jtav wrote...
Okay, just finished playing through as both Paragon and Renegade. And it wasn't half-bad playing through mostly Renegade. The first thing that struck me is that Miranda really does believe in Cerberus as she understands it. The inflection in her voice doesn't match up with someone parroting what she's been told. Second, she is both angry and defensive about Teltin. This is *not* Cerberus as she understands it, and she won't be tarred with that brush, by Jack or you. The second thing is that Miranda is bitter as hell about her genes. Don't think I need to explain that. "The only thing I can take credit for are my mistakes" cuts like a sword. Both responses seem inadequate. I don't want to romance her, I want to hug her and tell her everything will be okay. There's also more than a whiff of "she has now acknowledged her place in the pecking order and is fit to be romanced." Or not, since the dialogue is identical for both genders up to this point.
But the Miranda that emerges from "You're jealous" is glorious. TVTropes calls this scene "Slap Slap Kiss" but I think they're wrong. There's no anger here, only good natured rivalry and teasing. And Miranda gets some of the fire back in her as she reminds Shepard what's she's done. Watch her body language as well: walking closer, not backing down. And despite what the wheel says, Shepard does not kiss her as much as they kiss each other. She's a willing participant in her own seduction. She isn't bowing to some irresistible tide of Shepard's power. Even in the aftermath, she's more exasperated than anything and has one last barb for Shep, a command no less. My reaction was wanting to tell the crazy kids to find a closet so they could make out.
I see we're 100% in agreement here. The line "The only thing I can take credits for are my mistakes" is the only one I don't like, but then, it's her defining flaw to be angry at her father for the wrong things and to not see that what she's done with her gifts more than makes up for any misgivings she might have. It is my no. 1 hope for ME3 that she'll overcome that self-destructive attitude, exorcize the ghost of her father and embrace what she is and who she is.
There's one Renegade option I don't like so much, that's the one leading to her saying "You're the best humanity has to offer". I don't quite recall if that's coupled with something I like, but IIRC I usually use the upper option there, and where Shepard says "The best thing he (TIM) did was to put you on my squad". The rest of this scene I use the lower options.
The scene with the kiss is really good, so much better than the alternative version that there's no comparison. The Paragon version is tame, she's quite a bit less confident and the only thing I miss is Shepard's "Yeah, he gave you gifts, but you can be proud of what you're done with them":