Next chapter focuses some what on Mr. Lawson as I saw him before ME3 came out so... I'm adding more detail to the chapter. Originally, I think I might just take out the scene that was in chapter 19's with her father and add it to the beginning of chapter 20... I think.
Had an interesting review that got me thinking. Again, this was before we knew Miranda would kill her father without hesitation...
Not to spoil my more recent fic's chapter... on whether or not Miranda (in my story) would actually kill her father was a very interesting choice to make...
If she kept him alive... I'd have to justify why she did it. Would she be so fearful of him... even though it would end his need to capture oriana...
In my fic, I'm not certain she has come to terms with his controlling... still working on that *reasoning*... as the chapters goes on she does find a way to overcome her issues and wants to end the **** he's done to her and *others*... not sure how my fic will include ME3 in the story yet... with Sanctuary and all..
Modifié par enayasoul, 10 août 2012 - 03:38 .