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[flemm]

CrutchCricket wrote...

Well as far as I can tell we have Aliqaiser as the originator, Ares and myself for writers and Rachel for art. Is there anyone else?

Well, you can count me in. Where I can help is planning and maybe writing (though without getting in the way of your vision and artistic integrity ).

Modifié par flemm, 18 avril 2012 - 03:33 .

[Ieldra]

Elyvern wrote...

http://social.biowar...ndex/11231305/1

Go watch the 3 clips of an alternate ending a fan made. You won't regret it. It's cheesy in some areas, but by god, it's actually viable. And it makes having a LI totally worth it. The reiteration of the promise between Miranda and Shepard almost made me tear.

Turned the url into a link. Also here are the three parts:

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3

*Yery* cheesy in some parts, but I like the way things go in general. 

Modifié par Ieldra2, 18 avril 2012 - 03:36 .

[CrutchCricket]

flemm wrote...
Well, you can count me in. Where I can help is planning and maybe writing (though without getting in the way of your vision and artistic integrity ).

Obviously can't have that. But maybe you can help with "clarification";)

Right now I think we're in the process of deciding what "our" Shepard will be for the stories. You can head to the wordpress to chip in.

[Ieldra]

Td1984 wrote...
Anyway, as to my favorite scene involving Miranda, it's the one on Zorya (Zaeed's LM) where she leans over the railing with the waterfall behind her. It's not even close

If I may....

[Ieldra]

CrutchCricket wrote...

flemm wrote...
Well, you can count me in. Where I can help is planning and maybe writing (though without getting in the way of your vision and artistic integrity ).

Obviously can't have that. But maybe you can help with "clarification";)

Right now I think we're in the process of deciding what "our" Shepard will be for the stories. You can head to the wordpress to chip in.

If you want to know why I have not commented on this, I fear my vision is too incompatible with most others'. But I'd like to have a look at what you're working on, and chime in with comments if I feel I have something constructive to add. Where would I go?

[Td1984]

That's the one Ieldra. I bring her on most missions (Derelict Reaper excepted) and bringing her on Zaeed's LM is a must, for that shot alone.

Modifié par Td1984, 18 avril 2012 - 03:43 .

[CrutchCricket]

Ieldra2 wrote...
If you want to know why I have not commented on this, I fear my vision is too incompatible with most others'. But I'd like to have a look at what you're working on, and chime in with comments if I feel I have something constructive to add. Where would I go?

This is the where we're planning right now. Currently it's not the most intuitve setup.

From the looks of it this is shaping up to be a collection of stories, some set between the games, some during and some after ME3. I seem to be running one on Sanctuary at the moment. This is Aliqaiser's plan.

For myself I'm focusing on brainstorming to establish general details for our continuity such as our Shepard. Hopefully more specific direction will be clarified soon.

Any comments you care to make will be appreciated:)

[hot_heart]

I can try and help with editing whatever you're writing. I find I usually have a knack for that, and people always tend to really like the dialogue in my scripts.

You can't do the 'during ME3' stuff; I'm doing that!

[Aliqaiser]

 OK Guy's, 

Time to finally get thing's cleared up, what’s
going on,

Me, crutch, flemm, ares19 and asakawa started a
new Idea of delivering BIOWARE, with something, from the fan's.
So what I had in mind, was to create a Fan Fic,
from us, The Fan's, the problem is we needed more people, for this to work out,
there are 2 sections for signing up, one is producing Art work, and the other revolves
around story creation,

I know now some of you guys might say, Sorry I’m
no good artist, or a writer with no literature knowledge, These are the people, we are looking for, we need Fan's not Pro's, we need to show Bioware that if
were not good at a thing we can still manage it together, finally the least you
could do is post Idea's, but you need to be Dedicated to this work, what we
want is daily post of Idea's, we need Day to Day, interaction's, If we are to succeed,

For this I created a Blog, to contribute and share
Idea's.

If you agree, and are ready for this, you can
continue.................

