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[Asakawa]

MASSEFFECTfanforlife101 wrote...

Here's my old work in progress again:



I think I'm going to make to Versions. One where she has her White Outfit (ME3 Version), and one where she has THIS Made-Up Outfit.

Or I'll just do the White Outfit Version. The outfit above is no longer Valid.

I might be talking too much but I swear I'm trying to help, ok?

The body height proportion looks good with 7 and 1/2 heads height, but check the torso size. Usually torso is two heads height and the line goes exactly at the belly button. 

I suggest you working on the silhouette before adding clothing details, that will help for the legs. Also check the knee junctions!

The face is good, keep it up!

[Ares91]

dtrain24 wrote...

@Ares
When you say the last of his strength, you're still implying Shepard does live, right? It'd be heartbreaking if Shepard died right then and there, lol.

Yes sorry. last of stength before losing consciousness, them Miranda finds him.
@Asakawa  I like that idea. I think I'll twist that into my story. With your permsion of course.



@Crutch OK then well I keep working on part 2 of the story. I dont know about you but i would like a bit more oversight form Ali Qaiser. Im worried about how each part will flow if hes just gonna slap em together once were all finnished. *Yes Ive said as much to him.* But hes in charge.  As for your character design I can give input if you want I havent yet cus Im not using Faust.
Any yeah I think its best to put our project on the back burner for now. However real quick. That previous post I made about how Mirand finds Shep I wanted to do somthing like that for our project.

@hot_heart  OK  thats awesome.  Im pretty sure Id be falling head over heels if I saw a woman wearing that

Modifié par Ares91, 25 avril 2012 - 08:50 .

[dtrain24]

Asakawa wrote...

dtrain24 wrote...

@Ares
When you say the last of his strength, you're still implying Shepard does live, right? It'd be heartbreaking if Shepard died right then and there, lol.

I picture Miranda getting readings about shepard's stats on her onmitool like "<insert many tech components here> failure" over and over again. As if she had a tracer about shepard's health statuses, to me it sounds quite logic after the lazarus project and stuff. Then she decides that she's the one to make the move and find him before he dies for real.

Personally, my head-canon is that Miranda finds Shepard the way I mentioned above. Her calling his name and her Mona Lisa smile being the first thing Shepard sees are perfect. Hopefully BW sees this.

[MisterJB]

Wish someone would be awesome enough to draw our brunnete Miranda in this.

[MASSEFFECTfanforlife101]

^ I can try, but later on. I have other things to draw. And I don't need to be caught in a Race either.

[dtrain24]

@JB I totally would if my drawing skills weren't garbage.
Nice find though! Hopefully someone carries this out.

[dtrain24]

You know which line we don't give any credit to? I personally love Miranda's "I wish I was there...with you" line. Maybe since the "Finish this and find me" line overshadowed it.

[Asakawa]

Ares91 wrote...
@Asakawa  I like that idea. I think I'll twist that into my story. With your permsion of course.

Only if you let me do the pencils for that one, deal? 

That scene always gets in my head when listening to Sing, by My Chemical Romance. Heh, i hated that band till Gran Turismo 5 was out =p I even have the scene of the crew taking shepard to the nearest med center, and Miranda rushing to the emergency room to try to fix his tech parts.

[Aliqaiser]

Sorry if I'm Late, well its 2 am at my place

Here is the cover of the book, as I promised, I'm sorry If it didn't surpassed your expectation's,
out of the three sketches I made, I choose This as I felt, it's Unique and Appropriate from every aspect.

And Flemm and do let me know, whether you accept it or not as a cover,



Thx alot, for giving me the opportunity. cheers
and Good Night,

[hot_heart]

That's a really neat pic, Aliqaiser. Nice mix of colours and lighting too.

[Ares91]

Asakawa wrote...

Ares91 wrote...
@Asakawa  I like that idea. I think I'll twist that into my story. With your permsion of course.

Only if you let me do the pencils for that one, deal? 

That scene always gets in my head when listening to Sing, by My Chemical Romance. Heh, i hated that band till Gran Turismo 5 was out =p I even have the scene of the crew taking shepard to the nearest med center, and Miranda rushing to the emergency room to try to fix his tech parts.

@Asakawa Are you kidding who else would I have draw it lol
And waaaaaaait one second there. THATS My Chem???!!  Really?? No way, I mean I stop listienign to them after The Black parade. Bu wow. Thats a major change.

@Aliqaiser
Hmm well it works for me nicely done. I like the blue energy
stuff around her arms and that you didnt emphasize her Assets. 

Modifié par Ares91, 25 avril 2012 - 09:16 .

[MisterJB]

dtrain24 wrote...

@JB I totally would if my drawing skills weren't garbage.
Nice find though! Hopefully someone carries this out.

It's one of the old Miranda concepts included on the artbook. When she looked like an Arian SuperHuman. Now, she's just a SuperHuman.
That outfit is, by far, the best. Honestly, looking at some of the old ideas, we really dodged a bullet. The catsuit is not so bad afterall.

[dtrain24]

MisterJB wrote...

dtrain24 wrote...

@JB I totally would if my drawing skills weren't garbage.
Nice find though! Hopefully someone carries this out.

It's one of the old Miranda concepts included on the artbook. When she looked like an Arian SuperHuman. Now, she's just a SuperHuman.
That outfit is, by far, the best. Honestly, looking at some of the old ideas, we really dodged a bullet. The catsuit is not so bad afterall.

