LuxDragon wrote...
Ieldra2 wrote...
LuxDragon wrote...
http://www.fanfictio...t/s/5750868/54/
Oh, oh....things are heating up.
You asked if you laid it on too thick. Not exactly, but it would have been better had this happened earlier. I find it hard to imagine how that can be patched up in the time remaining. If Miranda changes her mind too fast, that will be very unconvincing. Also, Shepard comes across as self-righteous here - I think he should concede some of her points and they should meet somewhere in the middle in the end. Otherwise Miranda would be diminished and relegated to the role of a follower. You know what I think about that.
Arguements aren't really rational. Shepard came off as self-righteous to defend his opinion, but Miranda has already dimishished herself as the role of a follower (Cerberus) to defend hers. See what I did there? It's interesting how people say she's so self-confident and independent. And she is... until a point. Can you really imagine her saying 'no' to TIM prior to ME 2 (Oriana notwithstanding)? I don't. Last I checked, that makes her a follower anyway.
You have a point. I guess the point I was trying to make is that if she changes her mind too fast for too little reason, her loyalty would become meaningless. What do you think would make her reconsider that fast? I don't see Overlord doing it. Not on its own. Perhaps add some evidence that Teltin was sanctioned by TIM. I think nothing less will suffice.
Making up is about concessions. And sometimes more physical pursuits, hopefully easing jtav's problems.(Probably not)
More physical pursuits? If you're thinking about sex, I don't think Miranda's attraction to Shepard should overshadow her value system and her thoughts about Cerberus. That's just cheesy. I ask: what would it say about Miranda if she disregarded the bigger issues (which, I mind remind you, are the Reapers and humanity's place in the galaxy) for her attraction to Shepard?
Don't forget about Overlord. People can change quickly enough if given the metaphorical slap in the face.
The problem is that it's too easy to justify Overlord (see Arijharn's post above). Likely, after meeting Legion, Miranda would agree it is no longer necessary, but I can't see her loyalty to Cerberus being seriously challenged by it.
Modifié par Ieldra2, 27 juillet 2011 - 07:56 .