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[Aver88]

You have to remember that lately there was a lot of angry words yelled towards them, so it's easy to misinterpret something .

[istle]

Goes to show I posted in the wrong thread...

Well I am trying to think of a line to use!

Just hope I come up with something before you post it...

[Makaveli The Don]

Padt wrote...

Makaveli The Don wrote...

^lol I thought that would've been a option. I bought flowers or something... thinking I'd be able to give it to Jack when she got on the Normandy.

Flowers for Jack? Wonder how that would fly...

Thrown right back at Shepards face lol.  I can see it happening now.

[Aver88]

Makaveli The Don wrote...
Thrown right back at Shepards face lol.  I can see it happening now.

Nah, I think that it would be something funnier. First she would be confused and then she would say something funny.

[GothamLord]

I already posted my thoughts of the reaction back on the last page.

[Aver88]

GothamLord wrote...

I already posted my thoughts of the reaction back on the last page.

Yeah I think that your version is more likely. I think that there is even possibility that she would keep those flowers anyway "but I will keep it. I don't want to hurt your sensitive, romantic soul, Shepard"

Modifié par Aver88, 27 mars 2012 - 05:14 .

[Aver88]

I just posted something in DLC topic. Check this out and post your thoughts.

[GothamLord]

Posted the start of Chapter 2 for my Aftermath fanfic. If enough people like it I'm actually considering continuing the store beyond just the recovery period and into further adventures of Jack and (Stephen) Shepard. So if any fellow Jackolytes can read it over and give me some feedback I'd appreciate it.

[istle]

That was a pretty fun read. I found one or two words misspelt but there are always going to be some words that are spelt wrong in the first couple of drafts. I liked that you went with the IT, made the fanfic more believable to me at least. Though I don't necessarily think you should explain the IT in so many details, but that's just me.

I would love to read more of course

edit - I see now that I read chapter 1. I'm off to chapter 2 then!

Modifié par istle, 27 mars 2012 - 06:33 .

[Ms_Alison_Gunn]

Hey guys I saw this picture randomly yesterday and I have been trying to find out who did it or where I can find a bigger version of it. Have you guys seen it?



Also, have you seen the trailer for the Lockout movie? I couldn't help but think of Jack's recruitment mission from ME2. lol

[Udalango]

Nought? Am I missing something.

[Premier Bromanov]

That's from Isisrightwleft, on DA. It looks like the source is on that image, but it was blurred out, dunno why.

[Udalango]

Ms_Alison_Gunn wrote...

Hey guys I saw this picture randomly yesterday and I have been trying to find out who did it or where I can find a bigger version of it. Have you guys seen it?



Also, have you seen the trailer for the Lockout movie? I couldn't help but think of Jack's recruitment mission from ME2. lol

This is all kinds of awesome.  Like wow.

[Ms_Alison_Gunn]

Premier Bromanov wrote...

That's from Isisrightwleft, on DA. It looks like the source is on that image, but it was blurred out, dunno why.

Thanks so much! I really loved that picture!

[Premier Bromanov]

Udalango wrote...

Nought? Am I missing something.

It's Jack's nom de plume.  She uses it when she needs to enter a name for her entry in a poetry contest.

Jacqueline = Jack
Nought = Zero ("Subject Zero")

[GothamLord]

istle wrote...

That was a pretty fun read. I found one or two words misspelt but there are always going to be some words that are spelt wrong in the first couple of drafts. I liked that you went with the IT, made the fanfic more believable to me at least. Though I don't necessarily think you should explain the IT in so many details, but that's just me.

I would love to read more of course

edit - I see now that I read chapter 1. I'm off to chapter 2 then!

Yeah still a work in progress.  I'm trying to convey a lot of information without it feeling like just a giant weight just being dropped in someones lap.  The joys of everyone's Shepards being different and still trying to make a non-sensical ending part of the story.       I'll double check on spelling as I thought I caught all of them in the Word program before I uploaded it. 


**There is also a edit to Chapter 2 that for some reason doesnt seem to want to update.  Not sure what the refresh rate is with the site. I've noticed its not instant but I know I added a line or two I forgot before over an hour ago and it hasnt put it into the Chapter. 

Modifié par GothamLord, 27 mars 2012 - 06:52 .

