Ieldra2 wrote...
fiendishchicken wrote...
Ieldra2 wrote...
It was very sad when my Shepard had to go without having fulfilled his promise, but in a good way.
You bastard. You made a promise to Miranda. Miranda is the last person you break a promise too.
As much as it pains him, Cyrus Shepard must make the decision he believes to be best for the galaxy, even if it means breaking the promise. Would he not, he would not feel himself worthy of Miranda's regard.
Well, that's a hard reason to argue against. I applaud your Shepard's altruism.
My Shepard's altruism has led to him seeing that a lot of the galaxy has proven itself not worthy of being saved. It's just a bunch distrust, racism, and BS'ing around with each other. The galaxy never needed the Reapers to wipe out all life. They were doing a very good job of it on their own. But he's proud he managed to bring everyone together to fight the Reapers, but by that point, there's only two things - two people left worth fighting for and those people are himself and Miranda. I like you're idea of him feeling unworthy of Miranda, but my fic is AU with a completely different ending based on Glowboy being an illusion created by the Reapers and the Crucible being a Reaper trap, and the revelation that the Citadel itself IS a giant Reaper, and the true avatar of Harbinger. The other Reapers are real, but Harbinger's Reaper form is actually another Reaper that he has assumed control of. Glowboy transforms into Harbinger's avatar and forces Shepard to... I still haven't thought of a good scene for this but it involves TIM coming back and sacrificing himself for something, then Shepard doing something that causes the Reapers to go haywire allowing the fleets to blow the **** out of the Crucible on the Citadel which releases a lot of energy that ****s up the citadel and gives the fleets a chance to fight back against the reapers. Shepard is thought dead until his comatose body is found in a safety room on the presidium. He is slowly rebuilt by Miranda and a team of doctors. I don't feel like explaining the other parts, but lots of happy crying takes place.
Modifié par fiendishchicken, 26 juillet 2012 - 07:43 .