First we started with one goal, of creating a Sci
Fi comic, on Post ME3 and what happened after it, (beautiful Idea) but from
Writers stand point, some said they are good, at action oriented dialogue than
romantic one's

and form that stand point, Post ME3 won’t have
much of a action scene's

so I created 3 paths for you to choose
(paragon)(neutral)(renegade)

Now there Definitions

(Paragon)

1. The story is Post Me3, 

2. Most comments are romantic (writer)

3. Most poses are in a romance situation. (Art)

4. No action sequences. romantic yes

(renegade)

1.the story takes place during sanctuary, fight
with ki-leng is a must and conversation with her father,

2. Most comments are rage filled (writer)

3.most poses are in-action (art)

4. No romantic sequence. Action yes

(neutral)



1. The story takes place in between ME2 and ME3,
while shep is in Alliance custody. And Miri has herself an impossible task, will
mention it further.

2. All types of comments (writer)

3.all type of pose's (art)

4. all sequences, romantic and action.

OR OR OR, we all can come to a conclusion on choosing one of the following if we can get the right mind set


now if your really interested to what i have
mentioned, and you can manage day to day, Idea sharing, then come join us at 

mirandalawsonfans.wordpress.com

and now, whatever you choose, paragon, neutral or
renegade

on the Blog you will see the (sections) mentioned on a bar, with home,
and what you felt, most appropriate, you go there and choose, art or writer and
mention your name, create an account.

Now ill mention it again you do not need to be a
pro, so don’t hesitate.

Submission is till same time tomorrow, you have
24-hours

and if by tomorrow a section has more writers’
comparing artists never mind, you can create a short novel, instead of a comic.

Now, what I alone was doing all along, for Neutral section

The comic box-art





and here's the first page I worked on, so as you
can see, I’m taking care for the ART, department but for other section, you are
more needed there (if your an artist)

so here's the first page, and you can get the Idea of the story aswell

and here is the deviant art link-
http://aliqaiser.dev...Trust-297080767

Good luck 
 and the art work with the dialouge, is prototype;)

Modifié par Aliqaiser, 18 avril 2012 - 06:06 .

[MisterJB]

No offense, aliqaiser, but you could use a beta-reader. Little mistakes here and there and some sentences just don't read right.

[Aliqaiser]

MisterJB wrote...

No offense, aliqaiser, but you could use a beta-reader. Little mistakes here and there and some sentences just don't read right.

My point exactly, Im no writer, just a guy good with his pen, so we need people who are interested, and ambitious
this was just a prototype to give you the picture, of what we can achive 

Modifié par Aliqaiser, 18 avril 2012 - 05:28 .

[MisterJB]

Just to give a small example:

"Faust, I hope you have it with you. Did you bring it?"

Basically, those two sentences mean the same thing thus, it is pointless to have them both. Just pick one and go with it.
And then, you have some mistakes here and there.

"you are the only person shepard, I ever loved, I'm Missing you so Much, and some where I know your missing me Too"

Should read:

"You are the only person I ever loved, Shepard. I miss you so much and, somewhere, I know you miss me too."

BTW, based on Miranda's doubts expressed in the first talk on the Citadel and her own lack of self-appreciation, I think it would be more faithful to the character and poignant if she wondered if Shepard missed her just as she misses him.

Modifié par MisterJB, 18 avril 2012 - 05:40 .

[CrutchCricket]

Oh... wow. I'm in this on like three separate fronts lol. But I'll say a couple of things here first.
First off, credit where credit is due. Aliqaiser, that art is amazing! It totally looks like a pro comic book.
Now then, I think some of us have quite diverging ideas on where this is going. For myself I must admit I lost sight of the purpose of submitting this to Bioware. I thought we were just doing it as fans, for fans. I'm not against submitting it to Bioware but I think the spirit should still be by fans, for fans. Of course if we are handing it in, it makes ignoring the ending a bit trickier...
Another thing, I think the current division of "paths" as paragon, renegade, neutral is confusing. Each section is set in wildly different times and maybe the labeling is unclear.

