Taboo-XX wrote...
Okay...if you really want my opinion I'd be happy to share it with you.
Would you like it here or in a PM? I tend to get wordy about these types of things.
And yes, I'll be straight up with you. In a good way. With answers.
That would be great. Any feedback's useful. Not sure how wordy you can get about such a short piece, but maybe PM is best, just in case.

kratos0294 wrote...
Oh, i was meaning to ask, shall i give you feedback from the first or second draft [smilie]http://social.bioware.com/images/forum/emoticons/sideways.png[/smilie] ?
Second draft would be good, thanks! Replaced the original on Dropbox, but link is
here if needed.
Modifié par hot_heart, 22 août 2012 - 10:00 .