop [smilie]http://social.bioware.com/images/forum/emoticons/angel.png[/smilie])

*snip*

 

@Yuqi Glad you like all of our MSheps, I'll have some more as i go through my NG+, and you can use Tiberius for fanart if you want just keep him with Liara or Tali:D

zingro wrote...

Page 1000 not far now ...[smilie]http://social.bioware.com/images/forum/emoticons/whistling.png[/smilie]

I know Shep is the worse dancer in the galaxy, but Liara sure can move that body on the dance floor. I was really hoping to take her dancing in me3.



Any excuse to watch that sexy blue bod move [smilie]http://social.bioware.com/images/forum/emoticons/grin.png[/smilie] Im for it.

 

and the return of the Shepard striptease video (link for all of you that haven't seen American Pie it is the same dance link, www.youtube.com/watch)  just think of how much laughter would escape Liara after that

Tyranniac wrote...

So, yeah, I finished the first part of the Shepard's Log thing I was talking about. I know it is only partially Liara-related but I was hoping I could get some feedback and everyone here is so friendly! Also, I realize it probably makes for an annoying wall of text. I'll learn how to use links if I ever post more of this, I promise!

So tell me, is it decent at least? [smilie]http://social.bioware.com/images/forum/emoticons/pinched.png[/smilie]


*snip*

Edit: Text looked messed up. Think I fixed it. Also, I know this first part is quite heavy on dull info and light on actual thoughts and such, but it was hard to avoid in the first entry.

Edit again: Managed to find a few errors.

 
Tyrannic good first attempt i agree with The Lightspeaker that it seems a bit clinical at some points but the it seems for the most part almost conversational or train of thought but it could be even better with a few more long pauses or more spacing like this paragraph
 

"Never seen so many aliens before in my life. Barely know anything about half the races
there. Suppose that’s what comes from being a colony kid. Academy is about the
only education I have after all. After a lot of work we managed to convince the
Council to strip Saren of his Spectre status. Took them long enough to realise
he was a traitor… suppose I can’t blame them though. Can’t believe we have to
hunt him alone though."
  I think it would read better like this if you want to go for a conversational tone
 

Never seen so many aliens before in my life... Barely know anything about half the races
there. *you here the long exhale of a breath almost a hesitation*  Suppose that’s what comes from being a colony kid. Academy was about the only education I have after all.

After a lot of work we managed to convince the
Council to strip Saren of his Spectre status. Took them long enough to realise
he was a traitor… suppose I can’t blame them though. Can’t believe we have to
hunt him alone though. 

I marked the changes in bold, hope this helps and i look forward to reading more of them:D  Also when you first mentioned the journals the first thought that popped into my mind was "why didn't i think of that"  

[MeandrousJoker]

Howdy folks! Forgive the momentary intrusion of a longtime lurker. 
 
First time posting on this thread. I think... Heh. But erm, I just want to join in on all of the Liara goodness, if I may.
Here's a peace offering... 



That swag 

P.S. Apologies if it has been posted already. So many photos of Liara on here, I'm struggling to catch up.  Anyway, as you were.

[zennyrpg]

TMA LIVE wrote...

I use Femshep and Maleshep in order to get different versions of her romance. Ones where Shep is more nice, or ones where Shepard is more mean. Or both based off the character. The both have their own dramas. That way, I get to see many sides of the relationship.

I was really worried I paragoned out of hooking up with her when I played the convo after ilos where she says she's not sure if she is ready... I had to replay it renegade only to find out it goes in the same direction no matter what.  Then I had to replay it paragon because I preferred the dialog.  I tend to save before important dialogs so I can retry as much as i like.  My current shep is paragon (of course) but with a little touch of renegade.

Some things I will never do.  Like the cheating.  I'd feel like a jerk.  Beter to watch that stuff on youtube.

[TMA LIVE]

Can anyone confirm is Tela Vasir is still alive if you never did LOTSB? And if so, how much is her War Assets?

[Barquiel]

zingro wrote...

Page 1000 not far now ...

I know Shep is the worse dancer in the galaxy, but Liara sure can move that body on the dance floor. I was really hoping to take her dancing in me3.



Any excuse to watch that sexy blue bod move Im for it.

Everyone makes fun of Shepard's dancing in ME3. I hope Liara can give Shepard some dance lessons

Modifié par Barquiel, 25 mars 2012 - 11:57 .

[moreeman06]

MeandrousJoker wrote...

Howdy folks! Forgive the momentary intrusion of a longtime lurker. 
 
First time posting on this thread. I think... Heh. But erm, I just want to join in on all of the Liara goodness, if I may.
Here's a peace offering... 



That swag 

P.S. Apologies if it has been posted already. So many photos of Liara on here, I'm struggling to catch up.  Anyway, as you were.

Welcome MeandrousJoker welcome to our little club.  

Edit:  Top not sure if i've used this one yet

Modifié par moreeman06, 25 mars 2012 - 11:59 .

[hollow22_]

moreeman06 wrote...

hollow22_ wrote...

haha thanks Kilshrek, I have more pics you can consider interesting
guys, does anyone know when the import patch will be released?

Sorry no idea on that Hollow but i hope it comes out soon i had some problems with Tiberius's time code and i couldn't get his hair exactly right although everything else is pretty spot on.

yupp man, I found on spanish videogames sites and magazines that Bioware is going to release one patch to prevent and fix the import code from ME2 to 3. It seems the bug is originated in the way the code is detected from ME1 to ME2, and also in ME2 to ME3.

the only thing I can say (directly translated from spanish to english is that):

"it is being tested seriously by BW, Microsoft, EA and Sony before it is launched" and also the same Chris Priestly apparently said "we want to be sure this update fixes all things they're supposed to be fixed, and that the update don't create another ones"

thought all of this, THERE'S STILL NO OFFICIAL DATE OF RELEASING FOR THIS UPDATE