So the question is: what are we doing really? And where are we discussing this? I'm personally on the wordpress, the discussion for this in the Miranda group and this thread. We need to decide a central location- the blog or a new group/ project page what have you and focus on what this thing is. Is it one story? A collection? Is it merely an epilogue to the game, or do we want to explore the world after ME3 and get a whole new story in? What would people be interested in?

Modifié par CrutchCricket, 18 avril 2012 - 05:45 .

[yesikareyes]

Okay, I followed this little posse on wordpress. Now, to digest Aliqaiser's long post lol

[yesikareyes]

CrutchCricket wrote...

Oh... wow. I'm in this on like three separate fronts lol. But I'll say a couple of things here first.
First off, credit where credit is due. Aliqaiser, that art is amazing! It totally looks like a pro comic book.
Now then, I think some of us have quite diverging ideas on where this is going. For myself I must admit I lost sight of the purpose of submitting this to Bioware. I thought we were just doing it as fans, for fans. I'm not against submitting it to Bioware but I think the spirit should still be by fans, for fans. Of course if we are handing it in, it makes ignoring the ending a bit trickier...
Another thing, I think the current division of "paths" as paragon, renegade, neutral is confusing. Each section is set in wildly different times and maybe the labeling is unclear.

So the question is: what are we doing really? And where are we discussing this? I'm personally on the wordpress, the discussion for this in the Miranda group and this thread. We need to decide a central location- the blog or a new group/ project page what have you and focus on what this thing is. Is it one story? A collection? Is it merely an epilogue to the game, or do we want to explore the world after ME3 and get a whole new story in? What would people be interested in?

Good questions, was wondering the same thing!

Also, I hope someone would correctly format the thing on top. It's a bit hard to read 

[CrutchCricket]

Alright, if I may, I will attempt to summarize what I've seen people want out of this thing. Hopefully I get it right and it will be clearer. So, here's your free DLC...

The Aliqaiser Trilogy- the original idea is now a three part comic. Three short stories set before ME3, during and after.

-The first is right before ME3; Shepard has already turned himself in. Miranda has a new mission. This is the story of that mission. Aliqaiser has started this already.

-The second occurs during ME3, specifically Sanctuary. It tells the story of Miranda's infiltration of Sanctuary right up to Shepard's arrival and the battle with Kai Leng. It is also to include another (hopefully more satisfying) confrontation with her father. I am to lead this it seems.

-The third is an reunion epilogue post ME3 (destroy ending). It has a focus on the romance. flemm? is leading this.

A new idea has also arisen, driven by Ares and myself (with Rachel chipping in:)), where we reject the ending and actually begin a new story post ME3. We are currently deciding on the character of our Shepard. This Shepard can be the Shepard of the entire project.

I believe that is the meat of it. Now we will no longer be discussing further details:P

[Aliqaiser]

yesikareyes wrote...

CrutchCricket wrote...

Oh... wow. I'm in this on like three separate fronts lol. But I'll say a couple of things here first.
First off, credit where credit is due. Aliqaiser, that art is amazing! It totally looks like a pro comic book.
Now then, I think some of us have quite diverging ideas on where this is going. For myself I must admit I lost sight of the purpose of submitting this to Bioware. I thought we were just doing it as fans, for fans. I'm not against submitting it to Bioware but I think the spirit should still be by fans, for fans. Of course if we are handing it in, it makes ignoring the ending a bit trickier...
Another thing, I think the current division of "paths" as paragon, renegade, neutral is confusing. Each section is set in wildly different times and maybe the labeling is unclear.

So the question is: what are we doing really? And where are we discussing this? I'm personally on the wordpress, the discussion for this in the Miranda group and this thread. We need to decide a central location- the blog or a new group/ project page what have you and focus on what this thing is. Is it one story? A collection? Is it merely an epilogue to the game, or do we want to explore the world after ME3 and get a whole new story in? What would people be interested in?