[Firmijn]

How about this quote from Jack to BW: "Do you know how it is to feel alone, and find out you're not?
It was something along those lines anyway...
And end with: "maybe we'll talk later... maybe not. "

[Udalango]

Premier Bromanov wrote...

Udalango wrote...

Nought? Am I missing something.

It's Jack's nom de plume.  She uses it when she needs to enter a name for her entry in a poetry contest.

Jacqueline = Jack
Nought = Zero ("Subject Zero")

Thats pretty awesome.  Do they ever explain where she got the name Jack?
You guys make me feel like I dont know ish

[istle]

GothamLord wrote...

istle wrote...

That was a pretty fun read. I found one or two words misspelt but there are always going to be some words that are spelt wrong in the first couple of drafts. I liked that you went with the IT, made the fanfic more believable to me at least. Though I don't necessarily think you should explain the IT in so many details, but that's just me.

I would love to read more of course

edit - I see now that I read chapter 1. I'm off to chapter 2 then!

Yeah still a work in progress.  I'm trying to convey a lot of information without it feeling like just a giant weight just being dropped in someones lap.  The joys of everyone's Shepards being different and still trying to make a non-sensical ending part of the story.       I'll double check on spelling as I thought I caught all of them in the Word program before I uploaded it. 


**There is also a edit to Chapter 2 that for some reason doesnt seem to want to update.  Not sure what the refresh rate is with the site. I've noticed its not instant but I know I added a line or two I forgot before over an hour ago and it hasnt put it into the Chapter. 

Jack was saying something like You aren't allow to die on me. It should be allowed.

I liked chapter 2. Found nothing wrong with it. I'm not used to giving constructive feedback btw. But I like what I've read so far

[Premier Bromanov]

Udalango wrote...

Premier Bromanov wrote...

Udalango wrote...

Nought? Am I missing something.

It's Jack's nom de plume.  She uses it when she needs to enter a name for her entry in a poetry contest.

Jacqueline = Jack
Nought = Zero ("Subject Zero")

Thats pretty awesome.  Do they ever explain where she got the name Jack?
You guys make me feel like I dont know ish

Nope.  It's never explained in-game.  Some people say it's because Jack resembles the character Jack in the movie "Pitch Black".  The character is even broken out of prison by the protagonist in the sequel, "The Chronicles of Riddick".

[GothamLord]

istle wrote...

Jack was saying something like You aren't allow to die on me. It should be allowed.

I liked chapter 2. Found nothing wrong with it. I'm not used to giving constructive feedback btw. But I like what I've read so far

Ah... Tense usage error not spelling.  Word processor doesnt always catch that kinda stuff.  Fixed, well it will be whenever the site actually updates with the new save.  Thanks for the catch. 

Hey, I'm not going to knock away praise either. :innocent:  The plan is if enough people like the story and my writing that I'll continue Shepard runnning around the Universe finishing off a few remaining Reapers and other Spectre related stuff with Jack and a few other select crew members. 

[istle]

GothamLord wrote...

istle wrote...

Jack was saying something like You aren't allow to die on me. It should be allowed.

I liked chapter 2. Found nothing wrong with it. I'm not used to giving constructive feedback btw. But I like what I've read so far

Ah... Tense usage error not spelling.  Word processor doesnt always catch that kinda stuff.  Fixed, well it will be whenever the site actually updates with the new save.  Thanks for the catch. 

Hey, I'm not going to knock away praise either. :innocent:  The plan is if enough people like the story and my writing that I'll continue Shepard runnning around the Universe finishing off a few remaining Reapers and other Spectre related stuff with Jack and a few other select crew members. 

No problem

[Udalango]

@GothamLord. everything was great. But I really cant see Jack using the word Rape so casually. It might just be me though

[GothamLord]

I have spoken with victims of it before in my job. Some move on from it much easier than others. Jack strikes me as some that refuses to consider herself a victim anymore. Its a statement said more as humor than a realistic consideration that wouldn't likely be spoken as casually. Of course if there is a majority of opinions that agree with the word usage being inappropriate I have no real issue changing it. I do not consider changing my work to appeal to the entertainment of others to be a question of my artistic integrity.

[Aver88]

Nightfable is gonna draw fan art that will sent in package. I hope we will find more artists that will support our cause .

Modifié par Aver88, 27 mars 2012 - 07:38 .