For all the flack it gets from Tali/Liara/Ashley romancers, I really like the catsuit. It gives Miranda her own identidy design-wise. It's basically HER trademark. Meanwhile, Ashley, Kaiden, and Garrus all wear blue armor, right?

[hot_heart]

Figured I'd post a preview of chapter six. Seeing if it's in tone with the character.

"Lie to me again and I'll make you very sorry."
      My left hand held the salarian's neck firmly enough against the container wall while the Carnifex in my right hand kept the other Eclipse gang members at bay. I'd picked this particular individual because he was the most obvious weak point as well as the best bet for the information I wanted. On top of the fact that I have no sympathy for a salarian who would waste his relatively short years and natural talent on a band of mercenaries.
      "Please," he pleaded as he put his hands up over his head rather than try to force my grip from his throat, "I'm telling the truth. She's in custody."
      Just brilliant! Another person with whom I wanted to speak was locked up. I guess I can see the funny side; seeing Shepard must have lifted my spirits a little.
      "If Sederis is 'unavailable', who is in charge?" I tilt back my head and ask my question loudly enough to be heard by all those present in the cargo bay.
      The salarian's unusually low but meek voice pipes up, "Th-That would be me."
      "Oh," I release him and switch the gun to my left hand before offering my right to him. "Pleased to make your acquaintance. I have something to discuss with you..."
      "Sayn." He shakes my hand as he eyes me nervously, unsure if this was all a joke. Good, I want to keep him on the back foot.
      "I should've known," I lie. "You seem like the smartest one here."
     "I'm not sure if I feel inclined to assist you," he says, trying to sound brave, possibly even trying to call my bluff. My Carnifex finds its barrel facing the gap between his eyes. "Of course, I'd be happy to hear you out."
      The salarian's audacity causes a smile to creep onto one side of my mouth.

Modifié par hot_heart, 25 avril 2012 - 09:31 .

[flemm]

Aliqaiser wrote...

And Flemm and do let me know, whether you accept it or not as a cover,

Well, it's not really like that... I mean, some of us have to spearhead the project or it won't happen. And I'm happy to do a lot of the practical work of putting the book together.

Anyway, I think that would make a beautiful cover

dtrain24 wrote...
For all the flack it gets from Tali/Liara/Ashley romancers, I really like the catsuit. It gives Miranda her own identidy design-wise. It's basically HER trademark. Meanwhile, Ashley, Kaiden, and Garrus all wear blue armor, right?

I've always liked it. The fact that people argue about it is one of the things I like about it

Modifié par flemm, 25 avril 2012 - 09:38 .

[dtrain24]

@Hot_Heart
I missed when you posted Chapter 5,so I just want to comment on that. I love it, nice job! You really knew how to get inside Miranda, and her thought process during the dialogue. Bravo. Keep up the great work!

[hot_heart]

dtrain24 wrote...

@Hot_Heart
I missed when you posted Chapter 5,so I just want to comment on that. I love it, nice job! You really knew how to get inside Miranda, and her thought process during the dialogue. Bravo. Keep up the great work!

Teehee. I think we can all see a part of ourselves in Miranda. :innocent:

Seriously, though, thank you! I found that bit particularly tricky because of how disjointed the conversation is and choosing which bits to prioritise.

Modifié par hot_heart, 25 avril 2012 - 09:53 .

[dtrain24]

hot_heart wrote...

dtrain24 wrote...

@Hot_Heart
I missed when you posted Chapter 5,so I just want to comment on that. I love it, nice job! You really knew how to get inside Miranda, and her thought process during the dialogue. Bravo. Keep up the great work!

Teehee. I think we can all see a part of ourselves in Miranda. :innocent:

Seriously, though, thank you! I found that bit particularly tricky because of how disjointed the conversation is and choosing which bits to prioritise.

Well, as Miranda once said "I You do damn good work."

[Dr. Doctor]

With Destroy, Jessica Merizan has confirmed that Shepard's still on the Citadel. Or what's left of it.

What's really interesting is that if you chose Synthesis, Gibbed's Save Editor shows that the "lived to fight another day" flag from Destroy is still generated.

[hot_heart]

Interesting. Is that regardless of EMS, do we know?

[Td1984]

If that was regardless of the EMS score, I don't know if there'd be the required tech for Miranda to be able to do a second Lazarus though.

[Ares91]

I agree about her suit I like it alot. Its a trademark, its controversial in ME and out of it.
@hot_heart I haven't looked at your teaser but I wait with great anticipation for the final project.

When did Jessica say that??
So I guess I was right for choosing synthesis and destroy

[yesikareyes]

Dr. Doctor wrote...

With Destroy, Jessica Merizan has confirmed that Shepard's still on the Citadel. Or what's left of it.

What's really interesting is that if you chose Synthesis, Gibbed's Save Editor shows that the "lived to fight another day" flag from Destroy is still generated.

This game always makes me hope so much.

Funny thing was, when the ending leaks came out and I heard about the squad being stuck in Gilligan's planet... I laughed at how absurd it was. I thought to myself that it was too ridiculous to happen and that Bioware wouldn't do such a thing. Guess who's laughing now huh.... not me. 

[hot_heart]

yesikareyes wrote...
Guess who's laughing now huh.

No one.

Modifié par hot_heart, 25 avril 2012 - 11:00 .

[Td1984]

One could laugh at how depressing the ending is.