Babi_Siha wrote...
Yes, she's out there, running from Cerberus and looking for her sister instead of doing something for the war.
Yeah, like I said, the dialogue lets it down. At points, it almost sounds like she was doing something mainly Cerberus-involved. The assassin stuff and the TIM stuff hint at that. But then it quickly takes a turn back to "..I need to do this myself. I can't think straight until Ori is safe."
A bit of tweaking could've shifted that focus to a more positive presentation, perhaps tying in the search to saying something like "I'll let you know if I find anything" since she's stumbled onto something bigger with the search for Oriana.
Then after that, just an extra email with some vague details she's learned about this 'project' her father is working on (nothing too explicit, but build intrigue), and then just assume she had no way to contact Shepard until it was too late. Hell, after Thessia, why couldn't she have said something like the fact that she's tracked it down to somewhere in the Iera system and has no time to lose(!) so is heading straight there? Rather than Sam's "Oh, by the way, I tracked Leng's ship" (not hating on Sam, by the way).
It just seems weird that she wouldn't have told Shepard what she was doing if it involved her father and TIM. I mean, she
loved writing reports!
Ah, why beat myself up over it... <_<