"I'll always want you in my life." Miranda Lawson in Mass Effect 3
#49576
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 04:49
Did you guys see who joined our #FindMiranda group????
#49577
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 04:59
Be careful with what you say, i'm the true god of war
#49578
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 05:36
#49579
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 05:40
#49580
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 05:49
Oh i red it allright. It was really good, nothing much to critisize. Cannot wait to read the resthot_heart wrote...
Apologies if this sounds needy, but has anyone read the chapter I finished the other day? Was hoping for some feedback on this one, regarding direction and such. Link is in my sig.
#49581
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 05:58
hot_heart wrote...
Apologies if this sounds needy, but has anyone read the chapter I finished the other day? Was hoping for some feedback on this one, regarding direction and such. Link is in my sig.
Got me reading till the end, can't wait for more! Just minor grammatical errors but that's it.
#49582
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 05:58
Well yes, new letters would have to be written. But I don't see the other sections requiring much change. As for the art, assuming you don't mean 34, what's an example of one you think she'd find questionable?Mr Massakka wrote...
That will have to be heavy modifications, though. Every letter is more or less completely dedicated to BioWare. I can't imagine what Yvonne could do with those... and some of the fan-art could come off creepy for someone who is not a fan.
Modifié par CrutchCricket, 07 mai 2012 - 05:59 .
#49583
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 06:02
Good, good! I think I picked up a few of those during a 'clean' today. So, hopefully fixed now.yesikareyes wrote...
Got me reading till the end, can't wait for more! Just minor grammatical errors but that's it.
Might have to wait a while though. Had a great idea for something but trying to fit it all in with what's in the game is proving tricky.kratos0294 wrote...
Oh i red it allright. It was really good, nothing much to critisize. Cannot wait to read the rest
#49584
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 06:07
I like the direction your going now showing Miranda's personality and attitude when not in a gunfight or thinking directly about Shepard/Oriana. I think bringing in this new woman is a good move. The fact that they know each other, have worked together, and dont seem to like one another very much just makes it so much better.
@CrutchCricket & Mr Massakka I see what you mean with the letters not being directed at her but at bioware. But I dont think we would have to change the format of the book, some people will have to write whole new letters others may be able to convert theirs into something for Yvonne. I personally could, but I prefer to write a new letter for Yvonne.
But I don't think we really need to have this discussion. People know what they wrote. If they think it can work for both Bioware and Yvonne they can leave it as is, if they think they only need to revise the letter they will do that. If they want/need to write a whole new letter to Yvonne then thats what thye will do.
In the end it comes down to how the person that wrote the letter feels about their work.
[quote]kratos0294 wrote...
Be careful with what you say, i'm the true god of war [smilie]http://social.bioware.com/images/forum/emoticons/grin.png[/smilie][/quote]
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Bring It
Modifié par Ares91, 07 mai 2012 - 06:10 .
#49585
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 06:13
#49586
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 06:18
kratos0294 wrote...
Damn, somehow i can't join the group. I click to accept the invitation however nothing happens
What do you mean?
#49587
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 06:20
#49588
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 06:34
Haha! I told you there could only be ONE God of War here!kratos0294 wrote...
Damn, somehow i can't join the group. I click to accept the invitation however nothing happens
OK all joing aside I really dont know whats going on here, you say you cant join, it doesnt have you listed as a member yet, and I cant invite you. hmm:mellow:
#49589
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 06:42
Hahahaha will shall see:devil:Ares91 wrote...
Haha! I told you there could only be ONE God of War here!kratos0294 wrote...
Damn, somehow i can't join the group. I click to accept the invitation however nothing happens
OK all joing aside I really dont know whats going on here, you say you cant join, it doesnt have you listed as a member yet, and I cant invite you. hmm:mellow:
But yea on the main page of the group, on the top right side, it's written accepte/reject the invitation but when i click on it well nothing happens.....strange, very strange
#49590
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 06:48
#49591
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 06:58
Modifié par kratos0294, 07 mai 2012 - 06:58 .
#49592
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 06:59
#49593
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 07:04
Well actually i'm swissAres91 wrote...
Wait your French?
#49594
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 07:08
Ares91 wrote...
Wait your French?
I thought so, he responded to me in French
#49595
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 07:08

O.O...-.-<3<3<3<3
Modifié par MASSEFFECTfanforlife101, 07 mai 2012 - 07:08 .
#49596
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 07:10
J'aime beaucoupMASSEFFECTfanforlife101 wrote...
O.O...-.-<3<3<3<3
#49597
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 07:18
Modifié par MASSEFFECTfanforlife101, 07 mai 2012 - 07:19 .
#49598
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 07:25
#49599
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 07:40
Oh OK that's cool then. Cuz I was gonna say theres no way a Frenchie could be the god of War lolkratos0294 wrote...
Well actually i'm swissAres91 wrote...
Wait your French?
#49600
Posté 07 mai 2012 - 07:42
hot_heart wrote...
Good, good! I think I picked up a few of those during a 'clean' today. So, hopefully fixed now.yesikareyes wrote...
Got me reading till the end, can't wait for more! Just minor grammatical errors but that's it.Might have to wait a while though. Had a great idea for something but trying to fit it all in with what's in the game is proving tricky.kratos0294 wrote...
Oh i red it allright. It was really good, nothing much to critisize. Cannot wait to read the rest
I'm enjoying your story a lot. Can't wait to see what you do with it. Keep up the writing!





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