Good questions, was wondering the same thing!

Also, I hope someone would correctly format the thing on top. It's a bit hard to read 

Final things up at the Blog wordpress.com
and I have a new post up, so the one with most votes is selected as Final, so we can finally star the program, (which is still at the Start) 

[Aliqaiser]

CrutchCricket wrote...

Alright, if I may, I will attempt to summarize what I've seen people want out of this thing. Hopefully I get it right and it will be clearer. So, here's your free DLC...

The Aliqaiser Trilogy- the original idea is now a three part comic. Three short stories set before ME3, during and after.

-The first is right before ME3; Shepard has already turned himself in. Miranda has a new mission. This is the story of that mission. Aliqaiser has started this already.

-The second occurs during ME3, specifically Sanctuary. It tells the story of Miranda's infiltration of Sanctuary right up to Shepard's arrival and the battle with Kai Leng. It is also to include another (hopefully more satisfying) confrontation with her father. I am to lead this it seems.

-The third is an reunion epilogue post ME3 (destroy ending). It has a focus on the romance. flemm? is leading this.

A new idea has also arisen, driven by Ares and myself (with Rachel chipping in:)), where we reject the ending and actually begin a new story post ME3. We are currently deciding on the character of our Shepard. This Shepard can be the Shepard of the entire project.

I believe that is the meat of it. Now we will no longer be discussing further details:P

Crutch, you made my day :Plol
so I also liked the Idea you guys were coming up with, the time is to select one from it, Finally<_<

[CrutchCricket]

Aliqaiser wrote...
Crutch, you made my day :Plol
so I also liked the Idea you guys were coming up with, the time is to select one from it, Finally<_<

Or all of it?

I thought we were going to do all of it. Who's in?

[Asakawa]

CrutchCricket wrote...

Aliqaiser wrote...
Crutch, you made my day :Plol
so I also liked the Idea you guys were coming up with, the time is to select one from it, Finally<_<

Or all of it?

I thought we were going to do all of it. Who's in?

Each story could follow a different format! I dunno, one's a comic, the other a graphic novel with more complex illustrations, and so on! What do you say?

[Td1984]

I'd help, but my writing ability is a bit iffy. Especially with dialogue.

[CrutchCricket]

Asakawa wrote...
Each story could follow a different format! I dunno, one's a comic, the other a graphic novel with more complex illustrations, and so on! What do you say?

Yes! I think a graphics difference between the trilogy and the... (I don't have a convenient label for the other one yet)
postME3 story would be especially fitting.

So what can I put you down for?

[Asakawa]

CrutchCricket wrote...

Asakawa wrote...
Each story could follow a different format! I dunno, one's a comic, the other a graphic novel with more complex illustrations, and so on! What do you say?

Yes! I think a graphics difference between the trilogy and the... (I don't have a convenient label for the other one yet)
postME3 story would be especially fitting.

So what can I put you down for?

Well, AliQaiser already proved that he has much better skills than i do for comic stuff   I guess I'd do okay for a graphic novel?

[CrutchCricket]

Asakawa wrote...
Well, AliQaiser already proved that he has much better skills than i do for comic stuff   I guess I'd do okay for a graphic novel?

I sense my artistically-challenged knowledge may lead to misinterpretation. What do you consider the difference between comic book and graphic novel is?

[Aliqaiser]

Asakawa wrote...

CrutchCricket wrote...

Asakawa wrote...
Each story could follow a different format! I dunno, one's a comic, the other a graphic novel with more complex illustrations, and so on! What do you say?

Yes! I think a graphics difference between the trilogy and the... (I don't have a convenient label for the other one yet)
postME3 story would be especially fitting.

So what can I put you down for?

Well, AliQaiser already proved that he has much better skills than i do for comic stuff   I guess I'd do okay for a graphic novel?

yea different approach to different stories is a good Catch......................